I like this family story. It has beautiful thoughts. The role of a loving aunt in a child’s life should be a cherished one and, more important, a necessary one. In this story you describe your aunt Catherine who create a great role in your life.
The title of the story fits the themes of the story. I like the happy ending. The dialogues are believable. They floats beautifully.
I like the emotions evokes in this story.
Overall it told beautifully and well-written. I enjoyed it!!
This wonderful piece of yours is rather epic. I like the story you crafted here.
This poem is powerful in its story and rhyme . I feel the sadness woven in this poem by the line “While sitting at her dining table,
Staring with unseeing eyes,
A dry encrusted crimson band
Adorns his neck, there by her hand.
I feel that it wrote from a person’s life experience, senses and emotions, and it looks great.
This is a good story written and told with the given prompt "The Winning Goal". The title fits this story. Though there is no dialogue but it floated beautifully. I like the ending.
This is really a good story. I enjoy every characters and their point of view. It makes me reading to the end. Beautifully told and written that I can relate your story. The characters you introduced are not boring. I like the fonts as well. I like the suspense of the ending.
It's my pleasure to review this story "Love In Cheshire 1966. Chapter 11." . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
I really liked this because it goes well with your crafted words. The poet go back in time, with his mind in Brooklyn, remember those good old days where he once lived, the street where he played . He tells “Now everyone I know has left
Perhaps a few have stayed”. He remember the people who had loved him and he feel nostalgic.
I feel this poem is positive by the lines “I’m better off where I live now
And this is where I’ll stay”.
This is a good blog written about life. And from personal experience and images. I enjoy your descriptions and the point of view. I like how you you begin it with a new paragraph. It makes me reading to the end. And I hope you will write and share your metaphor of life with us.
A chill in the air: Is a nature story. This is a good story written from personal experience and views.
The words are so true “But the endless winter of 2009 tore away my love of the seasonal cold, as I had thought forever, until the summer of 2021 came and my mask,”.
I learned many about you and the nature of Australian winter. And I hope you will write and share your works with us.
Blue light: Is a nature Poem, pulls the readers to an enchanted nature of night. The poet has painted a charming poem of night with lightning bugs, bats, nightingale, stars and so on. All the natural things sings in melodies of colors of night.
I just read your story about "Tina" on the review request page. This is really a good story. Beautifully told and written that readers can relate your story. I like the suspense. The fonts is appropriate and easy to read. I like the ending.
This wonderful piece of yours is a little epic. I appreciate the simplicity. It is pure, honest, but very true. A good friend always support us. They are really important for our happiness. I like the lines "The memories are
endless
If I ever lost this
I myself
will be lost"
Yes, teenage is the important time of a child. I missed the days. I enjoyed reading this entertaining piece. Your rhyming scheme is absolutely beautiful. I want to thank you for your sweet description. My favorite lines are "Life is a long going race
Teenage is it's cheerful phase."
Good creative imaginary poem. The poet imagine that in future Olympics went to Mars.
This well-crafted write delivers a powerful message to the delight of all who can read it. Science is advancing so fast that maybe in the future we will be able to play games on Mars. I liked the concept. I like the descriptions and presentations. I like the lines
“Ice hockey played out very well, and figure skating too;
the coverage of Mars’ events was beamed so Earth could view.”
This is really a good story. I enjoy the characters Dirk, crow and a raccoon tale and their point of view.. Your prompt was probably to make with the words of “Are you laughing at me? “and you were probably limited by words count. The fonts is appropriate and easy to read. I like the ending words “Yet that is what happened. It was nature; it was harmony; it was indebtedness of the wild.”
I really liked this because it goes well with your crafted words. The poet go back in time, with her mind, remember the good old days where she once lived. Standing in front of an old house she remember the Games she played in the field, she could remember her friends,and the environment. The good memories made her nostalgic. I like the lines
"No worries for the games have changed, and electronic is the rage."
The speaker of the poem wished her late husband Donald by saying HAPPY BIRTHAY . She remember her husband who had loved her grace and her beauty in the past, who had loved her soul unconditionally. This is really a sweet poem for true love.
The speaker of the poem wished her late husband Donald by saying HAPPY BIRTHAY . She remember her husband who had loved her grace and her beauty in the past, who had loved her soul unconditionally. This is really a sweet poem for true love.
I am sending you a review of your poem story, "The Cat and the Kitten" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I like the rhythm and beat of this poem. You painted the story beautifully. I like the rhyming of The cat and the kitten;
And the scenes and stories. My favorite line are "they are stars that are
not quitting."
I love the title of your poem. It is creative imagery. I enjoy every characters of the animals. I like the architecture of lines and shapes, scenes and stories.
The story flowed beautifully. I especially like the lines "it thought that it was bright.
Much to its surprise and delight,
It decided to take a flight."
I really liked this poem because of the way you painted life. I like the way you crafted your story. “spice of plants” “ashes of winter” “diamonds” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene. I could tell this poem has a positive tone.
This was a very good thoughtful piece. I enjoyed reading it and your point of views. I liked the way you told the story with descriptions. It is packed with message. I like the point “. It may be within reason to remember the past but not to repeat it and our fantasies of the future through the projection of positive thoughts alone are even less wise.”
I like this story written from personal experience. However there is a special concept behind this story. I like the lines "I tried to find out more about Lazar. I went to meet some people who might know him."
I like the ending poem.
Thank you for sharing!!
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