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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good one!
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Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
More true today than ever. You might consider updating this. You could go on, and on, and on...
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Review by Norman
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Very entertaining. Thanks.
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Review of I'd Rather Be  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very enjoyable. I liked the rhythm and the rhyme, but I also enjoyed the story. Nice imagination and presentation. Thank you.
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Review of The Night Road  
Review by Norman
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Nicely done. You build up the suspense, so even though we think we know what is coming, you still surprise us.
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Review of The ABC Burger  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
"Where's the beef?" Doesn't look like there is any room left.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your prose is actually quite poetic. You certainly create a scene, an atmosphere, that is very moving.
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Review by Norman
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is actually quite interesting. I enjoyed reading it. Growing up in New York and riding the subways to work, I would often see performers, but I never gave them much thought. Assuming this is factual, I wish you all the best.
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Review of Drumpf Jokes  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Thanks for the laughs.
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Review of Writing a Novel  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Enjoyed this a lot. Very humorous and well written.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very well done. Keep on writing.
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Review of Love Slips Away  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Some strong emotions here - you can feel the pain. Nice.
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Review of Where did she go?  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is very well written, but also quite disturbing. At my age, this is too close for comfort.
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Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very entertaining. Would be even funnier if it wasn't mostly true.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Funny. I love a gotcha moment.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sounds like it would make a great children's book. Very nice.
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Review of My Darkest Secret  
Review by Norman
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is true? That's a lot to experience so young.
Regarding the writing, you have a couple of spelling errors (decision and sane). Bad spelling or grammar detracts from the story.)
However, the story is intense and absorbing.
Keep writing to express yourself.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very interesting. I had heard about the statue to Chief Crazy Horse but had forgotten about it. I will have to read more about it, and If I ever make the trip to South Dakota I will make sure to visit it. Thank you.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this. There's all the anxiety and stress - that's clear. But I especially like how you constructed the second and third verses from the lines of the first, and carry the last line along, emphasizing the theme. Nice.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice suspense. Well done.
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Review of Puzzled  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Ver nice. It reminded me of a song by Bobby Darin - Eighteen Yellow Roses. But I enjoyed your version also.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very moving and expressive. Thanks for sharing/
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Jaya, I have read several of your poems and I am humbled. You are definitely on a higher level of consciousness than I.
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Review of Beggar Child  
Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! You write with a tremendous passion. I read this poem a couple of times - it's disturbing but compelling at the same time.
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Review by Norman
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this. Nice imagery. Could feel the longing and nostalgia.
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