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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This is a poem about grief and lost love reunited. Though it starts out sad it has a good ending as the lovers are reunited. I don't necessarily buy the reincarnation implications but that is okay. We each have our own beliefs and I respect that.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: The rhyme of course. I love rhyme poetry. Then when you add romance you can't go wrong.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Something Epic  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I loved this sing-song poem about living a fantasy life! I think all of us writers can relate to this on some level because after all, what are we but dreamers? I think you did a very good job of telling me what your dreams are. keep on living in that dreamland!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the sing-song rhythm.

What I liked least about your article/poem was:Nothing thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. It was fun to read. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This is a poem about rain. It flowed well from beginning to end. I had no problems with the intended rhythm. I enjoyed the imagery as well.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it was a rhyming poem. maybe I'm just old fashioned but I prefer rhyme.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this one. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of A Warning  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I love this poem! I think I heard that story once. As I recall it did not end well for her. You'll have to write it sometime. I love the shape though and the way the story seems to wind down to the end. Good job!

Your spelling and grammar: looked great.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything. I love form and meter poetry.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I love the idea of this site! I love this site, but some of the things posted here are not worth reading. This article is wholesome and fulfilling. I love reading of people's testimonies and stories that we will be sharing eternally!

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you stepped out on faith and did this. Sometimes the faith to start sets us on a beautiful journey.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing, thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Thank you for setting this up. I will have to come back and read some of these testimonies. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Sweet Sixteen  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I lost my wife about six years ago to a massive, sudden coronary that left her brain dead. Your poem brought all that back to me. It is one of those bittersweet memories because I will always have a part of her with me. I just wanted you to know that I relate to your poem on an emotional level. Good job.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you were able to articulate such a bittersweet memory.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: There were a few rough patches but that could have been the way I was reading it.

Closing remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of The Quills  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I adore the Quills. What could be better than a best of the best as in the Quills? I hope to be able to participate more. You all do such a great job of showcasing the hard work of others. I have and will always know you as "the Quills Lady".

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I love everything about the concept.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: nothing.

Closing remarks: Thank you Elle! Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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What I like best about this piece: This is a history lesson on Greek culture. I was a history major in undergraduate school, so this was perfect for me. You described a typical Greek meal and then designed a crossword puzzle to go with it. Seeing as I am terrible at crosswords I did not even try. You gave a good history lesson though.

What I liked least about this piece: I couldn't solve the puzzle! Are the answers available anywhere? I would especially like to know what they used for sugar. I'm guessing maple syrup but I have never been to Europe so I don't know. Give me a clue? Please!

Areas for improvement: None

Spelling/Grammar Grade: A

Closing Remarks: Thank you for writing this. Keep on writing on!

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Review of Chilli con Carne  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What I like best about this piece: Oh yes. Chili con carne. I love that stuff. Your recipe looks so inviting. I can almost taste it and see it all over my pretty white uniform shirt! You're making me hungry.

Where did the chocolate come from though? Just for curiosity sake. I think I did have it one time with just a hint of cinnamon, but never chocolate. I guess the chocolate is desert? I love chocolate in almost anything. Just don't tell my ex-wife. She would have made chili con chocolate if she'd thought of it.

What I liked least about this piece: Sounds interesting.

Areas for improvement: None

Spelling/Grammar Grade: A

Closing Remarks: Thank you for writing this. Keep on writing!

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Review by Chris Breva
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Your port has been Power raided in a WDC Power Reviews raid! Okay so it's also an anniversary review for the best forum owner on the web! Congrats on your Quill!

I loved this poem about family dinner. I got fat just reading it. You described how each one brought their own tasty dish. I could just see the family gathered around the table getting fat on that cherry pie you mentioned.

What I like best about this piece: I liked the flow. It was sing-song in nature and I like that. It was also Limerick metered which I liked.

What I liked least about this piece: The fifth stanza did not have as much of a sing-song flow. Maybe it was an emotional stanza for you due to its nature?

Areas for improvement: None really.

Spelling/Grammar Grade: A

Closing Remarks: Happy account anniversary from your forum Anniversary Reviews Forum! You deserve the honor.

Yes, I am using this to double as a WDC SuperPowers Raid as well. We're doing food today.
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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What I like best about this piece: I liked that it was about farm animals and farming, which fits the theme of today's raid. I also like that it is on your account anniversary so I can make it count double. It was an interesting word search. The last word was hard to find because it was part of two other hidden words thus already circled! Everybody loves a good mystery. Looking for clues was fun.

What I liked least about this piece: Nothing thus the five stars.

Areas for improvement: None

Spelling/Grammar Grade:A

Closing Remarks: Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum. Thank you for being a member of WDC! Thank you for writing this.
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Review of I Praey  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: TThis was sing-song so I loved it. It is about a character who woke up with regrets. I have definitely done that and can relate. You express how the enemy is after your soul. If you truly feel you are in eternal danger Jesus Christ and you need to discuss it.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: It was sing-song. I also related to it having woken up many times eating regrets.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars. I'm easy to please.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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What I like best about this piece: I love Siamese cats. Your entry is about a Siamese named "Cookie". At first I thought it was about food due to the title. Cookie sounds like a very pretty cat though. I could just imagine the little "Gixmo" like look on her face!

