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Review of Blue Light  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Blue light: Is a nature Poem, pulls the readers to an enchanted nature of night. The poet has painted a charming poem of night with lightning bugs, bats, nightingale, stars and so on. All the natural things sings in melodies of colors of night.
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I just read your story about "Tina" on the review request page. This is really a good story. Beautifully told and written that readers can relate your story. I like the suspense. The fonts is appropriate and easy to read. I like the ending.
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Review of Jackie Runs Away  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. I enjoy every characters and their point of view.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: The dialogue floated beautifully. I like the presentation.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Jackie”. You crafted him so beautifully.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't see any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: You are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.


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Review of Unlikely Friend  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This wonderful piece of yours is a little epic. I appreciate the simplicity. It is pure, honest, but very true. A good friend always support us. They are really important for our happiness. I like the lines "The memories are
endless
If I ever lost this
I myself
will be lost"
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Review of ARE YOU A TEEN?  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Yes, teenage is the important time of a child. I missed the days. I enjoyed reading this entertaining piece. Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. I want to thank you for your sweet description. My favorite lines are "Life is a long going race
Teenage is it's cheerful phase."
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I like the way you have crafted your words in this poem. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful.

The flow of this poem like the floating sea wave. I like how each like breaks. It's good to see people wrote poems with animals.

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Review of Martian Olympics  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good creative imaginary poem. The poet imagine that in future Olympics went to Mars.

This well-crafted write delivers a powerful message to the delight of all who can read it. Science is advancing so fast that maybe in the future we will be able to play games on Mars. I liked the concept. I like the descriptions and presentations. I like the lines
“Ice hockey played out very well, and figure skating too;
the coverage of Mars’ events was beamed so Earth could view.”

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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

This is really a good story. I enjoy the characters Dirk, crow and a raccoon tale and their point of view.. Your prompt was probably to make with the words of “Are you laughing at me? “and you were probably limited by words count. The fonts is appropriate and easy to read. I like the ending words “Yet that is what happened. It was nature; it was harmony; it was indebtedness of the wild.”

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Allies of Gratitude on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army. This review reflects my opinion only,

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Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I just read a chapter of yours. This is really a good story. I enjoy every characters and their point of views.

I like the suspense and the ending. The dialogs floated beautifully. I love to see your story in print.
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is really a good story. I enjoy the character and his point of view. It makes me reading to the end.

Beautifully told and written and I can relate your story.
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this because it goes well with your crafted words. The poet go back in time, with her mind, remember the good old days where she once lived. Standing in front of an old house she remember the Games she played in the field, she could remember her friends,and the environment. The good memories made her nostalgic. I like the lines
"No worries for the games have changed, and electronic is the rage."
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Review of Donald  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
The speaker of the poem wished her late husband Donald by saying HAPPY BIRTHAY . She remember her husband who had loved her grace and her beauty in the past, who had loved her soul unconditionally. This is really a sweet poem for true love.
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Review of Donald  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
The speaker of the poem wished her late husband Donald by saying HAPPY BIRTHAY . She remember her husband who had loved her grace and her beauty in the past, who had loved her soul unconditionally. This is really a sweet poem for true love.
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I am sending you a review of your poem story, "The Cat and the Kitten. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I like the rhythm and beat of this poem. You painted the story beautifully. I like the rhyming of The cat and the kitten;
And the scenes and stories. My favorite line are "they are stars that are
not quitting."

I enjoyed reading it.
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Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I love the title of your poem. It is creative imagery. I enjoy every characters of the animals. I like the architecture of lines and shapes, scenes and stories.
The story flowed beautifully. I especially like the lines "it thought that it was bright.
Much to its surprise and delight,
It decided to take a flight."

I enjoyed. Thank you for sharing!!
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Review of Fire of Spring  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really liked this poem because of the way you painted life. I like the way you crafted your story. “spice of plants” “ashes of winter” “diamonds” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene. I could tell this poem has a positive tone.
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Review of A letter to Panda  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a very good thoughtful piece. I enjoyed reading it and your point of views. I liked the way you told the story with descriptions. It is packed with message. I like the point “. It may be within reason to remember the past but not to repeat it and our fantasies of the future through the projection of positive thoughts alone are even less wise.”
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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this story written from personal experience. However there is a special concept behind this story. I like the lines "I tried to find out more about Lazar. I went to meet some people who might know him."
I like the ending poem.

Thank you for sharing!!
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Review of Maya Angelou  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautifully used the words Run, Shape in Clerihew Poem. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. I like your lines

"Now she runs before the challenge offered in her platitude:
"If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude."
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Review of In all the world  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello!

I just read your poem. The concept is unique. You have written a very good piece of poem, I liked the way you put out your feelings. You have good rhyming. I like the lines “Always a friend
Ever there when
I need you”

I love the simplicity of this poem.

Nice work!

Mina  


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Review of Sea of Music  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
The last stanza in this poem really meaningful "What does it matter, though,
If I flourish or if I perish in the depths?
Even as I gulp the music down,
This thirst will never be quenched. "
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Review of Not Inferior  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
The words are so true that keeps me reading it to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
The poem was unique subject and it flowed wonderfully from beginning to end. I like how each line breaks. The words was crisp, clear and appropriate.

I enjoyed this short story very much.
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Review of Lost Friends  
Review by Mina~
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
It's my pleasure to review this story. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. This is a good start of two friends story. I appreciate the subject. It will be better if you make this longer.
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