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#4496470

Review of 10 Thoughts At The End Of The Day

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I don't know where you are from, what age you are, or what you look like, but if you don't mind getting involved with a 58 year old man who doesn't mind your lumps then hit me up. I'll enter a relationship with you. It will have to be a distance one because I live at the West Virginia Veteran's Home in Barboursville WV and am not allowed to have guests. I would prefer a distance relationship until I finish university this fall anyway due to time constraints. I too am very lonely. Perhaps we are each other's answers? Let me know if you are interested in dating at a distance and I'll send you my phone number.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I related to it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the high score.

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#4496469

Review of The Dragon Slayer

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Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Your poem works fine as it stands or it may also make a good prompt! Have you considered entering it into one of the prompt contests on here. I could think of a thousand direction to go with a fading dragon!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the endless possibilities it opened.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the high score.

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#4496377

Review of The Benefit of Doubt

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I questioned my faith for a long time. I explored every other religion and questioned my own faith for the longest time. I looked at all the evidence and am a Christian as a result. I agree. Never accept anything blindly. Have a reason for what you believe.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the truth in it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prfer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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#4496375

Review of fight

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: 13+

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: My family was anything but rich financially, but I guess we were rich in other ways such as traditions and values. My parents taught us the value of hardwork and what it meant to make a commitment. Perhaps those are the best treasures one can receive. I tend to think so.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: The sentiment.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I always preferred rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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#4496302

Review of GRANDADS ALLOTMENT

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I liked it all but the last part. The last rhyme seemed contrived. Perhaps it was just me but it took away from the natural flow. I like gardening though. I grew up on a farm and can appreciate the work that goes into it.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Most everything.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I've already discussed it.

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#4496274

Review of Bending The Impossible

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Sometimes we have to do the impossible. In the military we used to say "The hard we do right away, the impossible takes a little longer, and miracles are done by appointment."
Your poem puts me in mind of that saying. Yes the impossible is possible. I tell people all the time to never say the sky is the limit because there are footprints on the moon!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the upbeat attitude.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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#4496253

Review of Heroes

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: As a veteran myself I can tell you that this poem deserves six stars. There are a lot of men on both sides who never go home because they fight for what they believe in. I don't hate the enemy. He or she is fighting for what they believe in and I respect that. I love this poem that memorializes those who do not make it back.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: The patriotism and honor were tangible.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the five stars.

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#4496252

Review of Unease

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: It sounds like there is some history and some issues going on between two people here. Hopefully it all works out. I suggest to people all the time that they should get a chain and attach it to a two ton sled and drag it behind them wherever they go for exercise. Of course they look at me like I've lost my mind. Then I ask them why they choose to drag that two ton emotional sled with them then? It sounds like you are dragging a big sled with you. Resentments will kill you. Forgiveness is not for the perpetrator. Forgiveness helps the victim.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that you are looking at this situation. Healing begins when we own our pain.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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#4496249

Review of Kimee's Day

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Life in a nursing home is indeed tough. I have known and do know many people who work in nursing homes. You become attached to the patients, knowing that ultimately you are going to lose them. Geriatrics is a tough field. I'm a peer support specialist, which is part of the mental health trek so I work with a lot of geriatric clients myself. This poem nails the sentiment of loss many have.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyme scheme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the high score.

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#4496240

Review of Uncertainty

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Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Oh the broken heart. I hate knowing anybody gor=es through that but it happens all the time. I think that in the end it ultimately makes us better people. The pain of heartbreak is what teaches us to appreciate true love when it comes along.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I enjoyed the rhyme scheme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

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#4495321

Review of Fade

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Broken hearts are painful. I'll agree to that. However, I learned a long time ago to never let my self-worth rest on having a significant other. Self-worth comes from me. Then when the significant other in my life walks out (or dies in my case) my self-worth remains intact. I don't need them to define me and thus I do not "fade".

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I connected.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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#4495311

Review of My Lady of the Mist

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Did you know there really is a "Lady of the Mist"? She is said to haunt Niagara Falls, where the Native Americans of that region, Iroquois I believe, would sacrifice a virgin to the falls every year. Thhe Lady of the Mist is a legend up there. They have tours that go down into the falls and the tour guide gives her history as the boat churns around under the falls. It's quite fascinating.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: The story line was good.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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#4495281

Review of The Little Things

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Amen! I love this poem! It sings from beginning to end and has a ton of meaning. As a preacher I could not have spoken it better! It does seem our world is falling apart at the seams. The little things are taken for granted. Everybody is in a hurry to get nowhere. I have enough money to live on and need nothing more. If I work it is because I want to. I usually want to because there is nothing else to do. However I should follow your advice and enjoy the quiet.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the theme and rhyme scheme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing.

