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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Tyr Annassassi,
A free-verse poetry that makes your readers smile and agree.
It's worth the wait, I believe so.
Nice, Nice , Nice, Nice Poem !
I enjoy reading this.
Thank you for sharing this true feelings of the heart.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Happy New Year 2011 !
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Review of Inspired  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello silverscorpio,
A beautiful poem for a beautiful person. I admire the chosen words that completed this poetry.
My suggestion: (Suggestion Only)
Possibly you can make three or four stanzas for the poem to be more and more admirable as far as presentation is concerned.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Write On.
Happy New Year !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
An array of wonderful creations.
Splendid Art that fits for the season.
Truly impressive and highly admirable.
I am so happy to have seen these.
You are truly blessed.
Thank you for sharing it to all of us.
GOD BLESS !
Happy New Year 2011 !
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Review of Cat Nap  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello a Minor-Poet,
A poem so fun to read. I believe all cat lovers enjoy reading this work.
My suggestion:
"settled 4 bed"
Please change this to :
settled for bed
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Happy New Year 2011 !
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Review of The Bottle  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings !
Captivating title because every bottle amazes me regardless of color, size and shape, and what I mean is an
empty bottle that I put a message and hang it in the tree.
Reading between the lines, it describes your very kind and loving heart who truly cares for this particular person who considers "The Bottle" a refuge or for whatever reason becomes a victim of this vice called Drinking.
Nicely written poem as in it rhymes and at the same time wisely presented.
Very thoughtful.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
I have nothing to correct.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Happy New Year 2011 !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello tinyastro,
Every word written touches my very own soul. A prayer, a message, a sharing and everything that you wrote reminds me of all the blessings GOD LOVINGLY BESTOWED ON ME AND TO THOSE CLOSE TO MY HEART.
One of the best reads I have in this awesome community. I am happy for you that GOD lives in your whole being.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Happy New Year 2011 !
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Review of Time  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello khaokitty,
A very interesting poetry with a very captivating title and very intriguing lines that completed this work of your own uniqueness.
It speaks of the truth especially the last stanza.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
HAPPY NEW YEAR 2011 !
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Review of Dear Judge  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
This is not the usual story that any author shares to the readers and that is the reason why I admire most of this writing.
A short story that tells how great LOVE is ! I live in this world not to judge the acts of my fellow human being but to live life to its fullest regardless of all the struggles and this story about how wonderful a person is Sarah Prater in the heart of her child and that made me appreciate more how precious God's gifts for me, especially
the gift of TIME that made me able to read and learn something very important in reading this work.
A highly impressive work from the start to the end.
Thank you for the read OF THIS UNIQUE AND WELL-WRITTEN " Dear Judge"
Keep writing and keep posting.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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Review of Thoughts  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Rayne,
Interesting title, interesting work. This poem proves that you are blessed with such a wonderful talent and you put it well in writing.
My suggestion:
The line before the last line,"I have feelings and i have a mind,"
Please capitalize the letter I
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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Review of Friends Eternal  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Annie,
A poem about the true treasures of the heart, "FRIENDS"
My suggestion is this work:
" i'll
"i "
Please change this to I'll and I
I'll miss you
I see you again
Thank you for sharing your inspiring poem.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Merry Christmas !
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Review of My Anger  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
OH ! This poem truly expresses your deepest emotion. Very good release of such feeling.
Now that you wrote these lines surely you feel much better and can face the world with a BIG SMILE.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
I like the presentation.
Keep writing and keep posting.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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Review of Plastic Minds  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
GREETINGS !
Nostalgic as well as fun to read.
It expresses also a gift of time as we journey through life.
Nice way of expressing your artistic talent.
I was amused by this line :
"Why can't toy's speak ?"
Thank you for sharing your work.
Keep writing and keep posting.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Judity,
It is always a great pleasure and honor reading your work in this awesome community.
A Christmas story that is truly admirable and every time I read your work i always learn something especially in your style of writing like the presentation, the grammar and the right words that's truly appropriate for the written
story.
