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Review of Sweet Sixteen  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Gasper , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary This late evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. tomorrow is Independence day so Happy Independence day as well.
The title of your poem, "Sweet Sixteen," is very appropriate as it is the age of which your sister lost her life. I think that the item description is helpful to the reader of this poem, and helps them to understand what the poem is about. If it does not then the Author's note should help to explain about your sister having an aneurysm and brain cancer her whole life. I think that this is a very sad story indeed. You tell a very sad story about your sister's last day on earth. I bet it is a very hard thing for you and your entire family to have to deal with. I will pray for you all tonight as I am sure this is hard on you. I saw a couple of little mistakes with your work.

plaining to any god that would listen that yes, she was sick but look how much she was worth.

God should always be capitalized, and so should the pronoun I, in referring to one's self.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this was an amusing little tale. I recall my cousin did the same thing as that little girl did back in the day, in the 1980s. She got in trouble by the Sisters who ran the school.
I personally was very shy and would be way too embarrassed to do that.
I think the title was very clever and for a young man that must have been a treat!


*Poseyp*Suggestions: I didn't really see any mistakes with this item, I thought that it is well written,

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of Our New Birth  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Stallion , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this beautiful morning love, I do so hope that you are having a very blessed day today. I thought that this essay or whatever type of writing it is
it is very well written. I thought it was a great subject matter for us to explore. I never thought of us as being angry as little babies coming into the world for the first time, I never really n to think about it before either. When a baby is first born it is a swat on the bottom for it as the first interaction with humanity. So it learns about violence and anger right off. I think you are correct the baby has been safe and protected by its mother's stomach. When it comes out into the world it knows fear and anger to have to leave it's safety. Then it is immediately hit on the bottom. Lord what a poor little babe.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Hitchhiker  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Eliot , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary This beautiful morning, I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today.
I read your little poem two times to really get the full meaning and feeling of it.
I thought that the title that you gave it, " Hitchhiker," was very appropriate for the item, as that is what the whole entire poem was about, hitchhiking.
I see you have won a pretty yellow ribbon for writing this item, congratulations on that. I thought that what you wrote for the item description was very helpful to the reader of this poem. it tells the reader that the narrator is impoverished and has no independence as far as travel goes. I think the last line was, to me, the most telling of all of them. as it made me see that your destination was really up to the driver of the car you got a ride with. You are dependent on them.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello ivesixer, I'd like to wish you a very happy account
I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed and good day today.
I thought that this was an awesome song or set of lyrics. I really do think you chose correctly when you entitled the item, I really do believe that it is a good title, "Proper Condemnation," is an appropriate name for the item.
I also think you did a super job creating the item description, I think that it tells well what the poem is going to be about to the reader. You created this piece of writing using three verses and then a repetition of the refrain. I think that you did a great job creating this song. I am curious to what it would sound like if someone sang it out loud to us. Myself I have never been any good at writing lyrics or songs of any kind. I can't even think of a subject to write about lol.
"thank you for sharing this item with me I your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Jesus  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hello Stallion , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morning. I do so hope that you are having a wonderfully blessed day today.
I so much loved your poem, it is a beautiful tribute to our Lord Jesus Christ, my master and King. Our beautiful savior, you have given credit in a wonderful way I think. Your title, "Jesus", is just perfect and so very appropriate for this item,
I think you have written a great item description describing what the poem will be about, it is very helpful to the reader of the item. The poem has a terrific rhythm, it actually sounds more like song lyrics, with all the repetition, which I personally thought helped the sound of the poetry. I also thought that the poem flowed so very well from the first word to the last. I am a Christian and it makes me proud to see a fellow Christian write something which Honors Jesus so much.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Don Two , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
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*Think* Structure: this item is structure using just one verse,

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme Cabin Fever

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and the grammar was good as was the spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is good as far as I can tell,

*Sun* tone: anxious

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "In this House with Fever", is appropriate especially since the Virus is running rapidly.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think you did a great job creating this and I think we can all relate to it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Apparitions  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello T.L.Finch , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: created using four quatrains

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Apparitions showing up on the river's edge.


