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Review of Dear Thalia  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I love that this is free verse but you still seem to rhyme. I love that your muse is making you write even through you don't want too. I think that the imagery is great in this poem. I think that your descriptions are great too. I cant find anything wrong with it and I hope your muse does let you have some time off so that you can review and read here on WDC!!!

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Review of A Painter  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lynda Miller , This is review 3 of 3 and its great little rhyming poem. I think it has lots of imagery for 20 lines. I think that you can paint a picture in your head from the descriptions that you have written through out the whole poem. I hope this leads to some of them being published!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Lynda Miller , here is review number 2 of 3! I think that this a a cute poem that you have written about the wonderful "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group! I think that it describes the how reviews are done and where they review mostly at. I think that there is imagery in this as you read through it. I love that you used the group reviews as your main point of the poem.

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Review of Skiing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi , Lynda Miller , This one of 3 reviews I owe for your snail mail auction winnings! I think that this is a great poem that you have shown excellent imagery. I think that you can picture her slowly going and then speeding up to the fall! I think that this was great that she wanted to give it another chance and started back up the hill again after she was helped up!

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Review of Daddy's Girl  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think that this was great little story about a daddy's lil girl. I think that it is great that she gets a car when she gets her license. I think this could possibly go on to be something that this bigger and better. It has a lot potential! You could see the imagery and description of the picture that was painted while reading this!

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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi, jackneigut , I think that this was a representation that God works his ways no matter what happens he there to help you through it! I think that your faith is strong and that no matter what everything happens for a reason. I think that this was just a great piece you have written! I could picture everything that you talked about in here.

In my family everytime some one passed away, I would get pregnant be already be pregnant when it happened. Happen all three times with my kids. I lost aunt, 3 grandmas {ex counted}, 1 grandpa...I had a miscarrige when my aunt had died too.




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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, Patrece~So busy!!! , Thank you for submitting your story to the
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! I this is this a great story about your 3 year old grandson that is autustic! I think that you are a great grandmother that loves her lil man and would never let anyone or anything happen to him. I think that it is neat that you are able to cope with his good and bad days he goes through daily. I think that its just awesome! Please come back next round.

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Review of First Kiss  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi, Elle , thank you for the second entry into this contest! The answer to your question is yes you can enter both story and poetry. I think that this is a really heart felt story that you have written about your daughter! I think that this is the best way for your baby to know you love them to keep them close to your heart!

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Hi, Laura Leary , Thank you for submitting your story about having your baby. I think that this is such a great fight to make sure that you kept your baby no matter what was trying to happen. I think that anyone who fights for their child from day one is a great mom!!! I think that you have great description and imagery in this story! I hope that you try my
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi alfcollier , Thank you for your entry into the
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! I think that this great poem about your muse! I think that this is great way to share your muse with the rest of us! I think that you have great imagery and descriptions that paint a picture of your muse!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi S.z.kamoonpuri , Thank you again for entering the
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. This is another great poem that you written. I love the imagery and description in my mind as I read this from line to line! I think you did a great job with the pattern you have used to write this too.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi, S.z.kamoonpuri , Thank you for entering the
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! I think that this a great poem that has tons of imagery and descriptions that can paint a picture in your mind as you read through poem. I think that you have a great poem that you have used a pattern to write this poem and glad that the Kingdom won though the writing of this!! I am glad that you have entered and hope to see you in many more rounds in the future!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SHERRI GIBSON ,

This is review 3 of 3 that I owe you from the auction package you won in the
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! I am glad to see this group is here to help the Newbies here on on WDC! I am glad to be part of this group! I think that this and all your other groups help WDC so much and make WDC a great place to be!! I am glad that you are able to help newbies out with there reviews!!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SHERRI GIBSON thank you for winning my package in the
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this is review 2 of three that I owe you!

I just think that this is such a good idea! I am sorry to see that it is temporary closed! I think that you have a great idea that giving back to others. I would love to be able to give a gift to someone when this has open back up again! I love the graphics and do not see anything that is wrong on here! I love that you have a group of others that are helping you with all this when it is running!


