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Review of Longing  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello JoshtheJiant , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

e:think} Structure: the structure is made using only three short lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: loinging for something

*Moon* Flow: this was a very brief poem and the flow was as such very stifled



*Sun* tone: was deep

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Longing," was very appropriate and perfect for the item.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think that you could make a really good poem out of this idea, it is deep and not bad as is, but of course, if you added some substance to it, it would sound better.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.
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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello LegendaryMask❤️ ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,

I know I have already wished you a happy anniversary twice, but I can't seem to keep myself from your hauntingly beautiful tributes to our Lord. to me the inspiration of writing starts first with God, and we need to always remember to give Him the glory and credit for everything we produce.. in writing as well as every other aspect in our lives.

thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Priceless  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello iluvhorses ,I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this afternoon, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today.
You will be having an anniversary on May, you have been a valuable member of writing.com since 2011, that is nine years and we are lucky to have you. I love an acrostic poem, I think that they are so much fun. You did a fantastic job creating this one. "Priceless" is a wonderful poem. It shows how much you treasure this priceless relationship that you have with your wonderful husband. That is truly a great inspiration for your writing. I personally always use God, family, pets, nature and so on to inspire me. You did a great job, God Bless You/
ou.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello blakely5,I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today, I do so hope that you are having a very blessed day today, I know I have given you a review for your anniversary already, however you are highlighted this month in the Anniversary group so you deserve two. I chose this piece because the title spoke to me. I love God too, and I used to write letters to Him every day, It may sound crazy but God gave me the talent to write and I am a very shy person otherwise.
I can talk to Him now and do every day. You write from your heart and I can see how much you love and respect our Heavenly Father. It shows in all you do. In your writing, in your contest, and probably in your entire life. I hope my love for God is also as apparent as yours is I write about him often as He is usually my inspiration. Your writing is beautiful and filled with love, never change that.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Bowl-a-Rama  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello JACE , I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary today. I have written this two times already and keep losing it, so lets hope that you end up with this one. I just read your poem, "Bowl-a-Rama",
I thought that it was quite good. You have been a valuable member of writing.com since May 1, 2008, which is about twelve years, we are so happy that you are apart of our little writing family. I see you chose to write a Lento poem for this piece of writing. The title is appropriate for the writing and the grammar seems okay to me. The punctuation looks okay, but I am no expert on that subject for sure. This poem consists of two quatrains or stanzas with four lines each. The rhyme comes in with the second and fourth lines in both stanzas. There is a good rhythm to the poem which I thought was good, I do like a kind of flowing rhythm when I read poetry.
wh8ch I love to do. I read poetry as a hobby and I liked this poem because it reminds me of when I was a little girl and used to go bowling with my family, it was always so much fun.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Ollie Cooper , I would like to wish you a very happy account anniversary this morn9ing, I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today.
I read your poem and I thought that it was very creative, thoughtful, and interesting. The title, "Dreams v.s. Reality," Is very appropriate for the item,
I also think that the item description is somewhat helpful to the reader of this item. You created this item using six quatrains or stanzas with four lines each.
I thought the form was suitable and the punctuation seemed to be in place to me, however, I am not the world's best at knowing punctuation. I think that the grammar was also correct and I saw no spelling errors in your poetry. I think poetry is great the way it shines on the subject we are writing about. I think this is a good poem and you worked hard on it I believe. congrats on the nice finish.




thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Ruler of the Werecats , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary,
I do so hope that you have a very blessed day today, I think that your writing is very good, and I liked the title. I thought it was friendly and appropriate for writing. I also think that the item description is so very helpful to the reader.
friends are a very special commodity, one that, these days, is hard to find.
I think you showed a good talent for choosing subjects of interest to write about.
The poem you have written is so creative and I found a lot of interest in it.
Friendship is hard when it is long distance so learning to communicate through writing is vastly important. This freestyle poem should please any friend.
I know that I would so pleased if I thought that I was the inspiration for a nice poem that my friend wrote for me.
hank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of High in the Sky  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello LegendaryMask❤️ , I just read this piece and I liked it very much, it shows your heart is in the right place, With God and prayer. I love the Lord and everything about Him
I love reading other's work about Him as well. This piece was inspired by a beautiful photo of the sky. I hope you win a contest with this one.Good luck and God Bless you.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is a letter, written in paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is addressed to writer's block. it is about you making mr block leave you alone.

*Moon* Flow: the letter flowed well and the grammar seemed to be on par.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was correct as far as I could tell.

*Sun* tone: the tone was comedic and light-hearted

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Dear Writer's block", was appropriate.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I found this item to be quite creative and I did not see anything wrong with your writing at all. you have a nice sense of humor.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Norman , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: This poem is structured using seven quatrains.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this poem is about writing poetry and the fun had by the poet.