*Moon* Flow: the poem flowed well and had good rhythm and a good story.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I will let other's tell you about the punctuation as I am not well versed on it.

*Sun* tone: spooky

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Apparitions", is appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this was a well-written piece I like it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Both roles  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello A.M , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This structure is a very different one, it contains:
one septet,, one tercet, one couplet and one single line.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: This is about one person wearing two hats as Mom and Dad.


*Moon* Flow: This item flows well and I bet it was hard to create the broken English.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: exhausting

*Strawberry* Title: The title, " Both Roles", this is appropriate for this item.

*Dragonflyp* Image:*StarfishB* Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with any of your work.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: created using ten
stanzas of various number of lines... quatrains, tercets, and couplets.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Opposing the second lockdown

*Moon* Flow: This poem flowed well, but I found it a bit difficult to understand and follow well. It may be just my fault but I had difficulty with this one.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct as far as I could tell, I am not that well versed in this area, so you might get someone else with this.

*Sun* tone: I have a difficult time discerning this.

e:strawberry} Title: The title,"The Calendar's Asymmetry: A Road Taken,"
This title is a bit long also.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: You usually write such good poetry and this one is good as well, However I am having difficulty with it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello amrighter, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

{e:t{e:Butterfly2r} Theme:hink} Structure: this poem is structured using
three quatrains and one tercet.

*Moon* Flow: This item flows very well, it has good grammar and spelling, and I think you put a lot of effort into it.
*Sun* tone: comfortable tone.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Alone In the Silence ReWrite", I think I would have said: Alone in the Silence, A rewrite.
I added the comma and the word A and lowercase rewrite.
but that's just me, You do what suits you best.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I read both poems and I liked the rewrite best. it shows more effort I thought. The theme of this item was silence and being alone.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Prism Pat  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Don Two , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured with six quatrains, which equals twenty-four lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: glitter explodes and looks like a disco ball

*Moon* Flow: this item flowed well with a good rhythm the spelling and vocabulary were also well done.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation seems to be correct as well.

*Sun* tone: the tone is smooth

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Prism Pat," is very appropriate for this item.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envisio0n the glitter exploding everywhere.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a well-written poem and I did not see any outstanding mistakes in it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Hallow Feign  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Don Two , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This poem is structured using only two stanzas of a various number of lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: what goes on on Halloween

*Moon* Flow: the poem flows well and uses strange vocabulary.

*Exclaim* grammar, spelling: the spelling and grammar seem to be correct.

*Sun* tone: eery, "

*Dragonflyp* Title: The title, " Hallow Feign", is a play on words and is creative. it is Halloween.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a well done Halloween item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello netty, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: just written in a verse very simple and plain

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Speaking of God

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well with a good rhythm.

*Exclaim* punctuation: punctuation was lightly used but correct.

*Sun* tone: loving and strong

*Strawberry* Title: thetitle of this poem, "When I Speak of HIM", I like how you honor our God by putting HIM in all caps. it shows great respect on your part.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I do have a suggestion for you, I think that all of the pronouns which refer to God should be capitalized.
like He, His, and Him. just as God should always be and Lord, and so on. I thought that this was a beautifully written and respectful piece of literature, I loved it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Beholden , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is structured in one long verse or stanza of
twenty lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: a poem of love and the one who got away, spoiler alert it wasn't the girl.

*Moon* Flow: this poem flowed very well and had a nice rhythm. you used good grammar as well.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to the best of my knowledge the punctuation was correct.

*Sun* tone: romantic

*Strawberry* Title: The title of this item, "The One that Got Away", is very appropriate and tells what the poem will be about.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I saw a misspelled word:


my last defence,

The word is spelled defense.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Paths  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.5)



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Hello DoXx, The Renegade Monkey , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This item is structured using five stanzas of various lengths.
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*Butterfly2r* Theme: knowing what path to choose.

*Moon* Flow: this poem is a little broken up, it seems it could read more smoothly.
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*Exclaim* punctuation: You really do need to use some punctuation with this particular poem. it may stop the confusion and make it a little smoother,

*Sun* tone: confused

*Strawberry* Title: "Paths" is the title and I think it is a really good title and very appropriate for the item.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I saw a few mistakes which you really should fix.

