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Review of Hunter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings,

I'm reviewing as a fellow member of the Promptly Poetry challenge.

You've handled the form well, weaving together an autumnal tale of a deer that escapes the hunter's bow. I don't believe in hunting myself, but I appreciate the feeling you've cultivated here, of the changing seasons and the timelessness of one moment frozen in stories passed down at the fireside.

I know forms can be frustrating, but I found this particular form to be much easier to write to than I was afraid of. It takes patience and care, but it's not impossible. You've done good here.

I would recommend adding two additional genres to the item so it can be found easily when browsing and also to ensure as many opportunities for Quill Award nominations as possible. You could use "Nature," "Environment," or "Animal."

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Review of Promptly 4 and 5  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings, Beholden!

Ah, this was clever. I didn't count the syllables, but I checked your rhymes as they wove skillfully throughout in the proscribed manner. You tell an all too relatable tale of inspiration slipping away with the rush and distractions of the day. I usually get my best writing done at night, when I should be sleeping. There's less fuss then, and the words fall together easier.

Nothing to fuss about here; I admire how handily you deal with all manner of challenges, whether stories or poems.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Greetings, and thank you for requesting a review. Yours is my 1,000th, so congrats on that *Laugh*

I'll get the proofreading out of the way first: the word for going down the side of a cliff is "rappelling," not "repelling."

This comes across as a rambling free verse poem, with sentences aligned neatly down the page with leading uppercase. I like that concept myself; sometimes there's nothing more relaxing and "freeing" than spilling out one's thoughts in casual, conversational narrative poetry, without care for rhyme or meter. I almost didn't pick up on the structure because I'm reading from my phone (where, believe it or not, about 85% of all my WdC work gets done *Shock2*)

The story itself is whimsical, almost a parody or satire, until one realizes by the end of it your idea came quite simply and literally from seeing a nice lady working at your local bank, or some such mundane real life event. You've let your imagination soar, forming a whole backstory around this lady and giving her an adoring Elvin entourage. You also provided the elves with a larger goal of making the world a better place, which is admirable. No one can argue with these magical creatures.

I observe there's a sharp gender role divide between the girls and boys, which comes across as a bit old-fashioned these days. I hope you don't mind me saying this, but I can't help picturing you as a somewhat crusty old white guy, loitering to chat with the pretty young gals at the bank and dreaming about them after you leave, blissfully unaware of being a slightly sexist nuisance. The gals are polite, but not impressed. I speak from decades of experience, firsthand and otherwise.

Having now dismayed you by stereotyping the living daylights out of you, I'll proceed with the review. I can see this as a fun little story you might tell the grandkids: "I met this beautiful, mysterious lady at the bank today... guess who she really is? The queen of the elves!" Or it could be turned into a fable on improving the way the world runs, which would be a rather tall order.

The idea of an ordinary lady who moonlights as the elf queen, guiding her subjects (she is aware of the elves and their actions, right?) is creative, with interesting potential for building other playfully surrealist folktales off of. I liked the thought of the goofy elf boys running through the streets not to make mischief but to do good, in impulsive and perhaps foolish ways, and the quiet, sensible girl elves following along covering their tracks and cleaning up their messes. One wonders what the boys would do without them.

On the whole, this was fun to read, and I'm not sure I know of anything to recommend changing. Your aim seems to have been to let out some fanciful thoughts which were bottled up in your head, without any particular storyline or overarching theme. In which case, I hope it's served its purpose well.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings,

I found this using the Random Read and Review Button.

Well, this is fun: a whimsically old-fashioned free verse poem about gals dancing. It's cute and creative, though I haven't the foggiest idea why it was written. Was it a celebration of French woman's soccer? Knowing nothing about sports, especially from before I was born, I can't comment there.

You have a relaxed and conversational tone, describing what went on at the moonlight party in the park. I especially like the phrase "the oaks grew lanterns;" that's such a pretty, fairytale way of describing the decorations. And the "waxy croissant moon" is a clever way to describe it "french-ly." Croissant is actually the French word for crescent... Duh *Laugh*

I might suggest you add two more relevant genres to help us understand the theme, and also to make it easier to find when browsing. Perhaps "Experience," "Sports," "Comedy," "Fantasy" or "Drama" would be suitable.

Other than that, I don't have any suggestions for improvement here. Interesting work.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Winklett!

