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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I admit that I did not read the whole entry as it was quite long. However, I read several poems and I think you will benefit from this review if you follow my suggestions.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I always enjoy gutsy writing. You could break this up into several items!

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I have done a lot of writing on another poetry site. One of the tricks I have learned is not to use adjectives or adverbs and drastically limit my use of prepositions. It makes for shorter sentences but award winning poetry. I have won several awards since following this rule. In fact, I won two today.

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Review of Meek Unicorn  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I always loved unicorns. I was so disappointed when I became old enough to realize they were fictional.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I enjoyed this walk down Memory Lane.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I have done a lot of writing on another poetry site. One of the tricks I have learned is not to use adjectives or adverbs and drastically limit my use of prepositions. It makes for shorter sentences but award winning poetry. I have won several awards since following this rule. In fact, I won two today.

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Review of Bitter Fruit  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I believe we sometimes ask for too much when we ask people to allow us to see the "self" that only they know. There are some people whose darker side I would not want to know, my own included at times!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I enjoyed the rhyme scheme. It made this sing-song in flow so ignore what I'm about to say in the next part, at least for this poem.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I have done a lot of writing on another poetry site. One of the tricks I have learned is not to use adjectives or adverbs and drastically limit my use of prepositions. It makes for shorter sentences but award winning poetry. I have won several awards since following this rule. In fact, I won two today.

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Review of I Am Denial  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I think I knew the person you were describing at one time. I used to see him in the mirror every day. Then I entered recovery and my life did a turn. I became a Christian and it really improved! I hope your person has mended their ways!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyme and that I related to it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: I have done a lot of writing on another poetry site. One of the tricks I have learned is not to use adjectives or adverbs and drastically limit my use of prepositions. It makes for shorter sentences but award winning poetry. I have won several awards since following this rule. In fact, I won two today.

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Review of He Has  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I like this poem. It seems to reiterate what I was talking about in my blog entry today. I had said that as I look back on my life I can see how God has guided me. Yes, there have been some really horrible times in my life but God has used all that to bless me by making me what I am today!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the faith.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. As always I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Lament  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I can understand your bitterness... and your heart break. The pain of loss is deep in your words. I can tell you a loss that hurts even worse if it is any consolation. I have had two wives. They are both now dead. Loneliness takes on a whole new meaning when you know there is no way they will ever possibly come back!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I related as I have suffered heart break. I still pang when I think of the first woman I ever fell in love with. She destroyed me.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Dear Me  
Review by Chris Breva
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I try to enter the "Letter to Self" contest every year. I have never won it but I learn a lot from it. It looks like you have set some pretty lofty goals for yourself for this year. I hope you accomplished them!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of Day to Day  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Anybody who knows anything about me knows that I love rhyming poetry. Pantoums are among my favorite though I have never written one. They have an interesting rhyme scheme. I also agree that life can be rigorous. I just bought a new pair of boots for school this fall and I have worn them once. So your line about new shoes is my favorite.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I related to your subject.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of Klingon Hailing  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I didn't count syllables or do any of that but I know your poem flows well. I have watched every episode of Star Trek ever made and I can see this plot unfolding. I love the way Star Trek has evolved over the years. I love the new scenery on it.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I love the flow and the plot.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of Haiku  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I run the Oriental Poetry Contest but I am far from an expert on haiku or any other Oriental form. I know that most haiku follow 5-7-5 syllable scheme but I understand that rule is not written in stone. Therefore I won't count syllables.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like that you even tried trisd difficult form.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of Ariadne's Thread  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I am anything but good at cinquain. However I am good at knowing what I like and I like all metered poetry. This one is no exception. Thank you for attempting it. Your syllable count looks appropriate to me.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing. If I were to rate it the rating would be high.

