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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I just read this from read and review page. It is a very good message with an unique concept. You have written a very good piece of story. Yes, we all have skills to communicate. You truly said that "waiting your turn to speak, not interrupting, valuing everyone's opinions, and offering your own contributions."

Thank you for sharing your opinion.
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Review of Spring Nostalgia  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem and the vivid details of nature. The descriptions are beautiful. The tone I find this poem is cheerful. I could imagine the scene.

Thank for sharing!!
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Review of Lost on Route 66  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Truly this is a good folklore poem. It creates the story with beautiful images . I like the way you told the story of good descriptions of Erin's spirits. I like the lines "Banshees wait in graveyards
ghosts don't get their kicks."


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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi Hooves!!

I like this family story. It has beautiful thoughts. The role of a loving aunt in a child’s life should be a cherished one and, more important, a necessary one. In this story you describe your aunt Catherine who create a great role in your life.

The title of the story fits the themes of the story. I like the happy ending. The dialogues are believable. They floats beautifully.

I like the emotions evokes in this story.
Overall it told beautifully and well-written. I enjoyed it!!
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Review of Miss Henrietta  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This wonderful piece of yours is rather epic. I like the story you crafted here.
This poem is powerful in its story and rhyme . I feel the sadness woven in this poem by the line “While sitting at her dining table,
Staring with unseeing eyes,
A dry encrusted crimson band
Adorns his neck, there by her hand.

I feel that it wrote from a person’s life experience, senses and emotions, and it looks great.

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Review of The Winning Goal  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a good story written and told with the given prompt "The Winning Goal". The title fits this story. Though there is no dialogue but it floated beautifully. I like the ending.
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Review of The Pig And Rhino  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice to see you penned down your thoughts so beautifully. I like the Pig and Rhino story.

The fonts are appropriate and easy to read. Thank you for sharing your work! Keep writing!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)


This is a good blog written about life. And from personal experience and images. I enjoy your descriptions and the point of view. I like how you you begin it with a new paragraph. It makes me reading to the end. And I hope you will write and share your metaphor of life with us.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A chill in the air: Is a nature story. This is a good story written from personal experience and views.
The words are so true “But the endless winter of 2009 tore away my love of the seasonal cold, as I had thought forever, until the summer of 2021 came and my mask,”.

I learned many about you and the nature of Australian winter. And I hope you will write and share your works with us.
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Review of Blue Light  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Blue light: Is a nature Poem, pulls the readers to an enchanted nature of night. The poet has painted a charming poem of night with lightning bugs, bats, nightingale, stars and so on. All the natural things sings in melodies of colors of night.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I just read your story about "Tina" on the review request page. This is really a good story. Beautifully told and written that readers can relate your story. I like the suspense. The fonts is appropriate and easy to read. I like the ending.
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Review of Jackie Runs Away  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story on behalf of "The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. I enjoy every characters and their point of view.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: The dialogue floated beautifully. I like the presentation.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Jackie”. You crafted him so beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't see any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: You are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.


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Review of Unlikely Friend  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This wonderful piece of yours is a little epic. I appreciate the simplicity. It is pure, honest, but very true. A good friend always support us. They are really important for our happiness. I like the lines "The memories are
endless
If I ever lost this
I myself
will be lost"
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Review of ARE YOU A TEEN?  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Yes, teenage is the important time of a child. I missed the days. I enjoyed reading this entertaining piece. Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. I want to thank you for your sweet description. My favorite lines are "Life is a long going race
Teenage is it's cheerful phase."
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like the way you have crafted your words in this poem. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful.

The flow of this poem like the floating sea wave. I like how each like breaks. It's good to see people wrote poems with animals.

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Review of Martian Olympics  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Good creative imaginary poem. The poet imagine that in future Olympics went to Mars.

This well-crafted write delivers a powerful message to the delight of all who can read it. Science is advancing so fast that maybe in the future we will be able to play games on Mars. I liked the concept. I like the descriptions and presentations. I like the lines
“Ice hockey played out very well, and figure skating too;
the coverage of Mars’ events was beamed so Earth could view.”

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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

This is really a good story. I enjoy the characters Dirk, crow and a raccoon tale and their point of view.. Your prompt was probably to make with the words of “Are you laughing at me? “and you were probably limited by words count. The fonts is appropriate and easy to read. I like the ending words “Yet that is what happened. It was nature; it was harmony; it was indebtedness of the wild.”

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Allies of GratitudeOpen in new Window. on behalf of "The WDC Angel ArmyOpen in new Window.. This review reflects my opinion only,

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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is really a good story. I enjoy the character and his point of view. It makes me reading to the end.

Beautifully told and written and I can relate your story.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this because it goes well with your crafted words. The poet go back in time, with her mind, remember the good old days where she once lived. Standing in front of an old house she remember the Games she played in the field, she could remember her friends,and the environment. The good memories made her nostalgic. I like the lines
"No worries for the games have changed, and electronic is the rage."
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Review of Donald  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The speaker of the poem wished her late husband Donald by saying HAPPY BIRTHAY . She remember her husband who had loved her grace and her beauty in the past, who had loved her soul unconditionally. This is really a sweet poem for true love.
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Review of Donald  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The speaker of the poem wished her late husband Donald by saying HAPPY BIRTHAY . She remember her husband who had loved her grace and her beauty in the past, who had loved her soul unconditionally. This is really a sweet poem for true love.
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am sending you a review of your poem story, "The Cat and the KittenOpen in new Window.. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I like the rhythm and beat of this poem. You painted the story beautifully. I like the rhyming of The cat and the kitten;
And the scenes and stories. My favorite line are "they are stars that are
not quitting."

I enjoyed reading it.
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Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the title of your poem. It is creative imagery. I enjoy every characters of the animals. I like the architecture of lines and shapes, scenes and stories.
The story flowed beautifully. I especially like the lines "it thought that it was bright.
Much to its surprise and delight,
It decided to take a flight."

I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing!!
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Review of Fire of Spring  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this poem because of the way you painted life. I like the way you crafted your story. “spice of plants” “ashes of winter” “diamonds” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene. I could tell this poem has a positive tone.
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Review of A letter to Panda  Open in new Window.
Review by Mina~ Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a very good thoughtful piece. I enjoyed reading it and your point of views. I liked the way you told the story with descriptions. It is packed with message. I like the point “. It may be within reason to remember the past but not to repeat it and our fantasies of the future through the projection of positive thoughts alone are even less wise.”
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