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Review of Sherri's Web page  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello SHERRI GIBSON , Here is review one of three that is part of your package from the
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I think that this is great website that you have made for your novels, short stories, poetry and horror stories! I love that you have it as a serene and peaceful that reminds me of you! I think that the angels represents the many sides of your writing ability. This cool that you have a store front where you can buy your books at! I will eventually want to meet you in person even though we lived in the same city for a long time! I will be collecting your books again! I was not able to bring them with me! I miss reading them!!!!

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Review of Oh Sister  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you Lisa Noe Kittyluv um Puppyluv for entering in my
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contest and writing such a great poem! I love that you have written this to your sister as you both walk through the the woods looking for the Savior! I think it is great that you have found him through this walk! I love the descriptions and imagery through out the whole poem! I think you have done a great job with painting the picture as you read through this!

Thank you again for entering the contest! Keep on Writing!!!



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Review of Sanctuary  
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! I think that this is great poem that really shows that you had a true sanctuary when you were a kid. I loved to climb trees and stay in them when I was that age too! I can relate! You have done a great job with the descriptions and the imagery in this poem. I love that you can feel like you are right there watching you climb the as you are going to your sanctuary!

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Review of LAURIE STORIES  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Thank SandraLynn for entering my
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contest! I think that this is a wonderful story about your little sister Laurie. I think you had a few great stories about her as you miss her so much! I think that you have great imagery and descriptions through the whole story! I think that you have put a lot emotions into these stories too!







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Hi N. Alawadi you have been gifted 3 reviews from Jeannie as part of her newbie package for yoU! I will have to come back and do two more when you have more in your port! You were also give a review package to from the Power Shop Reviews!


I think that you did a great job for a start with this story! I think that you could add a bit description and imagery into this as you read this story! I think your English is doing quite well in your writing! I know spell check is helpful! I think that you have great characters in this! Thank you for explaining what Hookah was, I appreciate!

I will be back to do your other 2 reviews that you were gifted when you have more here!

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Review of Here We Go Again  
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Hi Jeannie , here is review 3 of 3 for you and i hope you have enjoyed my reviews that you won from World Auction!

I have to agree with you on your prayer about the government to act like it is working for us and not wasting our tax dollars. I think that the government has not really thought of the USA and o
nly looking for what looks good for them! I think that they act like toddlers at time especially when they decided to go on strike about the budget and all!! I think that the next term will have high expectations from all of us.

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Review of My Precious Kevin  
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Hi Jeannie , Here is review #2 out of 3 that you have won as part of your package in World Auction! I hope that I will let know what a review I give.

I think that this is great poem that you have written about your son. I love poetry written about kids especially if your kids, grandkids, or niece or nephew. No matter what these poems are still precious to us no matter what! I think this would also be a good admission for the
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too! I think the kids of the world are our precious gifts!




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Hi Jeannie , Here is review one of 3 for your package that you have won through the World Auction!


I think you did a great job on this with your muse as you have written this for the Mystic Muses campfire addition! You did a great job with the rhyming of your poem as Mandy can make a poetess out of anyone! I pretty sure you did this yourself and your muse had helped to make you a poetess! The descriptions and imagery were great for this too!

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Review of Give it Up  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi River Catching up ~ Sort of , I am reviewing for you as a gift of 3 reviews from ~ IVELTAC ~ Bloodborn had won in a package that is given to you as the friend part of the present.


This is short sweet and personal! I think that it is great that you have given up cigarettes and smoking as your New Years Resolution!! I gave up smoking after 7 years in '97! I was just reminded the other day how that was great thing I did for myself since there is Lung cancer in my family!

I hope that you gave it up because you wanted to be healthier than just to save money now that you are smoke free! I think the first would be the best reason!


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Hi River Catching up ~ Sort of , I am reviewing for you as a gift of 3 reviews from ~ IVELTAC ~ Bloodborn had won in a package that is given to you as the friend part of the present.

I think this many members can agree with you that this winter has suck especially the North Eastern USA! I know just being in the midwest we were tired that winter was sticking around for 6 more weeks because of the ground hog!


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Review of I'm mad  
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Hi River Catching up ~ Sort of , I am reviewing for you as a gift of 3 reviews from ~ IVELTAC ~ Bloodborn had won in a package that is given to you as the friend part of the present.

I think that was a cute poem about out how the winter made you go mad as you were trying to get it cleared out so that anything new can come back again if you were in the East part of US. I feel for you with all that snow!



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