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Review of A Duo Of Demons  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "A Duo Of Demons"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This Halloween story is well written and told. Writing stories for children is a challenge because of the message. I find myself sometimes reading your stories here and I think they are all wonderful. I think your story could grab the children to reading it to the end.

You have good imagination, the dialogues are rich and floats well. It makes the children feel like they are traveling with the little characters. You crafted all the character so beautifully.


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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

It's been a pleasure to review your story "My Friend Claire has no Hair"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only,
This is a wonderful piece. I appreciate the simplicity and humorous touch of this epic poem. Your rhyming scheme is beautiful and soothing. And I love the way you crafted words.

My favorite lines
Well, that's my friend, Claire, who has no hair.
You can point, tease, laugh, and stare.
But guess what? She doesn't care.

Thank you for sharing your work!

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Review of I'm Not Done Yet  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "I'm Not Done Yet"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only,

I like this poem because it tells the true fact of life. I like the emotions evokes in this poem. Aging is a process that we all go through. It is within our control, It can be difficult to accept..

I really liked the way you put out your feelings. The poem has a nice rhythm. The rhyming aa,bb makes this poem brighter. It contains lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “I’m not done yet” fits this poem.

Thank you for sharing your work!

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Good poem. I like the words and the way you wrote it with a rhyme scheme of aabccb & a syllable count of 7, 3, 7, 7, 3, 7. Love is a compassion, a feeling of hears. But nowadays true love decreasing. I love the lines "Without love! There is no light
only night"

You truly express your feelings through this poem. I like the simplicity and the rhymes.
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Review of The Universe.  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

I like this poem. Throughout the poem the poet questioning Are we all alone ? or is it just lies ? and Is God watching ? Can he hear the calls ?.
The poet beautifully expressed her feelings.

The poem has a nice rhythm. It contains ten lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “the universe” fits this poem. The punctuation marks gives this poem an extra flavor.

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of Sail On  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Sail On"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" . This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert.

I like the story of a sailor and the way you crafted his story. The words expressed the feelings of the sailors and their life in the sea.

The poem has a nice rhythm and melodic. It contains twenty lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “the Sail on” fits this poem. The blue fonts is appropriate.

The punctuation marks gives this poem an extra flavor.

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of September Dance  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "September Dance"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I like way you crafted words with the 48 hours media prompt challenge.. The poem expressed beautifully the poet’s feelings of Justin song "Can't Stop the Feeling!". The poet wrote “A dream of you and happy dancing
Me in white, your wife, entrancing”.

I find the lovely thoughts inside the lines. The poem has a nice rhythm and melodic. It contains twenty lines, which are separated into five stanzas. The title, “September dance” fits this poem. I like the lines “throwing roses into the rain
never knowing that love may one day bring pain”

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good story of scalp. I like the descriptions and the way you told this. I enjoyed the humorous touch of this story.
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Review of Poetry  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Yes, writing is the only way to speak up mind. I like your poem . The words are very pure and true. I like the thoughts reflects in your poem.

Keep writing!!
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Review of Rain  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Rain"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*Butterflyb* Initial Impression: I like this poem. Through this entire poem, she painted out the nature of the rain so beautifully. I liked the imaginary and words of this poem.

*Idea* Theme and Creativity: The word vividly describes the feelings of you.

*Cut* Suggestion: Poetry has its own rules. I think you need lines breaks for this poem. Because, line breaks serve an important function in setting the rhythm of a poem. Otherwise, it a good poem.

I enjoyed it reading. Keep writing!!

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Review of HELLO  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "HELLO"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: This is a good story. Wonderfully told. It is so emotional.

*BurstP* DIALOGUES: Dialogues floated beautifully. I like the ending.

*BurstP* CHARACTERS: All the characters are well developed. I especially liked the character “Ann”. I had a very clear picture of her in my mind.

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: you are a good storyteller. I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

I can’t wait to read another story from you. I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of JOY OF SPRING  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello again,

I just read this from read and review page. It's been a pleasure to review your poem.
I love reading nature poem because nature brings peace in our mind.

This poem is about spring and also the feelings of the poet. I appreciate how each lines breaks. It has good rhythm and float beautifully with your crafted words. The smell, sound and the color of spring reflected in your poem.
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Review of AUTUMN IS NEAR  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "AUTUMN IS NEAR"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

I like this poem about coming Autumn. The poet wrote a charming poem of autumn. Each season brings different looks and beauty which reflected in this poem. It is the feelings of the poet. I feel this poem has a soothing tone. The rhyme scheme of AB AB floats well. Rhyming makes this poem happier and brighter.

