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At first I thought this was going to be a discussion about space and gravity. I have to say this was a well written story and it caught my imagination. Gerard, to me is a very typical scientist, it is quite common that madness engulfs scientists. I guess it is the size of the questions they try to answer that sends them into a weird and quirky life. I recieved great imagery from your writing here. Overall, I found this little piece exciting, so thank you for sharing this here. Good work and write on !!!
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A simple poem of grattitude and wonder. Nice mention of the cosmos and the effect of music. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels high. I liked the theme because I play guitar too and related to what you wrote down. Nice work and write on !!!
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I liked the poetic power in each line you wrote out. The originality of this poem was great. You combined nature with your being very well. There was a lavish, sweetness about this poem. I enjoyed reading it through. I wouldn't change a thing with this poem, it is great the way it is. Nicely written and well done. Write on!!
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What an amazing piece of writing this is. You really opened my eyes to my own life, situation and position. My life at the moment is a little harsh and brutal, but reading your writing through, made me realise I should not be wasting my time on things I cannot control. I shouldn't be judging others too. I seem to waste time dwelling on misery and things I cannot help. You have helped me focus on more important things in life. I do feel life is a bit too judgmental and is very fast and unforgiving. I would like to thank you for this delightful piece of writing.
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I enjoyed reading your writing through, I found the story you told to be very gripping. There was a good flow to the way you wrote this out and the ending was a suprise, I wasn't sure how the poem would end. It was actually rather good. I loved it all. Well done and good creativity here.
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I thought this piece was very touching and very deep. I loved the honest sentiment and spiritual power in this item. You spoke clearly to me. I related well to all you wrote. My heart was warmed with the combination of God's creatures and solitude. I talk to flowers when I am alone or lonely. I understand that life can be scary as we grow older. This was a touching piece of writing. Very nice writing indeed. I loved it.
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I thought this piece had great imagery coming from each line. We don't have marching bands that much here in the UK. I could see and hear the bands in your writing very clearly. I liked the theme of this poem, it held innocense and made me feel good. Good work. Write on!!!
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I thought your little poem here was lovely to read through. The last line was very cute to me and held good imagery. Nice presentation, clear to the reader. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work and write on !!!
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I think you summed this website up very well. It truly is a specail place to be. Not only do we get to read other peoples work, we get our own work read too. There are many, many nice people here. Good work and write on !!
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I thought this little story was interesting to me. I liked how you wrote about the girl at the window, this held great imagery for me. A thoughtful piece of writing and made me think of all the foster children. I liked the philosophy here. Good work and write on !!!
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I loved the theme of your writing here in this poem. It was very warming and easy to follow. You managed to make me think about my own life, growing up. I think a lot of thought went into this piece from you. It is a great piece of work. Well done and write on!!!
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I thought this acrostic was sweet and delivered a message of hope. I like acrostics but have never written one. I liked the simplicity of this poem from you. An uplifiting poem and it made me smile. Thank you for sharing this here. Good work.
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I thought this was a lovely little piece of writing and I related very well to it. I think you spoke for many people here in this item. It takes a special kind of person not spread inner sorrow to others. I do the exact same, conseal my inner wars. Nice writing and well done, well expressed.
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I liked the originality of this writing from you. I also thought the very last line was very sweet and humbling, such a beautiful way to end a poem. There are many types of love, love of your brother, sister, mother and then there is your life partner. This is an intersting topic. Good work and write on.
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I enjoyed reading this through. It was very refreshing and inspiring. The theme of your poem was very sweet and original. There was a poetic beauty about this piece from you. I liked the length of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Nice writing, good work.
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I thought this little poem from you was lovely. A sad yet powerful item to read through. Lovely descriptive words and lines. This was also very poetic from start to finish. I enjoyed the imagery coming from your poem. You managed to say lot in just a few lines. Good work and write on !!!
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I wonder who you wrote this for? It was very deep yet powerful. Lovely descriptive words in every line. The depth was inviting. I enjoyed reading this through. The dark feel of this writing was somehow lively and inspiring. A nice thoughtful piece of writing. Good work.
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I loved the title of this poem, I related well to it. The writing was vibrant and powerful. The way you described this flower is the exact way I react to them, any flower to be honest. A nice length for a poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Nice poetry and good work.
I wonder who you wrote this piece for? It was very sweet and uplifting to read through. Again, there was positivity in each line and word. A nice length for a poem too. I liked the direct feel to this piece. I found no way to improve the writing, it was quite inspiring. Good work.
I really liked the positivity in this poem. You captured my thoughts really well because sometimes I want to run, run anywhere. The sense of freedom in your poem was excellent. I liked the length of the poem too, it kept my attention levels up high. I enjoyed reading this through. Thank you for sharing your art here.
I liked your poetic power here in this poem. The imagery coming from each line was great. I really liked the last stanza, it seemed to wrap the poem up nicely. The poem was short and sweet, you managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work and keep writing.
I noticed your item in the newsfeed. I am so glad I read this through. There is positivity oozing from each line written. You are correct, womens rights are being met and understood day by day and year by year. I believe in decades to come life will be equal.
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I picked this piece to read and review because the title was inviting. After reading this through I found it to be very poetic and sweet. Nice descriptive words and lines. I really enjoyed how much you mentioned in just a few lines. Good rhymes, good flowing rhythm. I enjoyed reading your little poem through, keep up the great writing.
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I liked the raw energy of passion between your characters. Fact or fiction this was very gripping to read through. Flowers are very romantic when love is in the air. I was a little suprised at how this affair ended but it was probably for the best. A nice educating item. Nice work.
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I enjoyed reading this through. I loved your poetic swagger in this poem. I felt free as I read this through. The title is very sweet and matched the words and lines very well. There was a natuarl beauty within this poem from you. Good work and write on !!!
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