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Review of Chrysalis  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello {suser:(joshthejiant} I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I am afraid I don't understand this, It is a nice piece of writing, however,, I do not get what you are trying to say. I read the item description and so I understand that you say.... in your words... "coming to terms with my own queerness", are you trying to say that you are gay? I do not get the connection with the poem myself.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Gita I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I do not know where you are from, but I live in the USA and there is no way right now a doctor would ever visit our home. Maybe in 1950 they would my mom said, but surely not in my lifetime. I was born in 1966 and have never had a doctor visit me at honme. Though in 1942, my dad was born in a little log cabin in Kentucky where a midwife came to my grand ma's house to deliver him. There was no doctor.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Tim Chiu I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I should have recognized your style as soon as I started reading this poem.
Your writings are always so enjoyable and you usually write to your girlfriend.
this poem spoke of a promise to love your girlfriend forevermore.
I thought that this writing was heartfelt and very sweet.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello {suser: } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You have written a grand piece of writing. it is a quatrain and it is well done, don't ever let your dreams fade, they are what keep you going really, or at least in my case. reality can't touch this! lol I dream of a better world. my dreams may e corny and crazy to me, they are dreams for love and peace, and if not utopia something where at least we tolerate each other and celebrate our differences instead of hate and kill. Thanks for sharing your thought with me, God Bless You and Have fun! you keep writing and I'll keep reading.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Rhyssa I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This poem, I take it, is about you and your sister's dreams?
The title fits this piece of writing very well and is appropriate.
The item description does give a decent description of what the poem is about.
You did a fine job creating this poem. It is not easy to write about dreams.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello cheshire I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is about WW11 and boy are you right we were plagued with the evil of racism and I am afraid it is rearing its ugly head again it would seem, and yes, it is evil.
it is pure wickedness to hate someone because of race or sex. lets all try to love our neighbor no matter what color or religion he be.
Thanks for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
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Review of The Knight's Tale  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Wow! This is amazing, I thought you did some of your best work with this ballad, which is A short narrative poem with stanzas of two or four lines and usually a refrain. You hit the nail on the t with this one, it was awesome. You are such a talented writer, you should, by all means, come by the story poem contest next month.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Changing Places  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Lou-Here By His Grace I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a super poem about moving, I have moved more times than I care to recall, when my father was in the military, then when I got married I haved moved about three
or four more times. I will probably have to move again in about a year or so. You didn't leave out anything It is a lot of hard work to move.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Nineteen Candles  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello 🌕 HuntersMoon I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
You are touched with talent and you share it with us all. This is a very nice tribute to the Story Mistress and Story Master, Wrutubg,com is as special a place as you could ever want to find. I am anxious to see what you write for the twentieth birthday bash...
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of The Center Ring  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello {suser: } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This was a ZaniLa Rhyme, which consists of 4 lines per stanza. The rhyme scheme for this form is abcb and a syllable count of 9/7/9/9 per stanza. Line 3 contains internal rhyme and is repeated in each odd numbered stanza. Even stanzas contain the same line but swapped. The ZaniLa Rhyme has a minimum of 3 stanzas and no maximum poem length. I am so glad that you added the form identification with the poem itself. I thought you followed the rules well and did a great job on it.

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You keep writing I I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (3.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello {suser: } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I thought that this was a very sweet poem indeed. and your message was a good one.
I would like to give you a suggestion though...
If I were you I would also reword the last two sentences to make more sense.
your message is a good one though.
Do love in the way she loves to be loved.
This line sounds better as:
love her in the way she wants to be loved.

Thank you for sharing this piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of A Good Meal  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello {suser: } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I bet that turned out to be a very special dinner indeed. A pet whether it be a cat or a dog can add so much to a person's life they can cure loneliness for sure. They are a pleasant company and a nice dinner companion. I thought your little poem was very creative and very well written. Good Job!
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Review of Kipuka  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Kåre Enga going to Montana I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
Wow! are you from Hawaii, you are lucky if you are, it is the most beautiful place on earth. I have only seen it on television but it is breathtaking and beautiful.
I would love to go and see what you are talking about crossing the lava field to reach an oasis on the Hawaiian Islands. You must feel blessed to experience this.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of My World  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello {suser: } I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
oh what a pleasant look at a beautiful and lovely world, it sounds like you have pictured a perfect world for yourself. What a special little poem this is, It sounds as if you have a happy and wonderful place in this life to call home. when you are in this place it is hard to leave, is it not?
hank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God Bless You.
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Review of Batman as Badman  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello {suser:vassie \} I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I really don't know what to say about the subject of your little story. I realize it is just for fun however many people are dying because of a similar pandemic right now, I realize you do not mean any disrespect or anything. but It might not be wise to write about it in a manner that depicts victims as bad men. Your writing skills are very good I would just suggest that you not depict the victims as badmen.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature.
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Review of Pick Me  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)


