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Review of What About Now  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Lou-Here By His Grace , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is structured using three sestets and a cinuain.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is heartbreak and surviving afterward.

*Moon* Flow: the flow was very good with a touch of rhyme and some rhythm.


*Exclaim* punctuation: the pu nctuation is correct as is the grammar.

*Sun* tone: the tone is surviving sadness

*Strawberry* Title: "what about now", which makes you question now what do I do?


*StarfishB* Suggestions: There were no mistakes and I thought that this was a well written thoughtful and emotional piece of poetry.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Chris Breva , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item contained two tercets,

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme was the difference between effective and affective

*Moon* Flow: the flow was great and the grammar appropriate

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is correct

*Sun* tone: the tone is educational

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Effective vs Affective


*StarfishB* Suggestions: this was a good grammar lesson and an important one,
many people make the mistake of confusing the definition of the two.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this item is A ghazal, which consists of couplets having a well- defined rhyming pattern and, often, refrain.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this was about freedom of thought and expression

*Moon* Flow: I thought that it flowed well,

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is correct and well done.

*Sun* tone: the tone is stern

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "FREEDOM--a ghazal", screams out for freedom and lets the reader know what the tone of the poem will be. and it also carries with it the form of poetry this is.

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*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a well written and talented piece of poetry, you did a great job sharing your feelings.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Purple Dawn  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello {suser:(tattsnteeth2}, I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this item using a quatrain, two cinquains, and a tercet.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: Memories

*Moon* Flow: the item flows well and has a nice rhythm.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation is correct I believe.


*Sun* tone: this was smooth and free

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "the purple dawn", is very good and appropriate.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: you did a very good job creating this well-written
piece of writing.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)



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Hello Prosperous Snow celebrating , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.
*Think* Structure:ove Otto a 9-line poem with 8 syllables per line and a rhyme scheme of a, a, c, b, b, c, d, d, c

*Butterfly2r* Theme: started about springtime and then about writing,

*Moon* Flow: it really didn't flow because it's only nine lines.

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems to be correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone is fun

*Strawberry* Title: The title is unique, "Springtime writing", this is appropriuate.


=*StarfishB* Suggestions: I have changed ideas while writing before also.
it is a pretty cool poem.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello fat_hiker , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: you structured this item of writing using around nine stanzas of various lengths and a few single lines in between.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: this is a parody of "Pretty Fly (for a white guy)", instead talking about a fat boy.


*Moon* Flow: The flow was okay and it did a good rhythm, for the most part this was a fun piece of writing.

*Exclaim* punctuation: I really did not notice much punctuation

*Sun* tone: the tone was fun and free

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Pretty Fly (for a fat guy)

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision an overweight man at the dinner table, stuffing his face.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a nice parody, I never heard the song though so I can just guess what it might sound like.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Sharmelle's Expressions , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: this poetry was created and structured using four long

quatrains, or stanzas with four lines each.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme is love and how it spreads and how happy it can make one feel.

*Moon* Flow: The item flowed well and I thought that it was very creative and beautiful.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation was correct to the best of my knoweledge.

*Sun* tone: the tone was happy and loving.

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "The Miracle of Love and Happiness", is very appropriate for this piece of writing.



*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this wa an upbeat and sweet piece of writing, you show a lot of talent and you show a special ability to make one feel what you are saying.



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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of SILENT WOMEN  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)



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Hello Dr M C Gupta , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure:
* Written in aabb, 7-7-7-7 forma

*Butterfly2r* Theme: silence of women

*Moon* Flow: this poem flowed very well and had good grammar.

*Exclaim* punctuation: The punctuation is correct

*Sun* tone: the tone to me is infuriating.

*Strawberry* Title: the title, "Silent Women", is appropriate as it tells the reader exactly what to expect of the writing.


*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a well written and well researched piece of writing. you did a good job. I think women should speak up they are not inferior to anyone.

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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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Review of Alone  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)



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Hello Lili J. - On/Offline , I came across this item on writing.com's read and review items list today. I do so hope that you are having a blessed day.

*Think* Structure: I see that you chose to write this piece using paragraph form.

