Why I chose this piece This came up on a random review
Overall impression of piece: Very evocative piece
Grammatical and spelling errors: I in last stanza needs a capital
What I liked? We are so very different. On the outside, it is obvious and if we look at individuals at this site, it is really apparent.
What I disliked: I have to accept you basic tenents, even if I don't agree. This is about writing, not philosophy. Is there something else, or will we be in a constant state of war?
How the piece made me feel You do have a world of endless war which, much as I hate to admit it, is pretty much what we have. We are in a more and more global world. Can we change? Should we
Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.
Peace and beauty in freefall