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your reviewer today is:*Dog2**Cat*
Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello willow I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
This is a beautifully written piece of literature, I love to read poetry and you have written a very nice piece for me to enjoy. I thought that the item had veery nice rhymes and a good rhythm it also had good spelling and grammar, the whole poem was the cats meow! You did a sensational job and I liked your work.
Thank you for sharing this amazing piece of literature with me.
You keep writing and I'll keep reading, God bless You.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)


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Lisa Noe *SMILE*

Hello Chris Breva I am here with the power reviewers today as a part of our April raid. I would like to choose a piece of writing from your portfolio to review for you today. I hope this helps you in becoming a better writer.
I thought that this baked bean casserole recipe. I think I will try it, however I do not know how much ketchup and mustard to add. do you maybe start with a tbls. or tsp. or are you talking about maybe 1/4 cup or something? I just love baked beans..
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Hello King , I just came upon this item on writing.com's read and review items list and I see that there is nothing printed in your item. It is supposed to be a chapter about Amanda Young, who is a high schooler living in 2054. However, there is nothing!
The title, Future on the edge of technology, seems as if it would make a good chapter for a story, but I don't know if the chapter was deleted or what, Nothing is there.
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Review of Caged  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Lori J , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was created using five stanzas

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is do caged places protect us?

*Moon* Flow: this item flowed well and the grammar was correct and properly used
and there were no misspelled words that I can seer.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is correct as well as far as I could tell.

*Sun* tone: with quiet desperation

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Caged," is a good title and appropaiate

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Corona  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is structured using one stanza, this poem is called a septet. it was written for writers cramp.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The Corona Virus

*Moon* Flow: the poem really don't flow due to the fact it is so brief,.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone is serious

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Corona" is the name of the disease or virus.

*Dragonflyp* Image: this poem creates a kind of picture with its words.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: this was well done good job.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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*Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp**Poseyp*ello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: T his poem was created using five cinquains, I liked the form of poetry you chose to writ in.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is the thoughts of a beautiful morning

*Moon* Flow: the poem flowed really well, and the
spelling and grammar were also correct.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: the tone is pleasant

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Morning Wakens Pure", this is very original and appropriate for the poem.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I envision nature at its finest.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: the writing is so good and creative.



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Review of PLYMOUTH ROCK  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: these two stanzas, kind of make a triangle.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: kind of a bout history and the national bird is it chicken or eagle, lol

*Moon* Flow: the flow of this poem is good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to the best of my knowledge, the punctuation looks correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone is fun

*Strawberry* Title: the title,,"Plymouth Rock", in all capital letters, which makes you seem to be screaming it to me.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision a chicken and an eagle.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I heard of a turkey being the national bird and I know that the eagle is, but the chicken, that's just crazy, lol


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Review of "Thoughts"  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello CAW , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this itsm is written in paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Dreams vs reality

*Moon* Flow: this item flowed very well and the grammar was correct as was the spelling.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was also correct to the best of my knowledge.

*Sun* tone: the tone was regretful

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "thoughts", was appropriate and worked well for this poem.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a very well-written piece of writing You should be pleased with the outcome of this one.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using three quatrains for a total of twelve lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme is Sports showcase great athletic prowess, but politics are just scary and ugly

*Moon* Flow: The flow is good as is the grammar.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems correct to me I believe.

*Sun* tone: the tone is strong

*Strawberry* Title: The title is, Trust in Gems: The Critics Choice, " . I thought that the title was a bit to long..;. I would choose either "Trust in Gems"
orf The Critics Choice", but I would not combine the two. but that's just my opinion.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought the poem was well=written and interesting,


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Tim Chiu , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you have created this item using four quatrains

*Butterfly2r* Theme: A tribute to Jason Belmonte, the PBA star

*Moon* Flow: the flow of this poem was very good and it had a good rhythm. The rhymes were also very well done.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was correct to the best of my knowledge

*Sun* tone: the tone was upbeat.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, " The PBA"S Slam:So filled with Jewels," I thought it was a bit long and complicated,,, something simple would have worked better.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was a well-written piece of poetry, I thought you did a fantastic job.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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