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Review of Joy of the Muse  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I can definitely relate to this one. When the muse hits one has to write. I am in a dry spurt at the moment. I hope it passes before I go back to Marshall. I start next week and I'm certain I will have papers due. This is my last semester so I've done most of the hard stuff. This semester is primarily for the hours. One class is required though. I'm taking a geography class in lieu of a science class. I am terrible at math so they are allowing me to take Geography 101 for a science requirement.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I definitely related. I loved the metaphors and imagery.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: just the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Train Tracks  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I live close to the railroad where I live. It has gotten to the point that I seldom here them anymore. I think after a while you sort of block them out or they become just background noise. I would imagine that is your case by now. Hope you are warm now that summer is here.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I related to it. I have often wanted to hop a train to anywhere.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review of Back Home  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I grew up on a 298 acre farm in West Virginia. I've spent many summers working in the garden and winters cutting firewood. I know exactly what you mean. While I don't miss the back breaking work, I miss the sunshine and wild life of the farm. Your poem takes me back a few decades!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the memories it invoked.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Oh the dangers of one night stands! Maybe this is the one who is not meant to get away? Perhaps this is the one who will give me an STD or break my heart? I've had a few one-night stands. I think we all have. There is danger in them though!

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the way you described the reasons not to indulge.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: What many people don't realize politically, is that the current president is never responsible for the current state of affairs. The office holder of today is reaping the rewards of the laws signed and passed by past office holders. It usually takes 3-5 years for most laws to have any effect, so what the former administration did will be reaped by the current one.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the high score.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I feel that way about most of the crap people refer to as music in this day and age. Rap makes me want to smash the radio and then gouge out my ears. Hip hop is pretty much rap. Modern country makes me sick. I haven't heard good rock and roll since the Beatles. So I agree.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the rhyme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I love Limericks. I am not one to judge them any longer because the area of my brain that takes care of timing, mathematics, etc was damaged in a wreck. Therefore I did not try to count syllables or do any of the nit picking I would be suppose to do here. I just know I like what I read. Besides the rules for Limericks are different in different sources so it matters not about syllable counts. Your rhyme scheme was good and it had flow.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhyme scheme and flow. The story line was hilarious.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of Crush  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: Yes, crushes can be very disheartening. I remember having a deep crush on my eighth grade math teacher. Of course she never did a thing to reciprocate and I never told her. I knew she couldn't be my girlfriend but it was hard for me to sit in her class every day. I finally completed eighth grade and moved to another school.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I related.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose. I feel rhyme and meter take more skill as well as raw talent.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I have seen those travelers too. I interpretted your poem as meaning leaves that sort of blow in the wind, seemingly going nowhere and everywhere. I watched a newspaper get caught up in the wind one time and fly so high in the sky that I lost sight of it. I found it a few days later in nearly the same spot it had left from.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the imagery.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose. I always felt it took more skill and talent to write rhyme and meter.

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Review of A Bug-A-Boo Mess  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: This is a catchy little child's tune that may actually motivate a child to clean their room! I like what I read here. It's gutsy in that it used some near rhymes instead of full on rhymes. It had pretty even flow.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it would get a child's attention.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the high score.

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I have never watched a poem on YouTube before. I'm glad my first was a Christian poem. I am a believer. I find that I am not in the spiritual place I want to be. I know what to do about it and have asked Jesus to renew our relationship and restore me to where I need to be. Your poem is a good reminder.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the message it conveys. I hope many read it and heed it. If one soul is converted you have done well.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing, thus the high score.

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Review of No Matter  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: It sounds like love to me. When I find that I want to be with somebody, even when I am so angry with them that I can't stand it,, then I know I love them. I think you are in love.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the romance.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

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Review by Chris Breva
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I think the wind does have paths that it follows. After all, man uses those paths for flight all the time. Like the sea, the sky has currents. We only need to know where to find them. Ask any pilot and they will tell you that they follow these currents when they can.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the imagery.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter poetry over free verse and prose.

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Review of Trinity  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: 18+ | N/A (Review only item.)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. I look forward to seeing more work from you in the future. I try to do as many reviews as I can each week. I am a professional writer and I know the value of a good review. So I try to give them as often as possible. I am also reviewing this article in association with Anniversary Reviews forum. Happy account anniversary!!

My overall impression of your work: I like any type of rhyme or metered poetry and cinquain is no exception. This is a hard form to write. I am not and will not pretend to be a good judge of it. I do know what I like to read and I liked reading this one.

Your spelling and grammar were good as far as I could tell. I read quickly so I could easily overlook something. However everything looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: the imagery. I also liked the parallels
to humans.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing.

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