I found this writing from you to be very good by theme and details. A simple message here, a simple plea. The title was very fitting for each line you wrote down. A thinkers poem, with depth and conviction. I enjoyed reading this through. The thing is, everything you wrote was so true and exact to life. Great writing and great thinking. Thank you.
Aww. I thought this was a wonderful piece of writing. I was so inspired by this writing from you. I loved the philisophical power you gave me here. This work had everything. You said so much in a few lines. Summing up our mortal lives so very well. I really enjoyed reading this through.
The rhymes in your poem here were great. I hope I don't offend you but I saw a funny side to this poem. But in all honesty there was an interesting feel to this poem. A truth. Nice sized poem, keeping my attention levels up high. A sweet little poem and was easy to follow and understand. Thank you.
I enjoyed reading this exciting story through. Your story telling was great as I was gripped to every word. I am glad the story ended well, this made me smile. The uplifting story was sweet and very simple to follow. You managed to say a lot in just a 100 words. Nice writing, keep going. Thank you.
Nice rhymes. Nice flowing rhythm too. I felt sorry for the girl in this poem but still had to laugh at your humorous lines. This was an uplifting poem to read through and it made a nice refreshing change. Nice sized font, clearly presented. No errors found. Great writing. Thank you.
I am not familiar with the form of the tanka so I cannot judge the form. But I did like the honesty in this little poem. Reading this through, the words and lines and what you wrote made me feel nervous, it was quite real. I could feel your tension here. A simple yet effective piece of writing. Thank you.
To me there was an uplifting feeling along with this poem from you. The rhymes were great and the flow was good too. The title was very fitting for what you had written down. The simplicity of what you wrote was somehow fun and rewarding. I enjoyed reading this through. Thank you.
I had to feel sorrow as I read this through. Oh the pain and suffering. A nicely written piece of writing, expressing the hurt very well. The sentiment was vivid and real, the pain was evident. The title said so much and drew me into the work. God only knows of the suffering. Thank you.
A well structured piece of writing. Good flowing rhythm, nice rhymes too. I think you covered this subject very well, telling your readers about the confusion alzheimers creates. I can only sympathise with you on this matter. You did express yourself very well. A sad but enjoyable read. Thank you.
I liked the format this poem was written, short and direct and powerful. There was good imagery coming from this writing. I could feel the heat around me as I read this through. There was also a very poetic sway to this piece. I loved it all. Nice work and thank you.
I loved the gruesome feel to this little poem from you. The image is very dark and yet powerful. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I was gripped to every word. It was a refreshing change to read this gory little piece. Thank you.
I thought you wrote this poem very well. The rhymes were great, the flow was great too. A lovely acolade for this man you have in your life. A lovely positive piece of writing to read through. I would have loved it if this was longer, simply because I was hooked to the rolling story. Great writing. Thank you.
I thought your writing here was lovely, sweet and warming. The flowing, loving quotes were beautiful to me. I also loved the simplicity of this poem, so easy to follow and understand. Overall, a lovely, refreshing read and was a treat to read through. Nice expressions. Thank you.
I thought this writing from you was very emotional to me. I felt kind of sorrowful but warm at the solitude in this poem. The honesty of being alone was great, I loved the depth of this poem. As I read this through, I smiled and also felt a tear rise. Nice writing and thank you.
Beautifully written and displayed. Nice story telling too. Moments with nature always stay in our minds. I felt free and spirited as I read your poem through. The wild will always be a good source for writing and you proved that right here. I liked the angle in which you titled this poem. There is a gulf between man and the wild. Nice work, thank you.
I thought your writing here was lovely. Great descriptive lines and words. The beauty of a new born life will always make for good writing. There was a lovely poetic sway to this poem. You expressed yourself very well here. The title drew me in and at first I couldn't tell if you were writing about a lover or romantic partner. Then it all became clear, a child, new born. Beautifully written. Thank you.
I thought this poem from you was very peaceful and satisfying. The beauty of the brook, the nature all around all made this poem a joy to read. The rhythm was great and the flowing rhymes were great too. I love reading poems where people connect to the land, rivers and fields. Nice writing. Thank you.
I thought your poem here was beautiful through out. I enjoyed every word and line. There was a lovely poetic feeling which came with this writing. I loved it. It is poems like this that make me smile inside and have a great moment in time as I read them through. Great writing and keep going. Thank you.
I thought your writing here was excellent to me. Nice rhymes, nice flowing rhythm, you executed this poem perfectly. You told a story here too, I was gripped to every line. There was good imagery coming from each word and line. I found no way of improving this writing. It was very good, well done.
I thought your poem here was very sweetly written. You set a scene very well. The imagery that came with this poem was beautiful. I really enjoyed reading this through. The innocense of the meaning was perfect. A very symbolic piece of writing from you. Keep going....
I thought this piece from you was different to me. Like it was written for someone you know?. The title was fitting for the poems words and lines. You wrote this very well. I liked the size of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Isn't love a complicated thing when it goes sour?
I thought this writing was great, I loved the way this story ended. It lit up my senses and inspired me. A nice simple little story, well told and executed. You managed to make me want to read more. The title was fitting too. I enjoyed this story. Thank you.
I liked the emotions in your writing here. A nice, positive piece of writing. I also liked the romance here. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I would have liked the poem to be longer because I was enjoying the read. The title was effective and strong. Nice work.
I liked the poetic sway about this piece from you. There was an originality about this piece. Nicely presented on the page. I would have loved the poem to have been longer. The theme was thoughtful and deep. I found this poem quite humbling. Thank you for sharing.
I thought this was a lovely little poem to read through. Your rhymes were great. I loved the simplicity of your memories here. The flow was perfect and the rhythm was good too. A humbling feel came across me as I read this through. I enjoyed every word.
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