The speaker of the poem wished her late husband Donald by saying HAPPY BIRTHAY . She remember her husband who had loved her grace and her beauty in the past, who had loved her soul unconditionally. This is really a sweet poem for true love.
The speaker of the poem wished her late husband Donald by saying HAPPY BIRTHAY . She remember her husband who had loved her grace and her beauty in the past, who had loved her soul unconditionally. This is really a sweet poem for true love.
I am sending you a review of your poem story, "The Cat and the Kitten" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I like the rhythm and beat of this poem. You painted the story beautifully. I like the rhyming of The cat and the kitten;
And the scenes and stories. My favorite line are "they are stars that are
not quitting."
I love the title of your poem. It is creative imagery. I enjoy every characters of the animals. I like the architecture of lines and shapes, scenes and stories.
The story flowed beautifully. I especially like the lines "it thought that it was bright.
Much to its surprise and delight,
It decided to take a flight."
I really liked this poem because of the way you painted life. I like the way you crafted your story. “spice of plants” “ashes of winter” “diamonds” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene. I could tell this poem has a positive tone.
This was a very good thoughtful piece. I enjoyed reading it and your point of views. I liked the way you told the story with descriptions. It is packed with message. I like the point “. It may be within reason to remember the past but not to repeat it and our fantasies of the future through the projection of positive thoughts alone are even less wise.”
I like this story written from personal experience. However there is a special concept behind this story. I like the lines "I tried to find out more about Lazar. I went to meet some people who might know him."
I like the ending poem.
I just read your poem. The concept is unique. You have written a very good piece of poem, I liked the way you put out your feelings. You have good rhyming. I like the lines “Always a friend
Ever there when
I need you”
The last stanza in this poem really meaningful "What does it matter, though,
If I flourish or if I perish in the depths?
Even as I gulp the music down,
This thirst will never be quenched. "
It's my pleasure to review this story. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. This is a good start of two friends story. I appreciate the subject. It will be better if you make this longer.
It's my pleasure to review this travel story from read and review page. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This is a good story written and told from the perspective of your experience. I like the descriptions and presentations. It feels me that you are a part of the nature. It leave a stronger impression in the reader's mind.
The fonts and the way you wrote this story is easy to read. Keep writing and keep sharing!!
Yes, happiness and joy could be something we feel deep down in your soul.
I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I like this piece. I appreciate the simplicity.
The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. I like line “Stay tuned with true faith and love
The world will be seen as another Heaven!"
I like this poem about Ocean waves. The poet wrote a charming poem of nature. It is the feelings of the poet. The plot is extremely simple. The waves comforts the poet when he is lonely.
I feel this poem has a soothing tone. It has good rhythm and flowed like sea waves.
Poetry has always been one of my favorite genre. It’s a great device of express feelings . I like your poem and the way you express your feeling. I like the simplicity and the images you have used here. I like the lines "When somebody started to bicker
She made us all birds of a feather."
I just read your story about first world war. I learned you wrote it to keep a record of your writings in English.
My second language is English. Writing in a foreign language is hard and it takes a lot of practice. Especially I have difficulty in grammar.
I like the setting of the story how you described.
Beautifully constructed poem for WdC's 20th birthday. It is great tribute poem. Poetry has always been one of my favorite genre. It’s a great device of express feelings . I like the lines “Delightful bonding of a community
Comprising the whole world in one web.”
It's my pleasure to review this story "HAPPY TWENTIETH WDC: A TRIBUTE" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This is a very sweet story about a girl who gives her battered and overworked Mom a special gift. You did very good moving the story toward a happy ending.
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