Oh my, this is a good poem. I love the structure and the repetition of phrases with variations. You've put a lot of effort into building it this way... I'm not even sure what the requirements of a pantoum poem are *Laugh*

I fully understand your frustrations with the feeling of being unable to come up with something to write... Having a busy month dodging hurricanes, I hardly had time to write even one story in October, yet I need to write another one or else *Rolling*

Everything you've said is perfectly relatable; I don't watch TV, but I have the temptation to sit back and listen to my favorite music instead of writing "maybe if I hear a song it'll inspire me..." but I usually find the more music I listen to the less creative I am... It's as if my head gets filled with other people's thoughts instead of my own. Balancing my pastimes takes discernment. As a rule, a little music is a great thing for my imagination.

Anyway, I can see you didn't have writer's block when you wrote this splendid poem!I have nothing to suggest here. Great work *ThumbsUpGreen* *Writer*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings!

I found this by using the Random Read and Review Button in the middle of the night...

I see it's a blast from the past, updated most recently in May of this year but stretching back all the way to 2005. I love seeing the names of older members of the site; I spotted Allan Charles 🐾 Sick 🤒's former username, as well as a few familiar names both present and no longer with us. This log is valuable just to keep a memory of those names. Yellow Rose Author Icon is a White Case I'll have to visit. I haven't heard of them before.

That's a lot of GPs you've raised over the years for a good cause. I'm happy to have found this handy list. I noticed a few minor typos such as username codes misspelled, digits misplaced, etc. But it's the thought that counts.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

Well, this is a depressing thing to find on the Random Read and Review button *Laugh*

Seriously, you've chosen free verse poetry to deal with a serious and even morbid subject that many people around here prefer to avoid.

Your formatting is excellent, shifting the size font to suit the transition of narrative.

If you are dealing with the real pain and loss of life from a car accident, I extend my deepest condolences. Otherwise, it creates a deep metaphor for that sudden shift from from life into death that we all must face at some point. When I saw your title I remembered the old Rascal Flatts song... You may want to consider a different title, or perhaps your theme is deepened even further by the thought of being cut short as one travels life's broken road which should have led to something.

As is usual when I review poetry, I have nothing to suggest here for improvement. You've created a haunting and memorable poem suitable for the season.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*



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Review of The look of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, sir!

I've seen you long enough in the Newsfeed, now it's time to read something in your port, thanks to the Random Read and Review button.

Ah, a cozy kitten poem. What could be nicer? You encapsulate the cycle of life from beginning to end in a warm and simple way. We can almost experience the loving and trusting nature of the kitten as she grows up in the safety of your home.

The words are carefully balanced, and you taper down to the final realization of aloneness in two words at the end. One hopes you have a neverending houseful of kittens and cats.

As is usual when I review poetry, I have nothing to suggest. This is a nice memory of a special creature in your life.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Review of Irrelevant?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Greetings, Sonali!

I found this on the Random Read and Review button. What a fun story! You've created characters we want to root for and enjoy watching succeed in their endeavors. What could be more relatable than a grandma afraid to sing in front of an audience?

Anshul is a spunky dear who knows what's good for Granny. I love how you're comfortable with your own culture and use it unabashedly in your writing. The names, the big families, etc. People say WdC is a Western, US-centric place, but I find enough diversity to keep things fascinating and fun.

A delightful tale. I don't see anything much to correct. Perhaps the name Anshul could be introduced sooner rather than later.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I love a good nature poem, and this is exactly the kind of thing I look for. Your soothing, mellow verses describing nature's beauty and the peace you find in it are a wonderful work.

I see a few simple grammar errors; perhaps you could run it through Grammarly's free program to receive specific suggestions on plurals, commas and the like.

Other than that, I have nothing to suggest here. This would look lovely written out in fancy script and framed or hung on the wall or even just the refrigerator.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*



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Review of Christmas in July  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Beholden!

So this was your entry to the contest which was the very first one I entered upon joining... How nice to encounter it on Random Read and Review.

You incorporated the prompt words well, creating a quietly amusing little poem with a nice rhyme and meter. I chuckled about the socks; most people would like something fancy for a gift, and it's the great complaint of many a kid (including my mom) "all I got was underwear!" I hope you had generous Christmas gifts over the years.

As usual, I can't think of anything to suggest... Perhaps a more transcendent theme would add depth, but it's hardly needed.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Review of Sweet Sorrow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings Ken!

A lovely poem we have here, full of feelings and memories which linger in the narrator's mind. I appreciate the attitude of moving on but still holding the love which once was. It matters little who was in the wrong or why they parted, only that there was something and it's gone.