Thank you once again for another great time reading your work.
I remain your forever fan.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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Review of Admiration  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello kristin,
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
The heart speaks and you have a very beautiful heart so truthful, so honest so full of love.
I am so glad to have read this very touching work.
Your admiration is added with my admiring your talent.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Stuck  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello mystery,
This poem reminds me of the song "Torn Between Two Lovers".
The chosen words, lines fit for the given title.
A free-verse poem and I believe this is not an easy situation but there is always a solution.
Thank you for sharing "Stuck"
Keep writing and keep posting.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hello judie,
An interesting story about an interesting topic.
Nicely presented and the message is clear.
Coffee, countless stories has been written and surely will be written more and more and this one is biographical so honestly written.
Wise conclusion.
Yes ! Cup after cup after cup, coffee is indeed a drink to enjoy.
Thank you for sharing your work.
Write on.
Merry Christmas !
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Review of HATE  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Star Chaser,
OUCH ! Reading this in my own point of view made me so happy for you that you made a RELEASE of your true feelings through writings.
Time heals and surely tomorrow will be a brighter day and when you read this again you can only smile and face life so willingly and so joyfully.
One very important advantage of writing is the expressing of the true emotions of the heart and later on we feel much much better.
I have nothing to correct and nothing to add. This looks like a prose written so sincerely.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Write On.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings !
A poem unique in your own way and I truly admire the creativeness.
There are some lines that I wish to answer YES and there are some lines that I wish to answer NO.
Amusing and amazing.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Merry Christmas !
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Review of Looking Back  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Mara,
Reading this "Looking Back" word after word, line after line, paragraph after paragraph, made me conclude that you are an achiever and a goal oriented individual, and most of all you are truly blessed in so many ways,and I am so happy for you.
A busy person is a happy person especially knowing and believing that you love what you are doing. YES...this is all about you, your yesterday, your today and your wonderful tomorrows so clearly full of joy with the people whom you encounter and surely will be happily a part of your most fulfilling journey.
Thank you for sharing your very impressive talent.
WRITE ON.
MERRY CHRISTMAS 2010 !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Greetings !
This is such a wonderful time to be able to read this very special forum of yours.
This moment is one of the reasons why I must have a grateful heart.
Everyday is a time to give thanks for everything.
More power to you and thank you for the opportunity for me to join this forum.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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Review of Is it all over?  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings VinBlack,
This is like a suspense thriller movie. Realistic and I do not want to stop reading not until I finished.
Like a bestseller book that page after page interests the reader..
The presentation is great.
I have nothing to correct and one thing is very sure, I consider this work BRILLIANT !
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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Review of My Own Tongue  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Helene,
A poem so real, so true and so well-written and well-presented. I believe so many authors can relate.
A splendid work and a joy to read.
Thank you for sharing your talent through "My Own Tongue"
Keep writing and keep posting.
Merry Christmas Greetings from the Philippines.
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Review of Meeting Him  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Sum 1,
A wonderful poem written for this very special season.
Interesting story behind the poetry as in an unforgettable experience with suspense.
I enjoy the rhythm and the rhyme.
Thank you for sharing "Meeting Him"
Keep writing and keep posting.
Merry Christmas !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings !
Nicely presented and well written from the start to the end.
A very interesting topic and the message is clear, and the last paragraph is the highlight of this wonderful story.
Wonderfully concluded with a question mark.
You are a highly admirable writer as in this work is truly impressive.
Thank you for sharing your talent in this awesome community.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of the truth  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ashley,
This poem reminds me of the song " Laughing in the outside, Crying in the Inside".
I rate this 5 simply because the lines fit for the given title.
It does not have a perfect rhyme and yet it sounds like the most truthful poetry in my honest opinion.
I admire the presentation.
Well, in every pain there is a lesson learned and surely tomorrow you will win.
Keep writing and keep posting.
Be very happy !
MERRY CHRISTMAS !
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