*Butterfly2r* Theme: the theme of this item is being alone

*Moon* Flow: the item flowed well

*Exclaim* punctuation: the punctuation seems correct to me.

*Sun* tone: the tone of this item is somber

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "Alone", is a good and appropriate idea for this item.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can envision a dark sky with a star fading away.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: you did a good job creating this piece.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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for entry "everywhere magic" 
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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*Poseyp*Title: Challenging Poetry "Everything Magic"

*Poseyp*Author: Rhyssa

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. This is a well written piece of literature. I enjoyed reading about this little mermaid and all. Fairytales and fantasy writing is always fun and enjoyable to read about.
your title, "Everything Mafic", is appropriate for the item. The little story poem is very creative and imaginable and unique.

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I really have no suggestions for you as you did a fine job as it is.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of A Rush Of Wings  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello DakotaSkye , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this evening, I do so hope that you have had a wonderfully blessed day today. I thought that this was a well written and beautiful piece of poetry. I love and believe in angels, I love poetry written about them as well as artwork
depicting them. you have four l0vely stanzas telling the readers all about them.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Laugh  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello Kumar , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary this evening, I do so hope you have had a blessed day today.


thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*
Laugh and the world laughs with you,
Laughter is the best medicine...
these are just a couple of quotes that come to my mind when I read your poem.
It is true laughing makes you feel better, no matter what is wrong with you, if you can laugh or smile you will feel better. Your poem is very well written a nd it is a good subject matter. The title is appropriate as well.


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Review of To Be 3  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello PUMPKINGIRL , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary today, I do so hope that you have had a blessed evening today.
I thought that this was a cute little poem it really did show a bit of talent on your part. I think that in the title, "To Be 3", You really should have written out the number three, instead of using the number. This poem comes off as being fun and playful. The item description hits it on the head.
thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate y.our talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Go Big or Go Home  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello nomlet , , I'd like to wish you a very happy account I thought that your short story or flash fiction was very well written and it flowed well from beginning to end very nicely. The title of the item, "Go Big or Go Home", was taken from a line in the story. You seem to have quite a bit of writing talent.. You seem also to like to write the flash fiction of under three hundred words. very well done.

Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*
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Review of Yesterday  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Amay , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary, This will be your tenth anniversary on the seventeenth.
This was a beautiful poem about a person you truly cared about.
she sounded like a wonderful person and a great principal=pal.
You show a lot of promise as a writer, this has a lot of feeling in it. I love poetry that comes from the heart.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Hello brom21 , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , Wow! this is your 10 year anniversary! I loved this story poem, it was really well written and it shows me you have a lot of talent. I would like to invite you to enter
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. it is a blast ! You did a very good job writing this poem, I enjoyed reading it, I did not see anything wrong with it.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of The visions  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hello dblameck (David) , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , You have now been a member of writing.com for thirteen years, how great is that? lol ... I thought this was a very well written piece of writing. your poem was one many people can relate to I'd say. it is hard to sleep when you are havin visios I'd say. your poem was very good.



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Review by Lisa Noe
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Hello Sum1 , I'd like to wish you a very happy account
anniversary , Ten years is a really admirable feat. I think you work really hard for us here at the Anniversary group and you deserved to be highlighted this month.
I thought this was the most beautiful and special pieces of writing. you should by all means choose a piece of your writing and enter it in
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I would love to have you enter something. Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of A SOLDIERS PRAYER  
Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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*Poseyp*Title: A Soldier's Prayer

*Poseyp*Author: Monty

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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering Thank you so dearly for your service to our country, that is so special to me. My daddy died from serving His country and He taught me to love this country and those who defend it. This was the most beautiful prayer. It made me feel peace when I read it. It tells a story too of a soldier who is going to fight for his family and friends in a battle but he cares about his soul and what will become of it. I recall the worry my father had about that subject.
I do not know what you believe, but I am a Christian and I believe that Jesus Christ will forgive you and cleanse your soul., All you have to do is ask for forgiveness of whatever sin you have committed confess it to Him and don't do it again, He will forgive you and mention it to His Father God.
*Poseyp**Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review of UNPACKING  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*Poseyp*Title: Unpacking
*Poseyp*Author: SandraLynn Team Florent!
*Poseyp*Type: poetry
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*Poseyp*First Impression: Hello, I am judging this item because you are an entrant in A Story-Poem Contest, Thanks for entering. I thought that this was a lovely story poem. the story value was definitely there and it was an interesting story.
The poem was also very good, I like that you used all of the senses in your writing.