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of Eclipse  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Eclipse"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

You have captured a unique moment off the moon beautifully. When the world covered with lunar eclipse.

I like the way you painted it. I enjoy the color, scents and the sound of this poem. It’s so full of wonderful thoughts. Your rhyming floats beautifully. I like the lines
their silver light across the land.
An image painted by God's hand.

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Review of Gravity  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I just read your poem from read and review page. It's been a pleasure to review your poem "Gravity" .
You have written a very good piece of poem, I really liked the way you put out your feelings. I appreciate the simplicity of your poem. The expression you have used here is great.

Nice work!
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Review of FRIENDS  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "FRIENDS"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is good piece of write about friendship. Yes, the main thing in friendship is the trust which cannot be regained once broken. Trust is something if once broke it’s hard to restore.

Friends are the precious gift in this world. They makes us laugh, and we can share our thoughts with them. A true friend always stand there for us if needed.

Thanks for sharing your work with us. It's pleasure to know someone like you.

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Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "~ the black raven ~"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

I like this shape poem about a black raven. You used beautifully the symbol and images. The poem packed with message.

The narratives are great. I like the phrases “father-time please, a moment to sketch”.

I like the first stanza “Intelligent
cunning, resilient and bold
too swift to catch, too fast to behold”

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of MY ADDICTION  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Mr. Gupta!

I just read your poem from read and review page. I like this thoughtful poem about effects of computer. The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. It has good rhythm and flowed beautifully with your crafted words. My favorite lines "Without the internet I
Would not be writing this.
To read me without e-mail,
Impossible it is."

A wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing!!

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Review of "If"  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story ""If""  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a beautiful poem. It has sweet romantic thoughts inside every line. You have written a very good piece of poem, I really liked the way you put out your feelings. The title If fits your poem. I appreciate the simplicity. You have good rhyming. The tone I find this poem is soothing and positive.

I enjoyed it reading.

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Review of Writers Block  
Review by Mina~
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "Writers Block"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

*BurstP* FIRST IMPRESSION: I appreciate the thoughts portrayed in this poem.

*BurstP* THE POEM: This is a poem about frustration and its bad effects. The words are so true that keeps me reading your poem to the end. The little rhythm poem flowed beautifully. Throughout the poem the poet questioning about the states of our mind. I like the lines “A black hole forms
Which sucks up
All the poetic melody in me".

*BurstP* SUGGESTION: I didn't find any mistake.

*BurstP* FINAL THOUGHT: I enjoyed it reading.

Keep writing!!

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Review of Christmas  
Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like this poem Acrostic. The descriptions are vivid. I appreciate the way the poet painted the picture about Christmas. I appreciate the simplicity of this poem.

I think you could use some more imaginary to make it more interesting. You could bold the first letter of each word. Otherwise, It's a beautiful poem.

Thanks for sharing!!
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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
This is beautiful poem written for Short Shots Contest about a dog walking by the ocean. I could imagine where they are. You paint beautifully the scene. I appreciate how the story flowed.

I like the descriptions and presentations. The way you wrote this piece keeps me reading.

Thanks for sharing your poem Megan. It's pleasure to read your piece.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like this poem. Every words are so true "If only you would stop and listen from within and/or look around. He gives His word that He shall never leave you.

Words to soothe your soul.."

This well crafted write delivers powerful message to the readers.
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Review by Mina~
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem is really good and funny. I liked the concept of this poem. I appreciate the thoughts.
my favorite lines

"They say outside the Army,
there's lots of text online.
I'd love to post a story,
so some of it is mine."

Thank you for sharing!!
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Review of PARENTS  
Review by Mina~
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi!

It's been a pleasure to review your story "PARENTS"  on behalf of "The WDC Angel Army" 

First I want to welcome you in WDC. This review reflects my opinion only, and I am not a writing expert. I do hope you find something that is interesting or helpful to you.

This is a good piece of write and so thoughtful. Wonderfully told about the benefits of parenting. I especially liked the way you tell your story.

Parents are blessings. You truly said that Life gives us different challenges but parents are the shelter for him in this world of materialism. I agree with you.

I appreciate the way you are telling this story.

I enjoyed it reading.

Keep Writing!!

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