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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice suspense. Well done.
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Review of Puzzled  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ver nice. It reminded me of a song by Bobby Darin - Eighteen Yellow Roses. But I enjoyed your version also.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very moving and expressive. Thanks for sharing/
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jaya, I have read several of your poems and I am humbled. You are definitely on a higher level of consciousness than I.
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Review of Beggar Child  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! You write with a tremendous passion. I read this poem a couple of times - it's disturbing but compelling at the same time.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this. Nice imagery. Could feel the longing and nostalgia.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (4.5)
Okay, I'm getting into the story and want to see where it goes. You defined your main character very well and now I'm interested.
You do have some grammatical issues, nothing serious.
("wander" instead of "wandering", toward the end, and "as satanic". shortly after that)
But you did throw me off with the train trip - an eight hour trip leaving at six and arriving at midnight? You might adjust that.
I am looking forward to reading more.
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Review of A Blade of Grass  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like this. Great imagery. Nice rhyme and meter. And, of course, a message to think about.
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Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
These poems are fun, but I also admire the rhythm and rhymes you use. Well crafted and totally enjoyable.
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Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Always enjoy reading your works. In fact, you are my favorite.
(Please note, you have a typo in the next to last sentence - "For I was born and I will die")
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Review of Cold Snap  
Review by Norman
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi. I've read a number of your humorous poems and enjoyed every one. Thanks.
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Review of Summer Harvest  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey, you left out pumpkins.. Nice job, good rhythm and rhyme.
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Review of Sweet Peggy Lee  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
So in my poem I dreamed of Elvis and in yours you dreamed of Peggy Lee. Maybe we're on the same wave length. Nice job. I like your rhyming and rhythm.
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Review of Darla  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay, I see there is only one rating for this item and it is three stars. Really? This is very good. Having owned a Golden Retriever that died, this was very touching.
I read several other short stories that you wrote, and I envy you. I am lousy with dialogue, but you excel at it.
Very enjoyable.
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Review of Honest Effort  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your poems - succinct and the point, and still thoughtful. Nice rhythm and rhyme too.
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Review of 911  
Review by Norman
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is very dramatic and, in fact, heart-rending. But if this is only the first chapter of a book, you packed a hell of a lot into it. I suggest you stretch things out a bit, slow things down. Maybe spend more time on your own life and your current situation, or your relationship with Kane. (And there are a couple of grammatical errors - nothing big. "The firemen have to tell Kane and I", should say "Kane and me", and "This poor boy needs Kane and I", should be "Kane and me".
Very interesting and I would like to see where you are going.
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Review of Dream  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice. I like not only the message, but also the rhythm and rhyme and the beginning of each verse,
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have read a bunch of your short stories as well as more than a few of your poems. I love your imagination and humor. Glad to read your stuff.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
We had a tree like this nearby our previous home. Even after it had long died, people would pull over to the side of the road to take pictures of what had once been a big, beautiful tree, standing alone in a cow pasture. Then it became a solemn monument until nature finally claimed it. Nicely written.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I haven't seen a clothesline in quite some time and I have to admit I never was aware of the etiquette involved. I found your article amusing, interesting and, in some ways, actually profound. It opens up a Pandora's box about society and culture - right here in our own backyards. Very nice.
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Review of A Sparkly Day  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I read a number of your short stories and I admire your imagination. I'm not into SciFI, but I'm impressed with your variety of writings. I enjoy your works. Thanks.
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Review by Norman
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very moving. I like rhythm and rhyme of your poem and could feel the movement of the train in your lyrics. The image is very clear. Very well done.
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Review of Oak and mistletoe  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I visited Stonehenge some years ago on a trip to England and I was amazed. The tour guide said we would spend an hour there and I thought that would be much too long. But I was entranced. I couldn't stop staring at the stones. I don't know what attracted me so much, but I was mesmerized. It was the highlight of the trip.
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Review of THE POEM  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Clever and entertaining. (And sometimes we get consumed by our own poems.)
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Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I read this a couple of times because it pulls you in. Makes you think about a lot of things.
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