What I liked least about this piece: the punctuation. It was difficult to read because it read like one long sentence.

Areas for improvement: Punctuation and grammar

Spelling/Grammar Grade: A

Closing Remarks: Thank you for writing this. I usually only review poetry but am looking for Food items for a raid. I thought "Cookie" might be a cookie recipe.

This is also an Anniversary Review. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum and WDC. Write on!


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Review of Spongebob Poem  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: You wrote a poem about Spongebob Squarepants. There probably isn't a parent alive who can't sing the Spongebob theme song word of word. Children just love that cartoon and I had to chuckle when I read this poem, especially about Squidward. Spongebob was indeed Squidward's biggest regret and worst nightmare.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: It made me laugh.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the five stars.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of The Walk  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: You have a eulogy here in which you (the deceased) try to pass comfort and wisdom on to those left behind. I believe that once we are gone eulogies will be all we will leave behind. I hope this one is read at your passing. I think it makes a good tribute. It expresses your heart and shows you to care.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I like the compassion this eulogy shows.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter over free verse and prose.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of I Hate Poets  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: You have an article here about hating poets while trying to become one. Poetry is an art. If you have ever studied music you will have some understanding of the measures and beats that go into poetry. You have expressed here frustration at many poets, particularly yourself. I understand.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that you expressed it and I understood it.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Format. I prefer rhyme and meter.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: You have a blog entry here about what you found at Andre the Blog Monkey's Monkey Bar. The prompt required you to do a little sleuthing which you did. I am no expert at writing blogs, but I've come to some understanding that they are informational. You answered the prompt well.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it was a blog entry. It informed and I like to learn, even trivial things.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: It wasn't poetry.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Fifty things  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I have to admit that first of all, I'd have to think long and hard before I come even come up with fifty things to do before I die. I respect you for having a bucket list and for sharing it with us. The funny thing is that I related to a lot of what is on your list. For example, I have never been Fudpucked either. I always thought Fudpuckers was just somebody trying to be vulgar.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that I agreed with several points.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: It was long for me. My attention span drifted once or twice.

Closing remarks: Thank you for sharing your bucket list with us. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: I think the questions you have asked here would make an excellent blog entry. If you don't mind, I will copy them and then start a blog forum and use those for the first ten days of the blog. Of course, I will give you credit. I think these hypothetical questions are perfect.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: Everything

What I liked least about your article/poem was:Nothing

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. With your permission I will use them. Send me the link please so I will have it. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Dreamer's Demise  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: You've written a poem here about a mermaid that died trying to become an actress. I like the way you say that we all make sacrifices for what we want. I particularly like the way you say we need to be more careful about roaming out to places we have never seen. It can be dangerous to travel and we must do a little research instead of acting on impulse.

Your spelling and grammar: Looked good to me.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the rhythm. It was sing-song.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: The next to the last line threw off the rhyme sequence.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of One more chance  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: You have written a poem here about everybody deserves a second chance at love. I believe God would agree with you as He gave His Son so that man could have a second chance at a love affair with the Almighty. I applaud your effort because it read a lot like a Psalm.

Your spelling and grammar: I saw no grammar mistakes.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked that it read a lot like a Psalm.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high rating.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
Rated: E | (5.0)
This sounds almost like one of the Psalms. King David would approve I am sure. Good job!


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Review of A Child's Place  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This almost sounded like a tale of child abuse until I got to the end and it became clear that you were referring to the parental discipline that makes children into mature adults. I thought at first you were referring to a parent going overboard but I don't think so. Discipline is never fun. Discipline is not necessarily abusing though and children do need a little heat to mold them.

Your spelling and grammar: looked okay.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the overall message. Discipline is necessary. Just don't abuse the child.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: the format. I prefer rhyme and meter though I write free verse myself more often than I do meter.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review by Chris Breva
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: This was a poll about old school video games. My son wants me to buy him a television so he can play games on it. He's getting a PS4. Your poll took me back a few years and reveals a lot about you. Only old-timers or collectors remember those 80's games.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: It was a poll. Short and easy.

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing thus the high score.

Closing remarks: Thank you for posting this. I'll be back next year. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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Review of Undiscovered  
Review by Chris Breva
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I really enjoyed reviewing your article. Please take anything I say here as my personal observations. Use what you can and lose the rest.

My overall impression of your work: Hi Siren. Just doing a review to celebrate your account anniversary. I liked this poem about a road trip on a discovered road in "the middle of nowhere". I don't recall that you said those exact words but they were implied. Some of my favorite memories are about similar trips on Sunday afternoons.

Your spelling and grammar: looked good. I always allow for poetic license in punctuation.

What I liked most about your article /poem was: I liked the trip down Memory Lane. My favorite line was about the property "covered in layers of time". Nice metaphor!

What I liked least about your article/poem was: Nothing. It was a good ballad.

Closing remarks: Thank you for writing this. I'll be back next year for sure. Happy account anniversary from Anniversary Reviews Forum!

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