It reminds me of... Well, surely you don't care to know about the lead singer of *Think* *DragonHead* *DragonHeadB*. The maturation of thought and perspective here is universal, and this would make a good song.

I love the flow of your meter and verse, but one thing bugs me enormously: "I'd of." Surely you know it's "I'd have!" It wouldn't change anything to correct that pesky error, which causes me to subtract a half star from your otherwise flawless rating.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Tim!

We meet again for another rollicking rhyming adventure via the Random Read and Review button.

This is hilarious. It reminds me of the type of story an old friend of mine would write: naive guy gets tricked by a clever pretty gal. You've put it into poetry in excellent fashion, giving us a tale which keeps us at the edge of our seats as we wonder what untoward thing might happen next.

Serves him right, for sure. I love how nothing nasty actually happened. You dealt with the subject humorously and tastefully, giving us a chuckle and a lesson on life.

Nothing to suggest here; I thoroughly enjoyed this one.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Tim!

As always, I found this through the Random Read and Review button. I love finding your tidy and thoughtful poetry.

This sporting theme which then relates to the grander contest of life and spirituality runs deep in biblical literature. St Paul used the ancient Greek sports culture to illustrate how important it is to strive for that which we desire, and to pour ourselves humbly into good works so we may be richly rewarded and honored.

Your meter is excellent, alternating rhymes in a way which is neither trite nor annoying. I have nothing to suggest. Great work *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Review of Arkansas  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings, Lou!

An amusing slice of life we have here, bringing us a vignette of a trip through Arkansas back to Texas. We see your disdain for what little you've seen of the state.

I have to disagree with your evaluation, as my mom likes to tell me of what a beautiful state it was when she was there thirty years ago. Little Rock was a fine, safe city, where she and my father could walk around in the wee hours delivering papers in perfect safety.

The free verse is conversational and chatty, leading us casually through your memory and nudging us quickly to the interstate before we have a chance to question your viewpoint or ask for proof. I sense a bit of humor, however *Smile*

I have nothing to suggest for improvement, unless asking for a better indication of why you didn't like Little Rock *Laugh*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings, Sunny!

I’m here as a fellow member of the PPC5 project.

A fun, honest and open free verse poem dealing with the subject at hand. You treat it almost as a journal entry, with a casual and chatty tone. We see you get excited about some of the foods you love, and by the end of it we can agree that yes, there are far too many delicious foods in the world to simply pick one.

I like the free flowing style you’ve chosen; it was easy to read. Where you say “from steak to Italian” you spelled “too” instead of “to.” The sentences kind of run together, but this is a whimsical stylistic choice and I wouldn’t critique it as such *Smile*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings, Ned!

You've captured the essence of a cool rainy day here, with easy, conversational free verse which draws us invitingly along on the journey through foggy memories of the attempt to write something.

I was just thinking about the Mamas and Papas song Monday Monday, not in connection with this prompt, but rather for Jeff's "Resurrection JukeboxOpen in new Window. where I had to compile a list of (and write coherently about) song from eras I'm not that "into". I decided to write about "Creeque AlleyOpen in new Window. instead of the Monday song.

Anyway, I enjoyed reading this poem. It reminded me of my own writing style, and it creates a comfortable picture in the mind.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Review of Cinnamon Toast  Open in new Window.
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Greetings, Fyn!

Ah, the warmth and comfort you've captured here is delightful. All the little details come together to create that sense of hygge, from your grandma's spice shaker to the pets, the kids, munchies and books by the fireplace.

Everything's good here; I usually don't have anything to offer to improve on poetry, as I consider it an artistic and highly subjective art form. I enjoyed reading about the personal moments of love and memories associated with your favorite food.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings, Ned!

I’m here as a fellow member of the PPC5 project.

Your poem checks off all the boxes perfectly: a snapshot moment, nature imagery, and the correct syllable counts. I’m having lots of fun reading everyone’s creations for this assignment, and yours is great. We all know the cats watching birds outside the window, and it becomes relatable and amusing here. You even added a different angle with the pun in the title.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Review of Promptly 4 and 5  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings, Beholden!

I’m here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge, to review your work.

Has anyone else aside from me found it hard to settle on just one Kimo? I wrote not one but four. Once I got the hang of the syllables - honestly, syllable counting is getting easier for me each time I sit down and try. I used to say rather “proudly” in my reviews that I detest counting syllables and fussing over form, but practice makes better… now I’m considering trying my hand at a sonnet for "Poetic Traditions Poetry Contest Open in new Window.. Why not?

