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Review of Rainy days  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This is a poem about growing up with a lot of rainy days. It describes the way the rain is perceived and responded to at different stages of life. It must have been written by an author on their mid-thirties because that is where it cuts off, ending the author's experiences.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay to me. I give room for poetic license.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the way you tailored it to each life stage.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I would have preferred rhyme and meter.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I will be back next year. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem is about those mythical creatures called vampires. The prompt called for a poem about vampires but would not allow you to mention a vampire's food. You did a good job of avoiding it. Aren't we all thankful that vampires are mythical?

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhythm. As far as I could tell it was iambic but I am really no judge.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this one. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem is about life as a mental health nurse. I can relate to that as I am a chaplain and a peer support specialist. A lot of my work is with the mentally ill and addicted. It is challenging to watch people struggle, especially from illnesses such as schizophrenia and bi-polar disorder. You know that if they just continue their meds but they often quit when they feel better. It is sad.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you care so deeply. Just don't burnout!

What I liked least about your article/poem was: If anything the format. I prefer meter such as sonnets or roundeau.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Child's Play  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I read a poem here that contrasts and compares childhood with the golden years. I like the way you brought it full circle. I know people who fit into all of those categories. Some are paranoid and find fault with everybody. Some are gullible and trust everybody. Everybody is someplace on your continuum.

Your spelling and grammar: your spelling and grammar looked good.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the font coloring. It took some work to do all of that.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: If anything the format. I prefer metered poetry. I could see how this one could be made into a diamante poem.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem contrasts what we want with reality. Life can be really hard and it is usually man who makes it that way. I try to always look for the positive. Your poem contrasts the beauty of life with the harshness of life.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that it contrasted the good with the bad. Life has its beauty and its ugliness. It depends on which we look for.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I prefer rhyme and meter though contrast is also good.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: What I read here was a soul-searching, existentialist poem by a poet who concludes that after all the searching, what we really need has been with us all along. We need each other and usually need only look close by. People are everywhere. To have friends we need to be a friend. Good job!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the existentialist feel to it. I don't know a whole lot about existentialism. I know it is searching for meaning which you seem to do.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: If anything it would have been the format. I prefer rhyme and meter but am beginning to slowly appreciate free verse.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Bracelet  
Review by Chris Breva
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This is a poem about a bracelet that you can't quite remember receiving. Therefore you are ambiguous about getting rid of it. You don't remember where it came from so it seems safer to hold on to it. I think you expressed yourself well.

Your spelling and grammar: look okay to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like the way you describe that ambiguous feeling and the flow of time. Time does have a tendency to erase and skew memories.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: The format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse or prose.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This is a haiku about winter. I own the Oriental Poetry Contest but do not claim to be a good judge of haiku or any other form. I do claim to be a judge of what I like and I like this. It has a good ring to it.

Your spelling and grammar: looked great to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the form most of all. Your syllable count appeared to be spot on.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this one. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of my way  
Review by Chris Breva
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem is about a person who is learning to walk their own path. It describes the path in great metaphoric terms and imagery. It basically says the individual goes through all types of situations, but no matter what we face we pretty much face it alone.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the metaphors.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Courted  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This piece is about final judgment, which I agree with you, we all face. You discuss the angel of death being the one who does the judging. I have to disagree. It will be Jesus who does the judging. Still your poem is on point. We must all be prepared for that day to come.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it may make a few consider their eternal fate.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry. If you had broken this down into stanzas I think it would have helped.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I love this essay about the war between Athens and Sparta. While we may never know what actually started the war we can make some pretty strong guesses. You seem to concur with this author. I agree with you but only time knows for certain.

Your spelling and grammar: According to my spellchecker "Peloponnesian" is spelled wrong.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I was a history minor in undergraduate school so I love history.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score. Your points were clear.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: There are two Limerick poems here so it is difficult to review both in one review. I found your Limericks to be zany as Limericks should be. They are wholesome, which is not usually the case with Limericks but I applaud that.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that they rhymed and were consistent to form.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: The first Limerick had an extra syllable in the last line so was a bit inconsistent. Limericks can have up to nine I believe so it was still okay, just inconsistent with the opening ones.

I would also suggest separating them into different b items.

Closing remarks: Thank you for the laugh. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This was a tale about an old veteran donning his uniform to welcome home the remains of one soldier and a hero who accompanied him. I was unclear as to who the friends were. Perhaps the old soldier knew both the deceased and the one he hugged. At any rate this story is a tear jerker.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: It was a moving tale. I live at the West Virginia Veterans Home with real heroes. You can see the memories in the eyes of the combat veterans here. I never ask but as chaplain I hear their stories. They are true heroes as are the deceased. Freedom is never free.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this moving piece. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Hasta La Vista  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I came in here today to do some reviews and critique some work but all the poems I have read thus far have been excellent. This one about the common cold was no exception. I thought it was a rejected lover until the last stanza. That was an excellent twist!

