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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings poeticsara,
A poem with clear understanding of what is the best thing to do with life.
Truly inspiring with a very nice, authentic title.
My suggestion:
"You won't find it knocking on you're door"
Please change the word you're to....your
Suggestion only.
Thank you for sharing.
Write On !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings Endless Enigma,
The title is captivating and it fits for this short comedy story which also reminds me of what was written in the wonderful book "Don't Sweat That Small Stuff"
A bit comedy and yes ! this happens.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keepposting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings vpbanjo,
Congratulations for this very valuable award. It is always nice to know that this awesome community is composed of wonderful authors and this award is a one concrete evidence that you are one of these wonderful authors.
Keep up the good job.
Thank you for sharing this to all of us.
Keep writing and keep posting as well as keep reviewing and ENJOY !
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Review of A Good Life  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings James,
A poem with a good rhyme. It has also a very inspiring message to your readers and the last stanza is my favorite stanza.
My suggestion, very minimal....
Now Roberts family...please put an apostrophe in the word Robert's
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON.
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Review of The Promise  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Simple Dykie,
The story behind the poetry gives so much lesson to share about relationships and the very important word that need not be broken...Promise....
This poem sounds like a ballad to me with a sentimental message as in heavy drama.
I have nothing to add and to correct.
It touches my wholebeing.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of A VIEW ON REVIEWS  
Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings gwfrog,
A truthful view on reviews, one of the interesting activities here in this awesome community
that makes my life going as in my days so full of joy. I always look forward to log in and to review the new authors as well as the gold portfolio and the other wonderful colors of portfolios whose writings are giving me more lessons to learn as far as my being an author is concerned.
This writing is highly impressive.
Yes ! It is a must that a heartily Thank You be given to each given review.
I enjoy reading your work that shares fun in my every journey here at Writing.Com. a community that I really do love.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Your Today  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Cairylee,
I believe, truly believe that this is a very precious poetry. From the title, each word, each line each stanza, everything is great and wonderful with a very inspiring message to all.
Yes ! Today is very important.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Never  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings pandabearbug,
Intriguing title. Interesting story behind the poetry. The presentation is beautiful in everyway.
I like this poem from the very beginning to the end, as in every line is my favorite line.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep writing and keep postting.
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Review of Sketching  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jessica-Anne,
The poem, the artist, the love, the bonding and the realities of life put into lines of a beautiful poem.
Most of all this poem is written from the heart that speaks of love and the truth.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keepw riting and keep posting.
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Review of Rhythm  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings trauma,
The title is truly captivating.
The storyline is consistent as in there is a very good flow.
A dark story with a very interesting start and a horrible ending.
Nice presentation too.
I have nothing to edit.
I admire your work and the whole story itself is great.
Written for a contest? I wish you win the top award. Well-deserving.
Thank you for the read.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Leila.
This is magnificent ! Great sharing of country's culture or tradition in celebrating a very special occasion or Kid's Birthday.
Nice Docinho, very inviting. Thank you for the instructions of how to prepare it.
The Brazilian Version of Happy Birthday song sounds lively as every birthday celebration must be.
GREAT WAY OF SHARING, that makes this community so awesome.
Thank you for the read.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Railway to Heaven  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Terri Lynn,
This poem makes death so beautiful. It expresses totality of physical abandonment yet the spirit lives happily everafter.
Touching and deeply inspiring.Perfect as in a great job !
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings deannarich,
CONGRATULATIONS !
A very creative poetry that describes your deepest feelings on being promoted to a yellow portfolio.
(Actually , I am calling it gold, that is why I love it so much )...
I am so happy for you ,and enjoy Writing.Com. more and more each day.
See you again in this awesome community.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Years Apart  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Greetings mortonali,
The age difference is the main topic of this love poetry.
In my own honest opinion, In TRUE LOVE, age does not matter.
Back to my review of your work:
"The last line of the poetry expresses sadness, that makes the love story sad also.
