Why I chose this piece This came up on a random review and it interested me. I know what it is to wrestle with this.
Overall impression of piece Great advice. It is all there. In Hamlet, one of the characters suggests, "To thy own self be true
Grammatical and spelling errors. Reads well. No errors
What I liked?I can't go against any of the steps. Every step closer makes a beiver out of most.
What I disliked There is a whole lot of telling in this. The questions ecomes, "What does this feel like?" Hamlets quote belongs to a character that is pretty much an idiot.
How the piece made me feel Most people want to know how to get here emotionally. I stuggle here, too.
Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting.
Peace and beauty in freefall