Anyway, this hits the nail on the head, capturing a universal moment of sheer physics in a crisply photographic way and sticking to the requirements. I’ve watched many a water drop make the precipitous journey from the tip of the tap down into the sink. As a child I was fascinated by such simple things and learned a lot from them. On YouTube we can even watch cats playing with and staring at water drops.

Have fun with your project! I’m looking forward to reading and reviewing more of your work over the coming months.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Greetings!

I’m here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge *Smile*

I like how you’ve captured your thoughts on a current and sensitive topic. It’s like a quick notebook scribble, a moment’s observation, without being overly dramatic or taking any particular side.

Now, I don’t know if you care or not, and I don’t usually fuss about poetry, but I do have a few humble suggestions here. It appears, according to my count, that your syllables are off from the form requirements. The first line is 11 syllables, the second is 7 (correctly) but the third is also 7. The initials J. D. should count for two syllables, as they are pronounced as two words. Also, your "Walz" autocorrected to "Waltz," which is understandable.

Other than that, it's fine. I used to detest counting syllables myself; with the help of this poetry project, I'm getting more patient with it.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Review of Pie charts  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I see you’re off to a good start, with one item in your port. This looks like a school project, describing a pie chart which we don’t actually have access to on this site. If you want, you can use the chart in question as the cover for this item. Or if this is simply a requirement of posting publicly, assigned by your teacher, then you hardly need our advice.

You’ve described the chart well, pulling the stats from the image and sharing them with us along with simple interpretations. I have two suggestions: you should perhaps correct or take a second look at the subtitle, as it appears to have a typo in it. Second, you should perhaps change your selected genre from “Writing.com” to “Educational.”

Aside from that, it looks great! Best of luck around here. If you’re planning to stay and add more content, I would recommend writing a little something about yourself in your bio block.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*



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Greetings,

We meet again, this time with the help of the Random Read and Review button.

I enjoyed reading this vivid description of an adventure through the jungle. I appreciated the brevity of it. This would be considered a vignette, I believe, although there is some rise and fall of action as the man follows the trail. You made the experience come alive with specific details which engaged the senses, such as the scents of the environment and the sight of the beer cans stuck in the dried out riverbed. There’s enough here for a longer story; it feels like a sample of something quite exciting.

Perhaps a word count in the subtitle would be good so we know what we’re getting into. And again, I’ll remind you gently to add two relevant genres to the item, though your window for Quills is past with this one. You could use “Nature,” “Drama” or “Thriller/Suspense.” Other than that, I can’t think of any suggestions for improvement.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Review of Funny World  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings,

I noticed this on my sidebar and thought it looked like a good read. You have proven me right *Smile*

Such a good story, quite realistic and indeed it feels like a true story, but I don’t suppose it is. On the other hand, things like this are quite possible. I love the hopeful ending and the wry humor of how the guy wants the cat to be safe even though he’s in such a precarious position himself. The moments of peace after everyone settled down on the side of the bridge were quite something.

I would suggest adding two more relevant genres for at least a couple good reasons. One, it will help people find your story when browsing through the site, and two, it gives us as many opportunities as possible to nominate your item for Quill Awards. I would recommend “Philosophy,” “Drama,” or “Emotional.” Another thing, I think the sentence about the statistic of people diving off the dark side got a little mixed up; you may want to rephrase it for clarity. The man finds it sad that the one person chose the dark side, not that everyone else did, right?

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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Review of Emergency Escape  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Greetings, Johnny, and thank you for requesting a review.

I really enjoyed this. I can see you put a good bit of thought into the three things Samson chose to take with him, and it looks like it would make not only a great flash fiction but also the introduction to an exciting series or longer story.

Now, the first thing I noticed is your title… I think the word “emergency” is misspelled.
Second, I noticed you used at least three different words to identify Samson’s mom: “mums,” “mama,” and “mother.” Also, in the second paragraph she’s named Amber and in the next one she’s Samantha. Is the “mama” his grandmother? I know people use a ton of different pet names for their grannies, and it gets confusing sometimes, “Nana” and “Nona” and “gran-gran” and all that. You need to specify who she is exactly.
Third, I didn’t quite catch what exactly the “hiking and hunting trips” were for if not for “hiking and hunting…” how exactly did Samson’s father misunderstand the purpose of them? I should think a sturdy knife would always be a good idea out in the wilderness (not that the Welsh wilderness is as threatening as the American version, I’m sure *Laugh*)

Aside from that, this was well written and an excellent little read.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*



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