*Moon* Flow: the flow was great as was the rhythm and rhyme.

*Exclaim* punctuation: You chose not to use punctuation, which is just fine in poetry, the grammar was good and there were no misspelled words.

*Sun* tone: the tone was light and sort of comedic.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Following the Rhymes," was excellent and appropriate for the poem.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that you did a really good job this was nearly a perfect poem except for the last line, which I think you will agree was a stretch.

*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Everlasting Joy  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this piece of poetry is structured using four quatrains.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this beautiful poem is Happiness.

*Moon* Flow: I thought this item flows well and the grammar was good enough and the spelling was correct.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is correctly used throughout the poem.

*Sun* tone: the tone is upbeat and happy.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Everlasting Joy", was just lovely and appropriate for this piece of poetry.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I wonder thought if the following repeating line should read differently:

Each day bring moments of happiness,

do you think it is "brings moments of happiness." I am not sure so you might want to check that out. if I am wrong I apologize.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Darius Olajide , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item was about 2 and a half paragraphs
much of the citings were from the Bible.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme was God's vision for you and about Joseph as well..

*Moon* Flow it flowed well from the beginning and was very easy to read and I thought also very interesting.

*Exclaim* punctuation: You seemed to use correct punctuation and the grammar was proper and also I didn't see any misspelled words.

*Sun* tone: this was an educational piece about Joseph, and an insightful piece
about yourself

*Strawberry* Title: I really liked the titel, "Holding on to God's Vision", I thought it was very appropriate and very creative.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision biblical times and dress.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was a very insightful and educational piece. I don't know what God's vision is for me, but I do know I was robbed and I knew the people who robbed me, but I forgive them because God would want me to.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of eclipse  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Riham , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is structured as a short work of fiction in paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: an eclipse is how your love was before she was murdered in front of you.

*Moon* Flow: this item flowed really well, it is a well written piece of exciting writing.

*Exclaim* punctuation: As far as I could tell the punctuation, spelling and grammar were all correct. accept for what I wrote in the sugesstions below.

*Sun* tone: sad as well as exciting.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Elipse". is appropriate and unique.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: the following are mistakes:
Einar woke up terrified from this nightmare as seeing Aeliana’s father burnt his soul; that made him remember his bloody past and what he lost. He went to have a bath and let the water washes the dust of his soul. Each drop permeated his mind to give him a chance to breathe again

The word should say wash instead of washes in the third line. also

they wanted revenge. Instead of killing me, they killed Aeliana and her family. They did it in front of my eyes. I was shackled, and I couldn’t do anything but screaming and begging them to free my wife and her family. Her voice was torturing me, yet I couldn’t save her. The sound of gunfire was an explosion in my ears.
{c:green The correct words are scream and beg...

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Proof  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)

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Hello QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.


*Think* Structure: this little work of fiction is structured as a short story would be, It is written in paragraph form. the word count was 290 of a

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this item is proof, and how the boy likes the internet and Newton's gravity. he is trying to do his homewor300 word limit.

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well and the story was carried along at a brisk pace which made the story good.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to me, I think the punctuation was correct, I am not so well versed in the subject.

*Sun* tone: light

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Proof", is appropriate for the item as this is what the story was about.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: This was a well written piece of fiction and I did enjoy reading it..
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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Sonnets of the Spleen , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this is a structured sonnet

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this is about heartache and seeking revenge, which so many try to do. I feel revenge is best left to the Lord myself. but that is just me.

*Moon* Flow: this item flowed well and the rhymes that exist are good, the rhythm was also very good. this was a delightfully easy poem to read.

*Exclaim* punctuation: you used a question mark and a few comas but for the most part you didn't use punctuation much. which is okay.

*Sun* tone: this was an exciting and angry tone Is what I felt it to be.

I woue:dragonflyp} Title: This title is simply called, "Sonnet 1", I would prefer a real title, not the form of the poem with a number behind it. something like "My Heart's Revenge". That is just an example, you get the picture though,

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought this was very good, usually I don't understand sonnets when I read them, however, I did this one and I liked it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello mxnasi , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this was a short piece of fiction and it was structured as a short story it had good spacing and was easy to read.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this little piece of fiction was about a young man and he was learning to rob a car by breaking in and the alarm went off.

we:moon} Flow: I thought the story moved along at a brisk pace and was very well written.

*Exclaim* punctuation: it appeared to me that the punctuation is correct.

*Sun* tone: the tone was light even though it was about a robbery.

*Strawberry* Title: the title,"Not As Advertised", is a great little for this piece, I also thought it was quite amusing.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision a young guy breaking into a car.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I got a kick out of this item, you used the prompt well.
I saw it on TV
{c:greenI would not have thought to create such a neat story from this expression.
Thank you for your fun writing and this little story, it was great.
God Bless You and stay safe.


