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Review of Samantha's Pet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This was absolutely delightful. I figured out who she was right away, but had no idea what she was up to until the end. Very well written. You did a great job modernizing a mythological figure. No obvious errors in spelling, punctuation or grammar. Great little story!


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Review of Have a Heart  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Very nicely written. For being so short, it's quite good. I would love to see this one expanded a tad sometime. A little more backstory, maybe show the wife running off the road before revealing he cut the brake lines...just some ideas for you to contemplate. *Smile*


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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
GROAN! lol. Too funny. Great pun. The only thing I would possibly change would be to make the first 2 sentences only 1 sentence. Nice job.
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Review of Watching Time Fly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
What a wonderfully fun little story. It's short, but very well told and feels like the perfect length, though it would be fun to see it as a serial, maybe...tales of Father Time would definitely interest me. Your descriptions are fantastic. Amusing and interesting. I noticed no errors. Great job!


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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I should have seen it coming when you mentioned the mailman. Great twist. Loved this little story!
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Review of Sinking Ship  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Haha. Short but sweet. Turned out a little weird, but that's my fault. Nice job. A huge improvement from your first one.
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
reaps what he sews. (should be sows)

Short and to the point. Very sad and unfortunately a huge problem these days.It's hard to review such a short piece, especially when it comes to poetry, but this is very heartfelt and moving and I saw nothing wrong besides the first misspelling. Keep on writing!
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Pretty good story! The words you asked for fit well in the story, so excellent job!
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
It didn't work very well due to unclear directions. Instead of just asking for an action, tell us what kind of verb we need to use in order for the story to make sense. Also the animal (beginning with anthro)suggestion was just plain confusing. I think it shows some good potential with a little work. Be as specific as possible!
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Review of The Umbrella  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Very well written. An unexpected ending. I didn't notice any errors.
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very funny and sadly realistic.
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great little story, very well written. Hit close to home.
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Well written, dark and disturbing, no obvious errors. Good twist ending, though a tad abrupt. The reveal might be better if you build suspense just a little longer. Still, a fun read!
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Review of Down and Dirty  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great little story. A fun read. Excellent twist. Only error I noticed was "what sty we live in" Would sound more natural to say "what a sty we live in"
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Great contest. I will definitely try to come up with a story for this one, too. *Smile* Thanks for letting me know about it.
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
A fun little contest.
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Review of Chivalry  Open in new Window.
Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This was a fun little read and you followed the prompts beautifully. Unfortunately, the other entries were disqualified and I apologize for taking years to get back to this. I'm sending you gps to thank you for entering and as an apology for taking so long. The contest is finally back up and running so I hope you'll enter.

A Fun Little Prompt Contest Open in new Window. (18+)
Closed due to lack of interest
#1099548 by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great idea for a contest. Original and sounds like a lot of fun. I look forward to coming up with stories for this one.
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Review of Déjà Vu  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow. Just wow. This is one of the best sci-fi stories I've ever read. I really loved it. I love time travel stories to begin with and this was brilliant. My only complaint is that it's too short. I want more!! Lots more. This would be a great beginning to a full length novel. I found no errors. Absolutely fantastic!!


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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Very weird! I love it. Makes you wonder if the people are ignoring VIC or if something has indeed happened to them. Has an excellent creepiness factor. I noticed no obvious errors in spelling, grammar or punctuation. I really enjoyed this short, but sweet little story!
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Review of Stairway To Hell  Open in new Window.
Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
but also because anger was the yeast in the bread of violence, and violence was the staple of his diet. (loved this!!)

Loved the whole story in fact. A horrible man getting exactly what he deserved. Very vivid storytelling. Well done!
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Well-written, no obvious errors and nicely creepy! I thoroughly enjoyed this little story.
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
A fun and amusing story. I felt for her on her crazy bike ride to work. The ending kind of was a little flat for me. The dialogue seemed a little forced and kind of took away from the humor of the earlier part of the story, in my opinion. I didn't find any errors though, so well done!
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Review of The Scream  Open in new Window.
Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wonderfully creepy! I love the description, very well written. Great ending. Fantastic job!
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Review by Just a Penguin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Fun and interesting. As for the questions, why question a children's book? lol. I mean, most of his stuff was silly nonsense, looking for meaning in it is silly too! In my opinion. They're fun books for kids.
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