Your spelling and grammar: I thought you had misspelled Hasta la Vista but the Internet says you spelled it correctly. Spanish is not my strong point.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the flow and the rhyme scheme. The plot was good. The twist at the very end was the best.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I too love the terminator movies. The sequels were not as good though. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This essay is about Psalm 1. Psalm 1 is one of my favorites along with 23, 52, and now 91. I agree with you that we do wake up with choices to make. As believers with some time behind us we have experience as you say and we know which way to go. it is very easy for us to become complacent. If the devil can get us to skip one service or one devotion, it becomes easier to get us to continue to kip them until we are completely gone. Your essay is absolutely correct. We must push on.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it was full of doctrine and based on God's word.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: It was not poetry. I typically only review poetry but saw the labeling and title for this.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem was about air warfare and combat in the medieval ages. While dragons do not actually exist, they were often fabled during the medieval era because superstition reigned supreme. Your poem discusses how the sound of gathering troops sounds like thunder. The Bible often referred to similar sounds of conquest.

Your spelling and grammar: Looked great to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything. I sat out to write a critique but could find nothing to critique! Congratulations on your Quill nomination. After reading the poem I could see why. The flow was smooth and the metaphors and images excellent.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this lovely piece. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem is a haiku about summer, my favorite time of year. This summer may be a mess because COVID-19 may keep us all locked away. However your poem reminds us of how pretty summer can be.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I own the Oriental Poetry contest, but I am no judge of Oriental forms including haiku. I just know what I like and I like the form. I think you did great.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem is about two lovers who part company and seemingly go away friends. I like it. My ex-wife and I did that. We were friends until she died.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the romance.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score. It struck a nerve with me. I think it is a quality write.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Sanctuary  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This is about a sanctuary, a safe place to escape the rigors of life. I believe we all have a sanctuary. I had one where I could see anything that approached long before I was seen and used it to escape many times. You say this was where your love of trees began and you have loved them since.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that you had a sanctuary. We all need one.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: The length. My attention span is short sometimes.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of WE'RE ALMOST HOME  
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This is a poem about a family road trip. A family member is going to see the mother they haven't seen in a long while. It makes me want to go see my mother. I can't because she passed away several years ago. I'm glad she isn't here now or she would surely contract COVID-19. Her immune system was weak.

Your spelling and grammar: Looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I love couplets. They are surprisingly hard to write.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: If anything the length.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Broken  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: Resentment is a harsh school master and it seems you have a lot of it toward this person. I hope you have calmed down and maybe even moved on to forgiveness by now? I can understand why you are upset. You are alone and hurt and that makes us all angry.

Your spelling and grammar: "Sacrafice" in the poem Fallen is actually spelled S-a-c-r-i-f-i-c-e or sacrifice.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it was healing for you.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: The length and format. I like mid length, rhyme and meter poetry.

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Review of Fleeting Memory  
Review by Chris Breva
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem is about a conversation between two people apparently involved with each other. It is one of those famous dear John letters as the speaker tries to gain the attention of the other.

Your spelling and grammar: Your spelling looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyme scheme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I would have liked to have seen it broken up into stanzas instead of a paragraph.

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Review by Chris Breva
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This poem is about an abusive husband and father. No woman and child should ever go through that. The man in this is no man at all, but rather a coward and a bully venting his anger on the innocent. I was that man for a long time and then recovery from addiction and Jesus Christ changed me. Such behavior is inexcusable.

Your spelling and grammar: "Pain, all inclussive, washes over me as his fists rain down on my twelve year old body. I scream... So loud that nothing comes out,"

You wrote innclusive. It should be "inclusive".

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you wrote this. I pray you did not follow in your dad's footsteps and become an abuser yourself?

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter.

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Review of Mother's Day  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I agree that mothers are worth more than one day, but then a lot of people only set aside one day a year for Jesus and He is worth more than all mothers put together. I guess we just have to accept that mankind is hung up on the negative.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good all the way through.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked this tribute to mothers. I am a man so I never experienced the child birth part, but I was both Mom and Dad to my son for many years.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter.

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Review of Iambic Pentameter  
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This piece is about Iambic Pentameter. Iambic meter is one of my favorite forms of poetry although I wouldn't even try to write in it. I love the Dah-duh dah duh beat of iambic meter. You're absolutely right. Iambic pentameter deserves and in & out.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay as far as I could tell.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that you're allowing people the opportunity to either do it or blow it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: It wasn't poetry. I was disappointed.

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