My suggestion:
Please put an apostrophe in the word dont.......don't
Thank you for sharing your work.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review of Candle  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Sum ,
Perfectly artistic in every aspect of this poetry. WOW !
Fascinating work.
Yes ! I do need a candle and more candles as I continue my journey and your poetry proves each candle's greatest worth.
EXCELLENT!
Thank you for sharing.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Greetings DRSmith,
The title is captivating, intriguing and it offers a great laugh, the title alone.
Reading between the lines of each topic in your own unique style of humurous writing, I conclude that this is truly hilarious in the real sense.
I love reading comedies, jokes and I consider them amazing as it eases the burdens of the day.
Reading this work reminds me of my brother's comment about life:
"Life, sometimes is a joke and if this joke happens, laugh and be merry, and laugh some more!"
Hahhahahhahhahahha !
Thank you for the laughters I gain that makes my day so wonderful.
Thank you for sharing your highly admirable talent.
See you again in this awesome Writing.Com.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Greetings Voxxylady,
Right Forum for the right special occasion. Interesting as well as challenging too.
A contest that fits for the grand celebration of this awesome community.
Thank you for the opportunity for me to use my writing ability and my chance to join in this contest and forum.
HAPPY 11th Birthday Writing.Com !
See you again.
Write On !
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Review of Trip Back In Time  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Moonlighttygress,
Honestly, I got a low score but it made me glad that I made a few correct answers.
Actually, I was born yet in that year but the questions are so wise and it activates my memory of all the reading materials that had on my possession about that year.
I like this Quiz, so inviting, so educational.
Thank you for the great time I gain joining this.
See you again in this awesome community.
WRITE ON !
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Review of Moment  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
Greetings June,
A love story with a sad message. The realization that comes too late.
There is a good flow of the story.
My suggestion:
"she said agreed without hesitation."
Please delete the word said...
"she agreed without hesitation."
Possibly you can divide this story into three or four paragraphs with a space in each paragraph for a better presentation.
SUGGESTION ONLY.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
WRITE ON !!
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Review of The Hunter  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Dan Sturn,
A special form of poetry and this is well-written and well-presented.
There is a good flow and how you presented it in the last few lines makes thiswork so highly impressive.
A job well-done !
Thank you for sharing.
See you again in this awesome community.
WRITE ON !
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Greetings Astronomicus,
A comedy ,Whew and yet so Mean....Not a good example for all the children to follow.
ARSON at a very young age and it is punishable by law.
You can write very well, but I hope and pray that this is not happening and will not be happening, never ever today and tomorrow.
I look forward to read more of your writings.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Greetings takwa,
A biographical essay that shows how deeply you care for your mother and how great a woman, a mother, a grandmother, a person your mother was in her living years. Making friends with the Filipinos, being a Filipina myself that made me so honored.
The essay's message is fully understood.
My suggestion :
The first few paragraphs, I suggest it has to be retyped for a proper alignment and much better presentation.
Thank you for sharing to us a story about a mother so sweet and yet so strong.
May her soul rest in peace and may the Good Lord Bless You and the whole family.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings teach,
I admire the creativeness that out of this destructive calamity a poetry exists and indeed a well-written one.
It rhymes and it has a good flow.
Descriptive of its destructive capacity.
Thank you for sharing your talent.
Keep wriitng and keep posting.
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Review of A Suburban Dream  
Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Greetings jonnimichelle,
You are a talented author. The story is very convincing as in Drama in real life.
"At the balding back of Gregs head."
Please put an apostrophe in the word Greg's.
Written for a contest? Good luck then !
Thank you for sharing your work.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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Review by tsurtidogni
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Greetings Tim Chiu,
A free-verse poetry that describes fully the present situation involving child abuse rather children's abuse.
Yes ! There are bullies that needs discipline and must be stopped and it is the duty of every parent to monitor the activities of their children in school and it must be in coordination with the teachers too.
A poem with a good flow. A poem that speaks of the truth.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing and keep posting.
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