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Review of The Caring. Soul  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very touching story. And very courageous of the woman to give up her bed to help another. It is heartwarming to know there are people like that.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
This certainly is a different version of the tale. Nicely done. Good rhyming, but also good rhythm. Very enjoyable.
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Review of Dead Rat  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Well this is truly disgusting. Very well done.
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Review of Imponderables  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Yeah, I can see myself doing this - watching and wondering. You had me with you.
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Review by Norman
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! I'm impressed. All those poems and humor too. Nicely done.
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Review of Farewell  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very enjoyable. Every kid wants to play some major league sport, but in reality, it is the most stressful job you can find. Every day could be your last. Nicely written.
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Review by Norman
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Love it. Great word play.
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Review of Classified  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay, that was funny. Didn't see that coming.
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Review of Tears at Dawn.  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a lovely poem. I especially like the line The misty dawn is full of tears, crying in the rain.. Very poetic, very powerful.
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Review of The Homeless Man  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Okay, I admit it - the bread pudding pulled me in. I checked out your profile and I'm glad I did because this item is inspirational. I am impressed by what you have accomplished and you should be proud of yourself. The homeless issue continues to be a major concern everywhere. I understand that Denver has tried a different approach. They built clean, comfortable apartments for the homeless. It is a financial, as well as humanitarian, decision. They realized it costs more to treat the homeless when they are on the streets than if they had reasonable accommodations. I don't know how the program is going, but I wish them success.
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Review of Dream Catchers  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I think we could all use dream catchers. I enjoyed reading about them.
(I just finished the latest book by William Kent Krueger. Some of his main characters and plots concern Ojibwe people. I think you would like them.)
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Review of The Bookstore Cat  
Review by Norman
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You're either a cat person or you're not. The first step is to realize that they are not at all like dogs. Once you accept them for what they are, you can get along fine with them.
Thoroughly enjoyable.
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Review of A foggy day  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
HollyMerry, you are quite the poet. I write silly rhymes while you create sensational poems. I enjoyed this very much.
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Review of My 21st Birthday  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I always make it a point to read items from the portfolio of whoever reads and reviews my stuff. And I always try to find something to review in return. I am always hoping to be able to return a 5-star rating. You made it easy with this one. If this is truly non-fiction, then it is truly inspirational. Great story and I'm glad things worked out for you. (I hate peas - always pick them out from soup and potpies.)
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Review of Ruminations  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very eloquent. You have created many images of beauty and sensitivity. Very well done.
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Review of Push  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hah! Clever and amusing. I enjoyed reading it. Short stories are hard but you delivered a very nice one.
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Review of Our Escape  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice - good rhythm and rhyme (AABB can be difficult to maintain), and very good story. (One suggestion - first stanza - "pass on" instead of "pass in".)
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Review of Chess Pieces  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Clever and fun to read. I enjoyed this.
One comment - you may have a typo where you say They'll surely be a raid. You may want There'll instead of They'll.
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Review of Helping Mother  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I liked this. Very enjoyable - and a lesson worth following. Good rhyming scheme. Regarding the rhythm, I would make one suggestion. Instead of It's actually something very grand, try It actually is something very grand.. It flows a little easier.
Or just ignore me. I hate it when someone gives me advice like this and I'll bet you do too. I really did like your poem.
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Review of Abby  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
We've had two wonderful dogs and we still miss them after many years. After they passed, the worst time was when we came in the door and they were not there to greet us. Nice sentiments and well done,
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Review of My Mother  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very touching and heartfelt. My only suggestion is to bump up the print size - maybe 4.5.
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Review of More Lysol!  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Another good one. Easy to read and entertaining.
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Review of Room to Rent  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I like it. Cute story with good rhythm and rhyme. Fun to read.
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Review of The Plumber Geek  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very clever. Nice job with the rhyming.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very humorous. Nicely done.
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