Interesting, a little strange. Did he really not kill her? Leaves you kind of wondering. A little too short maybe. Not bad, just kind of...I don't know...I guess I just feel this could have been just a little bit longer. Just my opinion of course!
Hmm, I could have sworn I already rated and reviewed this but it's showing that I didn't. So, I guess I'll do it again. Still a great story! Love the ending.
LOL! I love this. This is exactly the conversation I would have with the Grim Reaper if he showed up. Or close too it, at any rate. I'd be more likely to be reading one of your stories than writing one of my own.
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