I thought your poem here was lovely. Nice word crafting. The structure was great. The length of the poem was inviting. A simple title, drawing me in. I found no way of improving the poem, it is great the way it is. I enjoyed your creativity in this piece. Good work.
I loved the title, it drew me in. The love was special and was very nice to read this through. The flow was great, the rhymes were perfect. A sweet, innocent little poem. I loved it. Great writing and thank you.
Aww. I thought this piece from you was beautiful. The power of the imagination is evident here. The love was great and the tale was uplifting. The title was simple and fit the words and lines perfeclty. I like how the princess took care of her unicorn. Unicorns are so very special. A nice and refreshing little read. Thank you.
Aww. I loved this writing from you. The words and lines were so sweet I had to smile to myself. You reminded me of what it was like to be young and free. I felt the ending was bitter-sweet. I guess it is a lesson in life as we all grow older. To think back and replay all those memories must be lovely. Nice writing. Thank you.
Lovely flowing rhymes in your poem here. This poem came together perfectly. I found no way to improve the writiing. Your descriptive writing style was a treat for the reader. You set the scene very well. A nice sized poem, easy to follow. The title was simple and was fitting for the words and lines. Good work and write on.
A neatly rounded story to read through. Sadly this could easily be a true story too. A direct tale and well written in just 75 words. The title was fitting for the story. You managed to leave me wanting to read more of this story, it was in good grammar. Great work.
Nice gripping little story, a great build up to what I never knew was coming. I loved your gramma, describing the storm. The imagery I recieved from this story was great, it was clear and vivid. A dark ending and it also left the reader wanting more. A great little read.
I really liked the rhythm to this little poem from you. The rhythm was catchy and flowing great. You summed up Springtime very well. I loved the sweetness of this little poem. You left me wanting to read more and more of this poem. It was kind of addictive. Great work.
It is funny how this poem from you popped up in the random read and review page.
Great rhymes, great flow. This poem came together perfectly. The funny side was evident here. I bet you were being rather honest too. The poem was sweet and cute together. I enjoyed reading this through.
I thought your writing here was beautiful and very moving. Such a beautiful meaning in every line. The tone was heart-felt and deep. I feel this was written with real loving senses. I am touched, moved by the special power of this piece. A passing is to me hard to write about because there are so many feelings involved, but you managed this perfectly here. A sad moment to read through but also very humbling. Thank you.
I have read a few of your writings and enjoyed the depth of how you feel. It is also sad that you feel so hidden away. Keep writing and expressing yourself. Also learn to love yourself. Writing will help you free your feelings. Keep going.
I think your writing is deep, raw and honest. Feeling alone can be very sad and worrying. Again, you have expressed yourself clearly. This piece was simple and direct. Sometimes we have to distance ouselves from our worries and learn to live again. Keep writing and posting.
I thought you wrote this piece very well. You could easily spark a deep conversation with this writing. Nice philosophy used and in fact all you wrote was true. Men do claim their womans body. Your poem was direct and to the point, a well executed piece.
I liked the title of your writing here. I am glad you expressed yourself well here. I liked your depth used and your honesty. This is the beauty of writing, we can let things go and really release our heads onto the paper. Keep writing my friend and keep expressing the deepness in you.
Nice presentation, nice flowing rhythm. I enjoyed reading this through. There was a poetic sway about this little poem. The title said it all and was fitting for the words and lines. Mother nature makes for great poetry and will always be a mystery how she works. Nice writing.
Aww. I thought this little poem was lovely and very uplifting to me. There seemed to be a warming feel about this piece, a humbling feel. I liked the last two lines. They made me smile. I thought you did a great job in just 24 syllables. The poem had great meaning and depth. Nice work.
I thought this was an interesting piece of writing. I haven't read a poem on this subject before. Maybe your daughter should read this poem from you. Sometimes you just have to sit back and let them see for themselves, let life teach them as well as their parents. Nice originality by theme here.
I thought this piece of writing from you was very emotional. The dream of love from someone was evident here. I couldn't help but feel sad for the person you wrote of. I liked the title, it drew me in and also inspired me. The first few lines were great and you set the scene very well. I enjoyed reading this through.
I thought the presentation of your poem was great, it really made reading it a joy. Again, this was a caring piece of writing. The flow was good, the rhythm was good too. I also liked the positivity of the meaning in this work. Good writing.
I liked the philosophy used in your poem. The last few lines really hit home. You managed to bring to life my own Christmas memories. You made me think of all the happiness at Christmas time. A nice little poem with good feeling all round. Good work and write on....
A nice feeling came to me as I read this piece through. I absolutely loved the runion of the two of you. It is always a nice feeling when love comes through. I enjoyed the story you told and found it humbling at the end. A positive piece of writing and one I will remember. Thank you.
A direct piece of writing, straight to our thoughts. A very sorrowful item too. The title was dark and powerful to me. The writing was written well and you managed to reach the heart too. I could not help but think of the twin towers as I read this piece through. A strong piece. Thank you.
I thought your writing here was lovely and poetic. The imagery coming from the lines and words was great. To me, I found this piece to be uplifting and refreshing. The positivity of the theme was special and made me feel humbled. I loved it all. Thank you for sharing.
I thought your poem here was great. The call for the rain and to dance in it was vivid and romantic. I related well to this writing from you. I felt special as I read this through, I felt freedom of expression and to cast the chance chains away and just kiss in the rain. Nice presentation, good font. Reading your poem through made me realise that I am not the only one who sees the rain as a positive entity. Good work.
I really loved the rhymes in the first stanza, you wrote of loving a doggie very well. Puppies are always so cute, if only they stayed so small. A nice, sweet little piece of writing from you. The theme was great. I found no way of improving the poem, it is special the way it is. Thank you.
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