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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello moous,
We have nine cats in the house so this one made me very curious.
I admire the creativeness.
It is always fun to have pets in the house.
Possibly you can write a book out of this diary of a cat's life.
Thank you for the read.
Write On.
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Review of 15 Editing Steps  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello deborahowen,
This is educational, informative,helpful and useful.
Your loving heart shows how caring and how thoughtful person you are by sharing this to all of us in this awesome community.
May the Good Lord Bless You More and More Each Day.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Cofeebean,
True to its given title this short story proves once again that love is the greatest.
Frank and Elizabeth, two important characters of what a wonderful relationship shares of in sickness and in health.
Sad realities of life but love makes it easier to bear.
Thank you for sharing a short story with a BIG IMPACT.
Write On.
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Review of Moving On  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings BScholl,
Congratulations for having this story as Editor's Pick. It surely is !
The title offers a great read as in great expectation.
The story shares life's twists and turns.
Descriptive with a convincing dialogue and realistic three characters.
Nicely presented.
Wise conclusion.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of 9th World Wonder  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings !
AHA !
Now I know what is the 9th World Wonder.
Reading the title it really made me very curious to know.
Well, you made me smile and yes ! Why not..
I believe in your talent.
Thank you for sharing your work.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello again,
I am fascinated with the title and most of all I agree with the last paragraph.
The topic reminds me also of another beautiful song that I love to sing with this
particular line.....But a house is not a home when there is no one there to hold you tight and no one there kissing you goodnight...
Anyway, I thank you for sharing your wisdom on what a home is.
For me my home is a place where anyone can enter and exit with a joyful heart.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
A Christmas and New Year Greetings to a very special person and the memories
linger, and the love stays forever in the heart and soul.
This is a very touching work and the description of a season that I am not familiar with because I live in a tropical country as in I never experience to touch and to see a real snow and you described it so wonderfully.
I have nothing to edit, nothing to add and nothing to correct.
This is a well...written piece that expresses the innermost feeling of your heart.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of A Special Friend  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings TheDreamer,
A very special poem for a very special person, A Special Friend and you described it how precious it is and how blessed it is to have friends or a friend, a real treasure.
The presentation is nicely done and I am so glad to have read this work.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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Review of Before It's Gone  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Amelia,
As I dig deeper and deeper each line of this poem this made me ponder on how important and how precious life is.
True...Yesterday is gone forever, tomorrow may never come, and what we have for sure is Today, so we must make the most of it.
Thank you for sharing a very nice lesson through your poem.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of How I Met You  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello moon plus stars,
A love story with a happy ending and what makes it more precious is that this is the love story of your parents written as a documentary, a strong witness to their bond as husband and wife and you as the author.
There are some words that needs to be changed but minimal only like adn that must be written as and.
Possibly you may reread it and later you can perfect this writing.
Interesting piece.
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
Happy Easter to the whole family !
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Review of What do you know?  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
I love this activity.
My score is not that high but all in all I enjoy this.
A refresher, a brilliant and a wise break.
The best relaxation as far as I am concerned.
Thank you for sharing.
See you again in this awesome community.
Write On.
Happy Easter !
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
Hahhahha !
Brilliant author.
What made me so amused ......The last line !
Very Clever !
Good luck for more stories to write.
You know how to captivate the readers interest.
A great read and thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello Emily,
The title reminds me of a sad song with the same title.
The story is very touching because it is a personal and a true story as well.
The memories linger and your father lives in your heart forever.
My suggestion is about the presentation...
Possibly you can leave a space in every paragraph.
All in all, I am happy for you that release your feelings through writing.
Thank you for sharing and WRITE ON !
Happy Easter !
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Review of My Little Brother  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings !
This is a prose with love and respect to a dearest brother and I am happy for you to have Jim as a little brother with the willingness of heart to share and to cherish forever.
I can relate because I have my loving brothers in my life.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Write On.
Happy Easter !
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Review of Habit's Habit  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings !
The caption below the title made me read your work. It really intrigued me and most of all I simply cannot make the guess of what it is all about ......Hahhahahhaha....
Thank you for sharing your work about the realities of life and your conclusion is splendid !
Write ON !
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Review of World Peace  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings !
Happy Easter to you ....
This poem is fit for the occasion that the world is celebrating today.
I wish to wish and wish, and wish that this happens starting this very moment,
WORLD PEACE, but I have to start it with me to have the inner peace that radiates my outer wholebeing.
Thank you for sharing your very meaningful poetry.
Write On !
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Review of Why Did Yo Go  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello nicole,
A questioning heart and a loving spirit.
This poem shows your longing and deep love to your father.
The last two lines are my favorite lines.
Written with all sincereness and truthfulness and most of all written with love.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello sexy appeal,
The story shares a great wisdom.
It makes me count my blessings more and more each day.
Wise and Nice.
My minimal suggestion....
The title..The first word, Thw...........please change it to.... The
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings !
Thank you for sharing your wonderful experience of a wholesome connectedness.
I wish to read more of your works and I believe this can also be a very good beginning of a novel by adding more of your precious thoughts into it.
My suggestion ....
The word leaviing......Please change it to.....leaving
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Wishing Well  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Xylch,
Interesting work of a very talented author.
The story is well presented. The dialogue much lovely with corresponding lessons to share.
The plot and the characterization is great.
All in one highly admirable.
Thank you for the read.
Write on.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello hurley,
A prose separated not by stanzas but by paragraphs. It is like a verse.
There are some parts that needs a little editing like the word im ......that needs to be changed to.....I am and the word its ok...please change it to it is okay or put an apostrophe in the word its.....
Also possibly you may minimize the spacing.
Suggestions only.
This is also like a collection of quotes and I consider some lines so true, so powerful..
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Love Is Blind  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello caramelxlatte,
A short story with a captivating title.
The 22 year old Denel in the hospital for a suicidal case, confused and forgetful.
That made me understood why such title was given although love or relationship was not mentioned in the story.
In connection to the given title, well...for me, love is not blind, only the lovers refuse to see.
Thank you for the read.
Keep writing and keep sharing as well as keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings sisterofmercy,
How lovely is the poem. I admire the rhythm and the rhyme.
It expresses true joyful feeling.
A few days from now, it will be April. Happy Anniversary !
Thank you for sharing your poem that radiates happiness to the readers,
Write On..
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings again !
Hahhhahaha...My answer got the highest votes. Yes......I know a lot of women who are modest and remain seductively beautiful proving that women are truly conquerors.
I enjoy this poll !
Thank you once again.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings !
Truly an amusing Poll.
I voted for the beehives because it reminds me of a very famous first lady of the land who wears this kind of hairstyle and still look so glamorous.
hahhhahhhaha......Your guess is as good as mine...
Thank you for the chance of joining and voting this poll.
WRITE ON !
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