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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Greetings Kyle,
Writing a book like this needs an author of a top caliber talent as well as great time and effort.
I congratulate you for having written this and I wish you all the luck today, and all the
tomorrows of your life as an individual, as an author and as a bestseller book writer someday..
Keep up the good work.
Keep writing and keep posting.
And yes, I will be reading this until the end of the story..
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Review of Guardian Angel  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello shruthi,
You are a very good storyteller and like Sam and Cia I wanted to know the whole story simply because the title is captivating and the story itself is interesting.
I wonder why the name of Cia and Sam were not wriiten in capital letters, the first letter of their names...
All in one, I consider it a joyful and interesting read.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Valentine  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Persephone,
A love poetry that expresses fully your feelings to this particular person.
This sounds like a love song that offers a promise of love.
I admire the creativeness.
My suggestion ....
I need you know and forever
Please change the word know to .....now
I need you now and forever
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Cheating  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Greetings Arpita,
This is a very important topic that you share to this awesome community and to the whole world.
It shares a very good lesson and your thoughts are harmonizing so well.
Yes, I agree with you that honestly is still the best policy and will always be.
In my own opinion cheaters are losers, so if one wishes to win in life, one has to completely disregard cheating.
You are a wise writer and a brilliant student.
Thank you for sharing your great talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of A Job I So Need  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings mirtx,
It is indeed my joy to read once again the work of one of my favorite poets and author in
this awesome community.
The poem that fully describes the realities of life and I believe that everyday is always filled with hope to look forward for another tomorrow and the right moment comes with all the blessings that God Surely Bestows.
Thank you for another great read and my best regards.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Perfect  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello outloudgirl,
I admire the character of Cali. Brave and courageous that not even death can stop her to win in her goals in life.
The word.......;.agian.........Please change it to .... again.
Thank you for sharing your talent .
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of What if?  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Ipankey,
This is deeply emotional and I admire your courage of sharing your story to all of us in this awesome community.
I pray that All is well for you and that All will be well for you.
The miracle is repeated everyday and it will be happening to you.
God Bless You Always.
Write On !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Christina,
Fiction or non...fiction this story is very convincing and it has a very good lesson to share and the lesson is about the POWER OF PRAYER OR PRAYERS.
Yes ! Prayer is all powerful and surely the Novena works for Sasha and Bruce.
A beautiful love story tested by time and yet love wins !
A writing for me, so PERPECT in every way.
Thank you for the great time reading your work.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
I always admire and treasure the quotes as it serves as food for thought and good for the soul and lightens up the burdens of the day.
Thank you for the wonderful quotes that I read through you.
Great !
Keep writing and keep sharing and keep posting too !
God Bless !
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Review of To My Husband  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello scorpio,
You are truly blessed to have a husband and a soulmate, a best friend and everything.
My suggestion ....
The letter i
Please change it to........ I realized
your my soul mate......please change this to ...you are my soulmate
A poem so full of love, so full of loving memories, so full of life, so worth sharing to all the authors in this awesome community.
A poem so blessed.
Thank you for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Innocent  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello kelleysft,
A poem that speaks of the truth or the realities of life. Yes ! I agree with the title that fits for the chosen lines that completed this work .
My suggestion.......
The first word Decesions.........please change this to Decisions
not youre fault.........please change this to....not your fault
to young to understand......please change this to.....too young to understand
Suggestion Only !
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Valkyrie  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings billwilcox,
The story is wonderfully presented and the plot is unique and the characters are really interesting. An author that truly captivates the interest of the readers.
Thank you for sharing your work to all of us in this awesome community.
Write On. ..
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Shellybean,
A poem, a love story, life and death, flowers blooming, treasured memories,
sadness and happiness, all emotions summed up in this lovely poetry that is truly spirit
filled and full of meaning.
It touches my heart and soul.
Thank you for sharing your great talent.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Letting Go  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello vickyann,
I like the title, it offers a wonderful tomorrow.
A poem with a sad message and yet so hopeful.
The title is captivating and most of all written from the deepest chamber of the heart.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of At Heart  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
Reading between the lines I must conclude that you are very rich basing on your very own poetry simply because you own the true treasure of the heart, A FRIEND !
Wonderful poetry, wonderful chosen words that completed your work.
GREAT JOB !
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello elementactual,
Funny ending. I was thinking differently and made my own conclusion before reading the last three lines.
I like your story with a sudden twist at the end.
The truth is .....If this happens to me, I will eat all the ice cream. Also, the story has a nice or a good lesson to share as in do not make a hasty decision. Patience is truly a virtue.
Hahhahhahha !
Thank you for the great read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Greetings DJay,
Reading your work fully I wish to let you know that I respect your opinion, but please allow me to review your work first before I elaborate further.....

The word beleiving.......please change it to.....believing
Also the presentation...please put a space in every paragraph.

For me with all my heart and soul, I DO BELIEVE AND TRUST IN GOD.
Sooner than you expect, the Holy Spirit will touch your whole being and you will walk with faith in your heart.
All is well !
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review of I Have a Dream  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
A wonderful and meaningful dream and a vision that needs to be informed not only to the schools but to the whole world as well and let the people of all ages regardless of sex, nationality, religion and status to be able to read this poetry.
GOD BLESS YOU !
Thank you for the read.
Write On...
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Review of The Key  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Hello jellyjiggles,
AHA ! What a way to die !
You are a talented author.
This story needs a little editing but all in one this is like a suspense thriller movie and
I am not in favor of stealing or robbery but you did justice to your writing. The characters, the plot, the suspense and the unique ending makes this a short novel that once I started reading I do not want to put it down not until I finished the last word of the story.
Thank you for sharing your work and for the read.
WRITE ON.
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Review of Cherokee I Am  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Carlita,
Informative and nicely presented.
I admire your work that describes fully your individuality as well as your totality.
Truthful and so wonderful.
I like it the way it is and the way you are as a Cherokee.
Perfect as in Perfect !
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON!
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Review of "Crossing Over"  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings piewhackett1,
A beautiful poetry so full of love with a message from the heart.
Every line touches my very own soul as I can relate having a brother who is now with the Most High.
Thank you for sharing your deepest thoughts through a nicely written and nicely presented poem.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of A Dream.  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings !
A very fascinating story, so full of life even in dreams this story seems a reality.
I am a firm believer of dreams because I myself is a dreamer and your story touches my very own soul.
This is like a beautiful movie with a very unique ending. You may provide a happy or a sad ending as you act the role of the writer as well as the director of the story.
All in one, I am truly impressed.
I have a very minimal suggestion and it never affects my admiration of your work.
The title, please delete the period after it.
A wise and very talented author.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Truth  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Greetings !
The title is a very powerful word that captures my interest to read your work.
Philosophical in its own way.
My suggestion.....
The man is the little girl across the street
Please change this to.....
The man and the little girl across the street
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Driftwood  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Nightshift,
Living near the sea I can relate to the poem.
Philosophical and it has a good lesson to share.
The lines at the last stanza are my favorite lines.
Thank you for sharing your talent through Driftwood.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Will It Ever Be?  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello djsorgatz,
Philosophical in a way and I do like it from the start until the last line.
This is a poem written by a poet that is so wise, as in a true artist.
Wonderful conclusion that fits the message of the poem.
Thank you for sharing your work.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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