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Review of You and I  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Koyel~writing again

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I liked the depth of this poem. Your descriptive lines were detailed and strong. I also liked the angle in which you wrote this out, it wasn't too mushy and soft. You expressed yourself very clearly here in this piece. I liked the intamacy and cuddling you spoke of. Good work.

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Review of Poetry in my life  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I loved the philosophy you used to write this powerful piece. I liked the structure and flowing lines too. A cute piece of writing from you. I read this a few times to fully understand you. I loved it all. Good work and write on!!!

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Review of A Golden Message  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sara Jensine

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought this was a lovely little piece of writing. Written so quirky. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines, also leaving the words and lines to the readers imagination, beautifully done. Good work and write on !!!

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Review of Listen  
Review by The Dawning Sun
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful words
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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
SWPoet

I liked the positivity in this small piece from you. I smiled as I read this through. Good form used and worked really well. Because of the length of the piece the message was clear and understood. This piece speaks to those who disagree with war and seek the ending of all wars. Good work.

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Review of The Snow  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Espero

Nice descriptive start to this writing and I loved it. You expressed yourself very well here. Nice imgaery from each line. Good form used. I felt the poetic power of writing as I read this through. Good work and write on !!!

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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Evie 🏳️‍🌈 write&blog

I thought your writing here was very deep, very expressive. I like how you stayed positive to others here, praying we all make it. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. I took this piece seriously. Good work and write on !!!

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Review of Weathering Time  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ned

Great work done here with this little poem. I really apreciated the poetic power you used. Lovely imagery coming from the words and lines. This reminded me of something "Bono" from "U2" would write. It held that professional feeling with it. A special read and thank you for sharing this here. Write on!!!

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Review of Tennessee  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lou-Here By His Grace

Aww. I loved the poetic swagger to this poem. I felt inspired by this little piece of writing, it was lovely. You managed to say a lot on just a few lines, great work. There was good imagery coming from the poetic words and lines. I enjoyed it all. Thank you and write on !!!

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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
PiriPica

Lovely presentation here. Nice flowing lines, nice form used. I liked the simplicity of each line you wrote. I also found this poem inspiring and uplifting to read through. I liked the length of the poem too, it kept my attention levels high. Good work and write on !!!!

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Review of AM I GETTING OLD?  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Penelope Moonbeam

I liked the reality of this acrostic here from you. I think you have spoken for many people here. You opened my eyes to the truth of aging and it can be quite scary. Nice presentation, good flow and was easy to follow and understand. I like your work here. Keep going.

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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
intuey

I noticed your writing in the newsfeed, thought I would give it a read.

I liked the honesty and detail of this piece. You are right, we're not to show this crumbling of spirit and our lives bitteness. I liked the gripping way you told this story. Life IS a game and sometimes it is no fun. Money will always be evil and controling. I also liked the darkness in this piece, it struck a chord with me. Good work.

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Review of Sheltered  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
LeJenD'

I came across your writing here in the random read and review page.

I liked the simple title, it drew me in. Each line and word was a joy to read. The meaning of this poem was great. The subject and theme was inspiring. I enjoyed reading about this womans younger life and how it unfolded. A good piece of work. Thank you.

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Review of Another Day  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

I came across your writing here in the random read and review page.

I thought this was a great piece of writing. Gripping all the way through. I liked the flowing rhymes and the sweet, simple story you told. I liked how you touched on a little romance too. This was a bright, cheerful piece of writing. Great work.

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Review of In Loving Arms  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
jaya

I came across your writing here in the random read and review page.

I thought the theme was great. I obtained a warm feeling as I read this through. I think people don't always realise just what a cuddle can do. The title was fitting for the words and lines. This was a lovely little read and I enjoyed every stanza. Good work.

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Review of End Time  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Lori J

I came across your writing in the random read and review page.

I really liked this little item from you. I think it was the simplicity of the meaning. You wrote this very clearly. I liked how your spirit came to you. I was lightly inspired by this line. A good original theme and you did a fine job here. You also managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Well done for expressing yourself here.

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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
LeJenD'

I came across your writing here in the random read and review page.

I thought this was a very original piece of writing. The title was very fitting to the words and lines. You described the blood-sucker perfectly. The flow was good, the rhythm was good too. I found no way to improve the item. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work.

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Review of Comely Morning  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Koyel~writing again

I thought your poem here was lovely. The sweeping poetic lines and words were a real joy to read through. The imagery coming from the words was splendid and really cheered me up a lot. I liked the form and structure, it worked very well for these words. Nice writing. Good job done.

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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
super sleuth

I came across your poem in the random read selection page.

I did find this writing very funny, your rhymes were great and flowed along perfectly. You did make me feel sorry for you in a way. The ending was great and made me smile. Nice flowing lines and well executed piece of writing. Great work.

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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
DragonBlue

I thought you expressed yourself very clearly here in this writing. I enjoyed the rhythm and rhymes of this piece. You seem to know yourself very well. Nice presentation on the page. There was a nice feeling over me as I read this through. Your honesty was great. Good work.

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Review of Moon  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Carol

I thought your writing here was very poetic and was a lovely take on the Moon. A simple yet effective piece of work from you. I liked the size of the poem, not too long and not too short. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. A very interesting poem. Good work.

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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lou-Here By His Grace

I really enjoyed the historic journey through this writing from you. I liked the form you used. The title was great and it lit up my senses. Your descriptive writing was very neat and poetic. You touched on global warming, to me this warming of the poles is very concerning and worrying. Who knows what the future holds. Nice nostalgic writing.

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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

Aww, nice, sweet elements in this piece from you. A simple yet effective poem. There was a good understanding between the two lovers you wrote of. Nice flow, nice rhythm. I would have loved it if this was longer. Good writing though.

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Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Happy to write

A nice little piece of writing and I enjoyed the hope you gave me. I felt peace here reading this through. Your story telling was direct, simple and easy to follow. A lovely uplifting little piece of work. Thank you for making me smile.

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Review of Since You Left  
Review by The Dawning Sun
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Joto-Kai

I loved how you wrote this out, it was very original. A nice theme and held great imagery. Good presentation and well executed. I really liked the last two lines, they seemed to sum up the writing very well. A heart-ache piece of writing but somehow there was an air of positivity too. Good work.

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