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Review of Epiphany at Dawn  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Prosperous Snow celebrating

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I loved the poetic sway and power to this poem from you. Lovely descriptive words and lively lines. The imagery coming from this work was great, I loved it all. You used the prompts well. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Night Sweats  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Writer_Mike

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I enjoyed this little story from you. I was gripped to see what would happen with the beast but then your character woke up, lol. Good grammar and nicely presented. There was good imagery coming from the dream. Good work and write on!!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought your story telling was gripping, your grammar was perfect and made this easy to read through. Nice sized font you used making the words clear for the reader. I was however wondering who Lenny was, maybe I miss read this part. I liked the main character, she was very strong and wise. The title makes sense seeing how compitent she was. No errors found and no way of improving your story. I enjoyed reading this through. Keep going....

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Biography  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
QueenNormaJeanGreeneggs&vegham

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I live on the south coast of the United Kingdom, but in 1983 when I was 10 my family flew to Canada to see my mums sister in Toronto. While we were there we hired a car and drove down to Montana. We stayed in motels and every town had horses and bars and ranches. The part of Montana we visited I can't recall, but I do still have a fridge magnet saying, "Montana", "Big Sky Country". I loved staying in Montana.

Reading your biography through made me realise just how quiet my life is compared to yours. You do a lot of volountry work and that is honourable. Writing.com is a lovely place to so be as is Montana. I hope your retirement is still going smoothly. I enjoyed reading your biography through. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lou-Here By His Grace

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought this poem was good. I enjoyed reading this through. I couldn't help but see the American flag fly high here with the imagery. Nice structure and nice flowing lines here. I liked the very last line, it brought the poem to a happy ending. Good work and write on!!!

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Review of No More!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
CathrinStuart

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought this was well written and flowed along perfectly. You expressed yourself so very clearly. I don't know if this writing from you is fact or fiction but you have written very deeply. I hope you managed to find some peace whilst writing this poem out. Overall, I enjoyed the read and liked your style. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Song of an Age  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Kåre Enga in Montana

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought this little piece from you was exciting, vivid, philisophical and rewarding. The words you wrote and the lines reminded me of Greek mythology, there was a flamboyant feel to this poem. The length was perfect, you managed to say so much in just a few lines. Overall, a very exciting piece of writing. Great work. I loved it.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
LegendaryMask❤️

This one was sweet, simple and warming. I agree, snow is a gift from above, it happens so rarely here by the sea. I liked the length of this poem, it kept my attention levels high. Nice presentation, good font in italic. I loved it all. Good work.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
LegendaryMask❤️

Aww. This poem from you was amazing to read through. The poetic way you told this story was perfect. I am not shocked this was nominated for Quills. A simple message of joy and wonder, mentioning God's power. I think snow is very peaceful as it cascades down. I really enjoyed this poem from you. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
LegendaryMask❤️

I thought this was very well written, great flowing rhymes, lovely rhythm. Good presentation. The title was lovely. The respect you have for your friend here is very well stated. I think I used to talk to lynntarzan a few years ago. The mixture of God's love and guidance was very sweet. I loved it. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
LegendaryMask❤️

Hello Teresa, I decided to stop by for a little visit.

I liked the simplicity of what you wrote here. Sunsets and dreams made me smile. The title was very nice and fitting for the writing. From your heart to mine were lines I related to, so sweet and warming. Nice simple love. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Perfume  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
elizjohn

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought this was bitter-sweet. The poem told a nice story in the begining but turned out to be quite sad. There was a good amount of emotion in this poem, I enjoyed reading this through. Fact or fiction this poem held saddness for me. A cheater is always a killer in disguise. I sensed the hearts pain here.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Rob's Rescue  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading this through. It was very interesting to me. The innocense of the story was emotional. I loved the Mathew comment at the end, Mathew 10:29-31. This added a whole new dimesnion to your story. It is like God actually blessed your two characters. A very special message in this story here from you. I loved it...

Anthony.
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Review of Pause  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽

I decided to visit you again, just to read a poem or two.

I enjoyed this writing from you very much, it was very inspiring to me. I agreed with everything you wrote down. There was good imagery coming from your words and lines. The great thing is, I do what your writing asks. I do stop and take in my surroundings, then I write about the experiences. You are a good writer. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
HollyMerry

I thought this poem from you was lovely, well written and executed. Nice flowing, poetic feelings came across me as I read this through. The beauty of your descriptive power made me smile. The natural sway in this poem was sweet. I enjoyed reading this through. The last stanza was my favourite part, it rounded the writing off perfectly. A nice poem. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
HollyMerry

I liked the theme of this writing from you. I read a fantasy book in my teens called "The Warlock of Firetop Mountain".... it was pure fantasy and your poem here reminded me of this book. I liked the celebrations in this poem, the winter and the hope. There was good imagery coming from each line you wrote. A nice read, thank you.

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Review of Ocean magic  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
HollyMerry

I decided to read some of your poems, the title of this poem drew me in.

I loved the mention of mermaids, I find them fasinating. I live by the sea and go to the shore line once a week to restore my thoughts. I related to what you have written here. Nice rhythm and good flowing rhymes in this piece from you. You are so right, the sea is an enchanting place, the spiritual pull from the sea is grand and special. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Flawed  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I thought you wrote this out perfectly. The rhymes, rhythm and flow were awesome to me. I really enjoyed reading this through. It was interesting to read a little about yourself here and the struggles you face. At least you know yourself so very well, denial will lead to failure. Great work here and write on !!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Not sure  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Dew

I came across your writing in the random read page.

You wrote about a painful situation. Nice expressions here. I don't know how truthful the writing is but love gone by is awful to experience. This is why writing is so helpful, it aids us to empty our feelings onto the page and hopefully find peace. Good work and write on !!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Why can't i sleep  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
BINX

I came across your writing in the random read page.

You expressed yourself very well here, the writing was very clear to me. I don't know the answer to your question but when I cannot sleep, I take great comfort in the dead of night. I found no way of improving your writing here. They say coffee keeps us awake. A good theme for a poem and I hope things get better for you. Good work and write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Lou-Here By His Grace

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I think you expressed yourself so very well here. I loved the romantic power in this poem too. The title was special and it drew me into the poem. There was hope love and positivity in this piece. I felt it was very dreamy and interesting. I enjoyed reading this through.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Prosperous Snow celebrating

I found your item in the newsfeed and decided to give it a read and review.

I related so very well with this piece from you. I fall asleep sometimes at 0200 in the morning. I like the night and spend many hours enjoying it. It is uncanny because I too practice the pretend to sleep idea, it slows the brains thoughts down, lessens the breathing too. I loved the prayer you recited, it was very harmonious and special. Thank you for another superb piece of writing. God bless!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of The Power of One  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ryan S

I came across your writing in the random read page.

Wow, perfectly executed, perfectly written and displayed. I loved every part of this piece from you. I have to say, I loved the philosophy here in this item. Sometimes we have to feel the lows before we can know the highs. I also related very well to everything you wrote down. I take great comfort in solitude, the night and dawn too. Nice writing and well done.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Shepard

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I enjoyed the rhythm to this piece, I also like the rhymes and flow. To me there was a lovely romantic feel to this poem from you. I would have loved to have read more of this poem, it was very gripping. I liked the special feeling you gave me as I read this through. Good work and write on !!!

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Review of Epiphany  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
fyn

I came across your writing in the random read page.

I somehow found this very spiritual. There was a special feel over me as I read this through. I liked the combination of dreams and life together. I was lifted from my moody self after reading this through. Nicely executed and displayed on the page. Good work and write on !!

Spiritual Dawning

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