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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem is structured using three stanzas of four lines each or quatrains. it is Written in abcb, 8-6-8-6 format.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: The theme of this poem is about shattered dreams and what remains.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this item flows very well and it has no unnecessary pauses or stops. it read very well from start to finish.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation looks correct to me, although I am not well versed with punctuation.

*Sun* tone: to me, this seemed like a sad tone.

*Strawberry* Title: I liked the title, "what dreams remain"' I think it is appropriate and very creative.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: This poem was very melancholy, it
makes one think of the dreams they have lost. or the lack of dreams they have.
the writing is clear and well done.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Hello Sum1 , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: In this item you have written nine different poems of varying
forms. They are based on numbers from one to nine. how many lines each has is different.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the poems are centered around each number from one to nine for each poem.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is different in each poem some of them had none.

*Sun* tone: the tone changed from each poem as well. but overall it was, to me, educational.
as I learned some new forms.

*Strawberry* Title: The title for the overall project is very appropriate, "It's all in the numbers".


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I almost all the time use a quatrain, but I also like to do couplets, and a cinquain.
you did a great job on all of your poems.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Heart of Ice  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)

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This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*

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Hello Melora , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poem was written using three quatrains or stanzas with four lines each.

{e:Butterfly2rTheme: this item is about a person whose heart is too cold to be able
to love again and you can't melt the ice from the person's heart.

{e:moon} Flow: the poem flows well

*Exclaim* punctuation: You chose not to use punctuation with this poem, which is completely fine.

*Sun* tone: cold and stern; overall, to me, I thought it is sad.

*Strawberry* Title: the title is appropriate for the poem as it tells all about the poem.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I think this is a sad thing when someone has a heart so cold or like a stone. my heart is so big and easily hurt. I can't understand how you can be so cold to someone.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of "You're Forgiven"  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)

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This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello WinterSnow , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: there are three very long stanzas to create this poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Jesus forgives us of our sins and our mistakes,

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well without pauses or unnecessary stopping.


*Sun* tone: forgiving

*Strawberry* Title: the title ius appropriate for the poem.

{c:e:StarfishB} Suggestions: she said smilingly. I just wonder if this is the correct way to say this. I would say " she said with a smile". but it's yours you say it which way you feel sounds best.
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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)

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This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello isokarifrancis , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure of this item is so simple, as it is only one line.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this item is a quote that uplifts you.

*Moon* Flow: It is only one line, therefore, it does not flow.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is okay

*Sun* tone: the tone is uplifting

*Strawberry* Title: the title is :Quotes and words of wisdom", and it is appropriate for the item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I enjoyed reading your words of wisdom and I believe what you say is true. it is uplifting. a very nice Quote.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Unfilled Time  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)

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This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Angelica- Happy Mothers Day! , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this was structured like most poems, however after the poem you did the most unique thing and reviewed your own poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: a girl left alone while her parents go for a short walk.

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well without too many pauses.
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e:exclaim} punctuation: the punctuation seemed fine to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone was kind of lonely

*Strawberry* Title: the title was appropriate for the poem.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought you did a fine job. I was surprised that you added a review of your own poem afterward. you seemed to be a little bit hard on yourself I thought. Give yourself a pat on the back,


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of winter calls  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)

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This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello Rhyssa , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this item using seven stanzas of varying line count and ended with a couplet. about forty lines concluded this poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the thee was winter and skating and falling on your tush.

*Moon* Flow: I thought that this poem flowed very well and had no unnecessary stops or pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation was good as far as I can tell.

*Sun* tone: the tone was friendly

*Strawberry* Title: the title was appropriate for this poem

*Dragonflyp* Image: I could envision a snowy surrounding and a pond with ice on it for skating.

I ce:StarfishB} Suggestions: I thought that this was a wonderfully written and fun poem to read. I really liked it.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Friendship  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)

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This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello 💙 Carly , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure:e there were four quatrains to creat this lovely poem.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this poem is about the importance of friendship and that it is from God.

*Moon* Flow: the flow is very good and it flows well from beginning to the end.

*Exclaim* punctuation: There is only a period at the end of the poem, which is fine because you really do not need punctuation in poetry.

*Sun* tone: the tone is friendly

*Strawberry* Title: the title is appropriate for the poem.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I enjoyed reading this poem and thought it was excellent.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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Review of Keeping It Real  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)

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This review is from Lisa Noe *Cat**Dog2*


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Hello bandit I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: The structure is just a few lines.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the positives of the Covid 19 Virus and how it has brought this country or I should say world together in prayer.

*Moon* Flow: I think the item flowed very well without any pauses.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to me.


*Sun* tone: the tone is up and positive

*Strawberry* Title: the title is appropriate for the item.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: you did a very nice job on this item.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.

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