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#4495278

Review of Beyond Reason

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: 18+

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I can think of a million ways you could go with this one! I think I would change the category and enter it as a prompt though. In fact, there is a contest on here called "Prompt Me". I don't have the link but I think I would look it up and enter your work there. It would fit most any category and you may win a prize!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the possibilities it possesses. As a writer myself I can see them.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing.

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#4493388

Review of Making Love in April Rain

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: It sounds like an enjoyable experience. I'm glad you had a moment of pleasure. All too often the enjoyable moments in life are fleeting. The memories linger forever but the moment itself is caught up in time and infinity.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the passion.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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#4493373

Review of Your Everclear

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: There was a time when my average breath alcohol concentration was .40 or higher. I should have died from alcohol poisoning many times over and other types of overdoses even more times than that. It is only by the grace of God that I am here today but that same grace has kept me drug free for over ten years. The unfortunate part is that you may have to watch your friend die without ever seeing the light. Addiction is a tricky disease and I believe it is a disease.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the concern you obviously have for your fiend. Have you ever considered going to Al-anon?

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse or prose.

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#4493368

Review of My family

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Your six year old sounds adorable! It also sounds like you have a very astute, smart six year old on your hands. When I was six I could have given you all kinds of things I liked and adored about my family, but I do not know if I could have articulated those ideas. Your child sounds very smart.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

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#4493363

Review of I am me!

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: ASR

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: We all play dozens of roles on a daily basis. I am a preacher, a soldier in the Salvation Army, my Salvation Army corps adult Sunday school teacher, a peer support specialist/peer recovery coach, a college student, a father, and many other things. The most important thing I can be however is me. I like that you kept going back to "I am me" because that is your most important role. There is no other me or no other you.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the individualism you expressed. It was nice having a look into your life.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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#4492748

Review of Blocked

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Oh yeah. Writer's block. The curse of writers. I have had it many times. What is really frustrating is to have it when you are trying to meet a deadline or write some major research paper. It can be quite frustrating. I've never really found a good way to handle it.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I empathized.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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#4492583

Review of Texas Drought

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I don't know when the drought occurred or if it is current. I will pray that you all get relief. I wish we could have sent some of the water we had here this past winter. It rained a lot here. Fortunately we did not flood but there was plenty of rain. I know. Nature seems unfair. I guess we just trust that it will all work out in the end.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyme pattern. I love rhyme and meter poetry. Unfortunately most seem to prefer free verse and prose. I think it takes more skill and talent to use meter and rhyme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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#4492582

Review of Much

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Short, concise, and to the point. I like it. I wonder though if you're as broken as your poem implies? I think we're all broken in some ways but we often sell ourselves short. After all, you wouldn't live very long no matter where you are on this planet if you weren't pretty resilient and flexible. The ability to bounce back is what makes us human.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the format. I usually tend to like metered poetry but this seemed to have meter, whether intended or not. I just wasn't familiar with the form or did not recognize it. It was very similar to tanka.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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#4492581

Review of Kiya's sig

Review by Chris Breva

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Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I usually review poetry because my attention span tends to wandeer if I read anything much longer. However you had no poetry so I thought I'd look at some of your sigs. We have some very talented graphic artists on here and this signature was no exception. The colors match perfectly and blend well. I like the word "joy" attached because I am sure you bring joy to the hearts of many. Beautiful signature.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the color scheme was my favorite part. I tend to like blue but these colors matched well.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

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Review of A moment

Review by Chris Breva

In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This sounds like a very romantic moment and I believe you have captured it well. The emotions were strong and the imagery was excellent. I could envision two lovers in a warm embrace lying on a blanket under the blue sky. Good job!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the romance. I'm a man and perhaps not the most romantic but I enjoy a good, tasteful love scene.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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#4492577

Review of Narcissist

Review by Chris Breva

In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: That definitely sounds like a narcissist! I can relate to that because I am a recovered drug addict. For years I lived the life of a narcissist. I took anything anybody had to offer and basically sucked people dry and left them when they had nothing more to offer. I am not proud of that but I bear it in mind, knowing that I could easily go back to it. Today I work as a peer support specialist helping others find their way out of addiction. It is rewarding work but to be honest I do it for narcissistic reasons: it reminds me of where I come from. I guess in some ways we are all narcissists. Humans tend to be very self-centered.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the reminder that but by the grace of God you could be writing about me.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose. I loved your poem though. The content was great.

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Review of Breathe

Review by Chris Breva

In affiliation with The Newbies Academy Group

Rated: E

| (5.0)

I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Even though I run the bi-weekly Oriental poetry contest, I do not consider myself worth of judging poetry. I simply know what I like and I do like this poem. As far as I could tell there were no technical issues. I agree with the sentiment of your poem: Jesus changes us.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it was senryu and Christian.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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