*Poseyp*Suggestions: I did not see any mistakes and I really did see that you put a lot of thought and work into writing this entry.

*Poseyp*Conclusion: Thank you so kindly for entering my contest, I want to wish you good luck and say I hope you will enter again next month. have fun with your writing and God Bless You!

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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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THIS IS A REVIEW BY THE ANNIVERSARY GROUP IT IS A GIFT FOR YOU!
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Hello ,I'd like to wish very happy account anniversary,
I do so hope that you have a wonderfully blessed day today.
I think you are a very talented writer and have a unique way of describing things.
to enter my contest called:
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I think you would have much fun and make new friends.
I loved the way you worded your item and It gave me a certain peace which relaxed me so it made me feel better.
I think the title is appropriate abd creative I also think you did a fantastic job with the item description.
good job on creating a beautiful and peaceful poem.

Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.{e:heart
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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello Princess Megan Rose 22 Years ,I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, You have been a valuable member of writing.com fo0r eighteen years and we are so glad and lucky to have you asw an addition. The title isw appropriate and the addition of the cat to the story really was a good idea. It made it come to life and seem real. I think your writing is both gentle and sweet. I enjoy reading your item. I think you are very good at telling stories in a poetic form. I have a contest called
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and I would love to invite you to enter something in the contest if you would like. Your poem was well done and it has a story quality to it. It is also a poem. I personally like that. The punctuation should probably be checked by someone else, I am not the best with that subject, but it sounds great to me.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Poseyv*Reviewed by: *Paw* Lisa Noe*Cat2*

Hello LegendaryMask❤️ , I'd like to wish you a very happy account anniversary, You will be celebrating your third anniversary on the 16. I couldn't wait, I wanted to be one of the first to wish you a happy anniversary. I chose one of your military poems. I like them because I was raised in the military. My dad was in the Air force and the Army, for over twenty-four years. That was All I knew until I was nearly grown. It is a hard life but also very rewarding. I was always so proud of my daddy. He was a soldier in Vietnam and received several medals for humanitarian efforts.
\I loved him dearly. I love to see the men and women in uniform, I love them for taking up for those of us who are not able to fight or defend ourselves. I thank your son for his service, I bet you are very proud of him. God bless them all.



thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You.*Heart*

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Review of Seize Cruise  
Review by Lisa Noe
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I apparently rated this item once, but I do not stand by the four star rating when it clearly deserves five. I don't know if you changed anything or not but it was very good. I loved it. it had a great rhythm and the rhymes were excellent I think it flowed beautifully. It is just the type of story poem I look for in my contest. it was clearly a great poem which told a fascinating story. I thank you for entering it in my contest./ I wish you luck and may God Bless you!

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Review by Lisa Noe
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)



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Hello drakeb, I am so happy that you decided to enter
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I am your judge, Lisa Noe , I want to wish you luck and say that I liked your entry, I found it very creative and original. which I do adore.

Structure: You have chosen to structure your poem using all tercets, which are three-line stanzas, I liked that.


*Moon* Flow: I thought that the item flowed so well and it told an interesting story of aliens. this was imaginative.

*Exclaim* punctuation: to me, I thought the punctuation looked correct,

*Sun* tone: it read with sort of a spooky tone as it made me question, will everyone be okay?

*Strawberry* Title: The title, "The Bravery of Savage fangs"' is very appropriate and very creative, I really liked that.

*Dragonflyp* Image: I can't get the vision of the orc, I wish you had leant a description of them.

*StarfishB* Suggestions: I thought that this was a great entry and you did a really good job, I liked your writing and found it worthy of being in a contest,

I do hope that you will enter again in July and I wish you luck this month.


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*Muglp* Conclusion: Thank you for sharing this piece of writing with me, I truly appreciate your talent. May God Bless You and Yours.



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