This Halloween story is well written and told. Writing stories for children is a challenge because of the message. I find myself sometimes reading your stories here and I think they are all wonderful. I think your story could grab the children to reading it to the end.
You have good imagination, the dialogues are rich and floats well. It makes the children feel like they are traveling with the little characters. You crafted all the character so beautifully.
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
It’s really a wonderful piece of write. Yes, I like poetry too. I prefer to read poetry than write. Sometimes I try to use personification in my poem. I think they makes the poem vivid and lively. Poetry has always been one of my favorite genre. It’s a great device of express feelings . As readers, sometime I read poems again and again, trying to understand the deepest meaning of it.
You paint wonderfully the personification of moose , deer, raccoons, highboy, and coffee table. I like the personification of highboy “ I think the best voice for a live highboy would be jolly and deep, like Santa Claus. The highboy's personality would be helpful and welcoming.”
First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.
It's been a pleasure to review your story "My Friend Claire has no Hair" on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only,
This is a wonderful piece. I appreciate the simplicity and humorous touch of this epic poem. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful and soothing. And I love the way you crafted words.
My favorite lines
Well, that's my friend, Claire, who has no hair.
You can point, tease, laugh, and stare.
But guess what? She doesn't care.
I like this poem because it tells the true fact of life. I like the emotions evokes in this poem. Aging is a process that we all go through. It is within our control, It can be difficult to accept..
I really liked the way you put out your feelings. The poem has a nice rhythm. The rhyming aa,bb makes this poem brighter. It contains lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “I’m not done yet” fits this poem.
Good poem. I like the words and the way you wrote it with a rhyme scheme of aabccb & a syllable count of 7, 3, 7, 7, 3, 7. Love is a compassion, a feeling of hears. But nowadays true love decreasing. I love the lines "Without love! There is no light
You truly express your feelings through this poem. I like the simplicity and the rhymes.
I like way you crafted words with the 48 hours media prompt challenge.. The poem expressed beautifully the poet’s feelings of Justin song "Can't Stop the Feeling!". The poet wrote “A dream of you and happy dancing
Me in white, your wife, entrancing”.
I find the lovely thoughts inside the lines. The poem has a nice rhythm and melodic. It contains twenty lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “September dance” fits this poem. I like the lines “throwing roses into the rain
never knowing that love may one day bring pain”
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I love reading nature poem because nature brings peace in our mind.
This poem is about spring and also the feelings of the poet. I appreciate how each lines breaks. It has good rhythm and float beautifully with your crafted words. The smell, sound and the color of spring reflected in your poem.
I like this poem about coming Autumn. The poet wrote a charming poem of autumn. Each season brings different looks and beauty which reflected in this poem. It is the feelings of the poet. I feel this poem has a soothing tone. The rhyme scheme of AB AB floats well. Rhyming makes this poem happier and brighter.
You have captured a unique moment off the moon beautifully. When the world covered with lunar eclipse.
I like the way you painted it. I enjoy the color, scents and the sound of this poem. It’s so full of wonderful thoughts. Your rhyming floats beautifully. I like the lines
their silver light across the land.
An image painted by God's hand.
I just read your poem from read and review page. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Gravity" .
You have written a very good piece of poem, I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I appreciate the simplicity of your poem. The expression you have used here is great.
I just read your poem from read and review page. I like this thoughtful poem about effects of computer. The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. My favorite lines "Without the internet I
Would not be writing this.
To read me without e-mail,
Impossible it is."
This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
This is a beautiful poem. It has sweet romantic thoughts inside every line. You have written a very good piece of poem, I really liked the way you put out your feelings. The title If fits your poem. I appreciate the simplicity. You have good rhyming. The tone I find this poem is soothing and positive.
First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.
FIRST IMPRESSION: I appreciate the thoughts portrayed in this poem.
THE POEM: This is a poem about frustration and its bad effects. The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. The little rhythm poem flowed beautifully. Throughout the poem the poet questioning about the states of our mind. I like the lines “A black hole forms
Which sucks up
All the poetic melody in me".