Is there anything to even loose anymore
In the above sentence, the correct word is lose...
not loose...


That right now just seems to bright

In the above sentence the correct word is too not to

I think this shows that you really put a lot of effort in writing this poem, and the subject is a good one, and you follow it well just go back and read it out loud and then you will see that you need to make a few changes. Take my advice and make the changes I suggested and be sure to use proper punctuation, it will make a big difference. You keep trying this was an excellent attempt.

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing your writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this was eight quatrains and it is thirty two lines of totally memorable and amusing quality writing.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: getting a little older and recalling how the times have changed..

*Moon* Flow: I thought that your poem flowed well, it also had a good rhythm, I thought it was a very well put together poem.

*Exclaim* punctuation: Your poetry had good punctuation that appeared to be used correctly the best I could tell.

*Sun* tone: the tone was light and fun.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Memory's Winding Road," Is perfect for the item and very appropriate.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I should have known this was your poem before I saw the name, because it has your type of light humor and cleverness about it.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of MA, DON'T CRY  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: Written in abcb, 7-7-7-7 format

*Butterfly2r* Theme: A soldier tells his mother that she made him and taught him well and he would fight to recall what she taught him.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this poem flowed very well and really sounded good, as it was so well written.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation, I will leave to someone else as I am not well versed in the subject.

*Sun* tone: The tone is written with love and concern.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "MA, DON'T CRY," It gets the attention of the reader, as it is in all caps. I like it too, it is appropriate and sweet.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I saw no mistakes with this item and I thought that it was so well done.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Two Lives  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Poseyp*Title: Two lives

*Poseyp*Author: rl

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. What a lovely and beautiful love story. I found it to be so very romantic. This is a long courtship and marriage.
That is fabulous and surprising in this day and age. you got married the year I was born. I love the story value of this story-poem.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I can't really give you any suggestions for improvement, I thought it was a nicely written story-poem, and so sweet.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of L'aura del Campo  
for entry "Anaconda (40 lines)" 
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Anaconda

*Poseyp*Author: KÃ¥re Enga in Udon Thani

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This is a very creative piece of poetry. I thought that the story value was excellent and the poetry was a cinquain.
I like that you used your imagination, although I have always loathed snakes. You did a fine job creating a wonderful story poem.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes, the spelling and grammar were both great and I believe the punctuation was equally okay.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: The Sword of Arrine

*Poseyp*Author: w0lfbane

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This was a well written story poem.
I really think you got the idea of story poem. It is a good story value in this and an excellent poem. The flow, rhythm, and rhyme were all equally good. I liked this item and I thought it was very creative as well as imaginative, good job.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with it and frankly can't offer any suggestions for improvement.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of Giving In  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hello He’s Brian K Compton , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewer Group. I found this item on writi ng.com's read and review items list. I thought that this was a well written piece which would be perfect for autumn. I love the sight that this poem presents of blowing, flowing leaves. it is a beautiful sight. Thank you for sharing and God Bless You.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: The Sorcerer and The Head

*Poseyp*Author: willwilcox

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. Wow you guys aren't going to make this simple for me are you? This was very well written and it is so challenging for me to pick a winner with all of these excellent entries. I got a fright with your item.
I thought that it was imaginative and creative... very well done!

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with your writing it was just great

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!
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Review of Hurricane  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: Hurricane

*Poseyp*Author: Kotaro

*Poseyp*Type: Poetry

*Pawprints*Reviewed by:*Paw* Lisa Noe~Kittyluv~um~puppyluv
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This is an excellent likeness to the Raven, I loved it my favorite of alk if Poe's works, that and the "Black Cat".
This was creative and flowed very well had the best rhythm of all poems In existence, I believe.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes with this work and it is deserving of five stars I believe.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of Palm Sunday  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Quihadi , I am your reviewer today, Lisa Noe ~~Image #6000 Sharing Restricted~~ ,
I am with the WDC Power Reviewers Group. I found this item on writing.com's read and review items list. I think this is a lovely poem, and a haunting statement. I am Chritian
and I love anything that is written about my Lord. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully talented piece of work with us. God Bless You.


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