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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very humorous. Nicely done.
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Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very timely ... and disturbing. I haven't read 1984 in a long time, but I should probably re-read it now.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Interesting article. Most people seem to be either dog people or cat people, but I like both. You just have to understand them and don't expect a cat to act like a dog. I have written multiple poems about dogs, but also three poems about cats. Thanks for sharing this.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hey, I really liked this. Nice story, nice presentation. Gives one something to think about.
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Review of Stars  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nicely done. I've also written about stars, but this makes me think of them differently.
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Review of Snow Flurry  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (4.5)
Janina, You certainly present a good image of someone snuggling up inside a warm house on a wintry day, just watching the snow fall and lost in thought. Very enjoyable. And I noted that you use the rhyming pattern ABAB, which can be tricky.
I have one poem about sledding and one about skiing:
Sledding!
Downhill Racer
Keep writing,
Jim
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Review of Sunrise  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Janina, As you know, poems don't have to rhyme. That is just my failing that that is all I can do.

Your poem is very descriptive and gives depth, definition, texture and flavor to a sunrise that is a treat. Very nicely done.

Jim
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Review of Reynolds  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Entertaining and easy reading. Very nice.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
To my understanding, there are three basic elements to writing rhymes: the rhyming pattern, the rhythm and the story itself. You have nailed all three in this delightful poem. (I have read numerous poems of yours and they are all excellent.) I like the rhyming pattern, the rhythm is consistent, and the story is very amusing. Nicely done.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very uplifting and inspirational - something we all need in these times. Thanks for sharing it.
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Review of Trapped  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
You had me rooting for the fly - imagine that! Fun to read. Thanks.
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Review of I Saw a Dragon  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
You are the most amusing and entertaining author that I have found. I always make a point of reading some articles in another writer's portfolio if they have reviewed one of my works - returning the compliment. I search for some poem or story that I can reward with five stars. Sometimes I just come up empty. But you have one terrific poem after another. I really applaud you.
I also like that you have a different rhyming scheme in this poem from the others that I've read. And, of course, I found the story delightful.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like it! Amusing and enjoyable to read. Who, indeed, are we to dismiss Pluto so carelessly?
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting and enlightening. Thanks.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
With just a few words you have created a vibrant scene. Very nice.
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Review of Ring Rusted  
Review by Norman
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I have to admit I have no idea what you are talking about some of the time, but this is still entertaining.
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Review of Ring Rusted  
for entry "1989 - Football Crazy
Review by Norman
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
You have a unique, and entirely enjoyable, perspective with your background in wrestling. I saw the movie with Mickey Rourke many years ago. Your game may have been fixed, but still very dangerous. This was a fun read.
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Review of I Killed Grandma  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Funny. Reminded me of the book Eats, Shoots and Leaves.
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for entry "Complimentary Closing
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I'm really not much of a fan of free-form poetry. (I always attempt to use rhythm and rhyme - one of my many shortcomings.). But I looked through your portfolio and discover this poem and I really like it. Very nice - although very sad and depressing too.
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Review by Norman
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hey, tell me how you really feel...
Nicely done.
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Review of The Apple Scale  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
You're just a wealth of knowledge.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
It is extremely discouraging when the people that should protect, support and represent you are the very ones who will cause you harm. Good luck with this situation.
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Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very well written. I have spent too much time in Brooklyn bars in my past, but never have I experienced someone this this. (Maybe I just don't remember. That can happen.)
Where I create rhymes, you are a true poet.
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Review of Raindrops  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nicely done. You paint a lovely picture.
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Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very amusing and well spoken. You do have a gift for description and metaphor. (And it sounds like you have more patience than I do about reviewing.)
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