I just read your poem. The concept is unique. You have written a very good piece of poem, I liked the way you put out your feelings. You have good rhyming. I like the lines “Always a friend
Ever there when
I need you”
The last stanza in this poem really meaningful "What does it matter, though,
If I flourish or if I perish in the depths?
Even as I gulp the music down,
This thirst will never be quenched. "
It's my pleasure to review this story. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. This is a good start of two friends story. I appreciate the subject. It will be better if you make this longer.
It's my pleasure to review this travel story from read and review page. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This is a good story written and told from the perspective of your experience. I like the descriptions and presentations. It feels me that you are a part of the nature. It leave a stronger impression in the reader's mind.
The fonts and the way you wrote this story is easy to read. Keep writing and keep sharing!!
Yes, happiness and joy could be something we feel deep down in your soul.
I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I like this piece. I appreciate the simplicity.
I like this poem written from personal experience and views. I like the story of Anthony and Deborah. The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. This is good tribute for a dearest friend. It's easy to read.
The last second stanza is my favorite.
"Both had tears that day as their bond was set in stone
Rings of love knowingly exchanged meant they would never be alone "
Thank you for sharing your excellent poem. And again, thank you for giving me an upgradation.
The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. I like line “Stay tuned with true faith and love
The world will be seen as another Heaven!"
I like this poem about Ocean waves. The poet wrote a charming poem of nature. It is the feelings of the poet. The plot is extremely simple. The waves comforts the poet when he is lonely.
I feel this poem has a soothing tone. It has good rhythm and flowed like sea waves.
Poetry has always been one of my favorite genre. It’s a great device of express feelings . I like your poem and the way you express your feeling. I like the simplicity and the images you have used here. I like the lines "When somebody started to bicker
She made us all birds of a feather."
I just read your story about first world war. I learned you wrote it to keep a record of your writings in English.
My second language is English. Writing in a foreign language is hard and it takes a lot of practice. Especially I have difficulty in grammar.
I like the setting of the story how you described.
Beautifully constructed poem for WdC's 20th birthday. It is great tribute poem. Poetry has always been one of my favorite genre. It’s a great device of express feelings . I like the lines “Delightful bonding of a community
Comprising the whole world in one web.”
It's my pleasure to review this story "HAPPY TWENTIETH WDC: A TRIBUTE" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
This is a very sweet story about a girl who gives her battered and overworked Mom a special gift. You did very good moving the story toward a happy ending.
FIRST IMPRESSION: I liked the overall concept of this contest. You have written the poem based on the prompt "Your favorite fictional character suddenly finds themselves transported
to the real world. What happens next?"
THE POEM: I like the story of this poem. You have good imagination.
RHYME: The free verse poem go well. You crafted the words beautifully.
SUGGESTION: I didn't any mistake.
FINAL THOUGHT: You are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.
Initial Impression: I like this poem. Through this entire poem, she painted out the wish of the little girl. I liked the rhythm and words of this poem.
Theme and Creativity: The word vividly describes the feelings of a little girl.
MY IMPRESSION: This is a good poem. Wonderfully floated with your crafted words. The title Hurricane fits your poem. I like the story.
You effortlessly portray the feel of the poem.
It's my pleasure to review this story "The Frog" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I like this children story written with 703 Words. Writing story for the children is challenging. In your story you managed it well. I especially like the endings where you told how a frog became Linda’s friend.
Dialogues flowed beautifully. You wrote “A frog sat beside the pond, green and fat.”
I think you could described the frog more details so the readers can imagine easily.
The fonts are appropriate and easy to read. Thank you for sharing your work!
It's my pleasure to review this story "Mountain Storm" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
You paint beautifully an enchanted picture of nature. The descriptions are vivid. I like the images. The poem tells the violence of storm on the mountain and its after-effects.
I like the lines
“Sun throwing the crags golden, clear
Yet darkening the deep brooding
Lower slopes.”
It's my pleasure to review this story "Blade of truth" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
I like the phrases and how each line breaks. The poem has a nice rhythm with 25 syllables. It contains twenty five lines. The title, “Blade of Truth” fits this poem.
I appreciate the thoughts and the emotions portrayed in this poem.
The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. My favorite “Now open your eye,
see how those things change.
No longer deny,
when things re arrange.”
Mina
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