Hello Guriya, I am your reviewer today, ljsanoe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I found this item on writing.com's read and reviewing list. I thought that this wss a well written piece of writing. his is a Spiritual poem and I love that. thank you for sharing this item with us. God Bless You.
Hello Jatog the Green, I am your reviewer today Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewer Group. I thought that this was a well written little story-poem. This is from the Superman fame. The mild manner reporter and his lovely gal,
Lois Lane. Thanks for sharing this piece of writing with us. God Bless You.
Hello {suser:(beyondwords}, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I think that your writing is "beyond words"!
It is so lovely, I can so much envision the beautiful rose streaked sky of which you describe. It is a lovely description indeed.You have heard about writer's painting pictures with their words, well you are Van Goh or some very artistic fellow who has created a masterpiece with mere words. Thank you for sharing and God Bless You.
Hello Beholden, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers. I found this item on writing.com's read and review page.I thought that this was so interesting and for me, educational. Your poetry is very good, I am surprised you didn't get first place. You deserve all of the recognition you get from this item, it is very well done.
Hello MirandaCookies COLLEGE SOON, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I came across this item on the read and review items list. This is the perfect time for such a dynamic poem, it tells it like it is.
Hate is running ramped in this Nation and it doesn't help that we have leaders who insight it. Your poem sadly is true and there is a division in our nation right now. I look forward to the day when we have one type of person A loving, caring, decent, and acceptable person of any color. Let us call that person an American. with pride not shame.
love each other, God is our Father and He created us all. God bless You.
Hello Tinker, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewer Group. I came across this little poem on the read and review items list. I am so sorry to hear of this fall, I bet it was very painful. It is a good thing to joke about it and lighten the mood. You should be more careful though.
This shows excellent poetic writing skills. Thank you for sharing this item with me.
God Bless You.
Hello Khatib, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I thought that this was a well-rounded piece of writing. It makes sense and is important reading. You did a good job at creating a couple of really good quotes. Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, God Bless You.
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I found this item on the read and review items list, and I thought I'd read it. I found this to be very educational and important reading for everybody. I love wildlife and nature and you have put together an important list for us to familiarize ourselves with. Thank you for sharing this wonderful list with us.. God Bless You.
Hello Eduard Karlov, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I came across this item on the read and review item list.
I thought that this was profound and interesting. I really didn't get the last line, but it is probably just me. Thank you for sharing this piece of yourself with me. God Bless You
Hello DragonBlue, I came across this item on the read and review Items list, I am with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" . I thought this was a well written poem and I truly enjoyed reading it. I did not read the other parts but this poem is a nice piece of writing. Thank you for sharing it with me today. may God Bless You!
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am here with the "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" to give you a review of this piece. I have never had a purple car, though I suppose it could be pretty cool. I would like to have a navy blue beetle bug by Volkswagen. I now have a black Nissan Sentra. I also have a yellow, Plymouth duster from 1971. but then again it was stolen... your writing is very good,
cars broke down and couldn’t be fix or cost too much for me to fix it one my friends would take piety on me and buy me a used car.
If I were you in the first sentence above, I would add an (ed) on to fix to make it fixed.
and also I would add the word of before the word my... also remove the letter e from the word pity.
Hey there sum1swritikng, I am here with the WDC Power Reviewers Group, I just read this item and I was truly touched by your words. You are surely creative and artistic. I thought that this item was so very sad. I thought that the title is appropriate for the item. I also thought that the item description is helpful. The grammar and the spelling are both also very good.
Hello SusanFarmer, I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am with the WDC Power Reviewers this evening. I thought that this was a well-written piece of poetry. I believe it is called a senyru form, which is very similar to a Haiku. Both are from the Orient. I have apple trees in my yard and I love the beautiful blossoms,
Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating, I am your reviewer, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am affiliated with the WDC Power Reviewers Group this evening. I thought that this item is a very well balanced and nicely written piece. First of all, I don't believe you are seventy are you?
I never dreamed of it. The smartest thing anyone could do is to leave their cares in God's hands. It doesn't pay to worry, for sure.
Hello patricia1962, I am your reviewer, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ with the Power Reviewers this evening. I thought that this was a very well written piece of writing.
What we are taught while we grow in years is very important,it establishes what type of person we will become. Will you be warm, loving, caring, generous, and accepting?
or will you be cold, hateful, selfish, prejudice, and the like? The people we come in to contact within our early life establishes what we learn from them and therefore, what type of person we will become. Thanks for an insightful piece of writing.
Hi Oddman, my name is Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ , I am your reviewer this evening.
I see that this is neither a story nor a poem, or a chapter, but instead, it looks to be a quote!
"Spend your money for survival.
Spend your thoughts for real living."
This actually makes a lot of sense.
The title, "What's what," is very appropriate for this quote.
good quote
First Impression: Hello dragonblue, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I can really appreciate your talent, your story poem was well created and I thought you worked hard on it.
The story was good and interesting and very creative, I liked that you are not afraid to use your imagination. I loved the idea behind your story and yoy are a good writer.
Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing, I wish the best
in your writing endeavors.
Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
gee, this is such a lovely poem and I was flabbergasted by the fact I inspired you!
You are such a talented poet and all of your work is so professional and good.
I never see mistakes and you always have good subject matter of which to write on.
I have trouble thinking about what subject to write about.
Thanks your friend, Lisa Noe
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Hello Sorji, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: The structure is just one long paragraph or verse.
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Theme: The theme is about the eclipse of 2017 in the Midwest.
Flow: It flowed well and had good grammar and spelling, it is a free verse poem.
punctuation: There was no punctuation for this item, which is quite alright.
tone: the tone is exciting
Title: The title, "A Great Small Difference," is unusual as great can also mean large yet you say small difference... I know that you probably mean wonderous (great).
Suggestions: I thought that this was a well written piece of literature.
Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Hello Sumojo, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
Structure: this item was created using eight stanzas
I just loved this little poem,
Theme: the theme was a dragon hiding under the bed and stealing candy
Flow: I thought the flow of this poem was excellent as was the rhythm and rhyme. It also had good grammar and the spelling was correct.
punctuation: The punctuation appears to be correct to me.
tone: the tone is loving and warm.
Title: The title, "Purple Dragon," is appropriate for the story poem.
Suggestions: This was a wonderfully well written poem and a nice story at that. I want to let you know about a contest that is especially for story-poems,
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Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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