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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
🇺🇸 Carol St.Ann 🇺🇸

I enjoyed reading this through. The picture at the top of the writing is superb and very special. Your words and lines were great, I liked the sentiment. Lovely presentation. I enjoyed this because I wasn't aware there were female werewolves. I am a fan of werewolves but they scare me. Your tale here touched on the fact that this she-wolf may not be entirely happy with her trappings and pleas to be human. Great poetic power. Good work.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Weirdone-Back in the games

I like how you managed to tell a sweet romantic story coming from a spiders web. Your imagination must have been so alive when you thought this poem up. I liked the innocense of what you wrote. It was humbling to read through. Nice work and well done for the originality.

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Review of Bathroom Inequity  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hyperiongate

I thought your rhymes were excellent here. Great story telling. Gripping to the end. I did find this writing very funny and very original by theme and subject. I was not sure what kind of toilets you were talking of until you revealed it at the end, jail loos. The thing I will remember the most about this writing is its originality. Great work.

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Review of GPS  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Penelope Moonbeam

I thought the rhymes in your poem here were excellent and made me smile. Writing.com is an excellent place to spend time. I enjoyed reading your poem through. A nice little poem which was sweet and light-hearted. Nice writing and keep going.

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Review of I had a dream  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

I thought you expressed in eight very well. A nice, well rounded piece. I liked the romantic ending too. The title drew me into the poem and made me smile. Nice large font used making it easy to read and follow. I enjoyed reading this through. Nice work.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
LeJenD'

These night terrors must be awful to experience. You expressed yourself very well here. The flow was good, the depth of description was great too. The darkness in this piece was real and scary. I don't know how you cope with this at night. I would love to have read more of this writing, I found it gripping. Thank you.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
GERVIC 🐉 WDC Dragon Vale

I thought you expressed yourself so very clearly here in this piece from you. I enjoyed your descriptive words and lines about your situation in life. There was good imagery coming from the words. I enjoyed reading this through. The ending was nice and very uplifting. Nice work.

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Review of O Water  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beholden

I liked reading this through. I also liked the feeling this gave me. The deepness was great. The whole structure in everything you wrote was very special. I have often stared at water droplets, felt their power. You wrote this very well. This was an enjoyable read. Thank you.

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Review of My Woe  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Elisa the Bunny Stik

I loved your honesty in this acrostic. I wonder where your critics are now? are they here on WDC? I liked the depth of this poem, it was really interesting to read about your challenges in writing. I see this was written several years ago now, so much may have changed by now. It helps to read other peoples poems to regain that inspiration to write. Good work and keep going.

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Review of Broken Heart  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
lexos02

I thought your poem here was rather good. Nice rhythm, nice flow. Good rhymes. The title was simple and matched the writing perfectly. I think losing a love can be too much but it does make a good poem. Writing about a broken heart is helpful. You expressed yourself very well here. Good work.

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Review of A Place to Hide  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Elizabeth

I thought your writing here was lovely. You managed to transport me to another world, a world of hope and wonder. I loved it. I think we all have a special place to go and be at peace. You wrote this very well indeed. Nice flowing lines, nice imagery and feelings. Good work.

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Review of The Fire  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
very thankful

Simply written, simply expressed. I liked how you touched on erotica so very lightly. Isn't love and intamacy the best?.... A nice short little poem which was easy to understand and follow. The title was fitting too. Nice flowing lines and good rhythm as well. Neat work and keep going.

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Review of MOTHER  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
TheBusmanPoet

Simply written and displayed. Nice sentiments and good meaning. Mothers are very strong in thier roles as mothers. You described mother very well here. The title was simple too. Easy to understand this poem and I enjoyed it all. Good work and keep going.

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Review of Far away  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

I felt there was an element of truth used here in your poem. I found the prompt to very difficult, I would not have come up with a piece as good as yours. There was nice sentiment here, nice feelings. Nice expressions. I liked the size of the poem, it kept my attention levels up high. Good work and keep going.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ava

I thought your little poem here was excellent. I loved the poetic sway and power. You described the light and power of the moon so very well. I smiled as I read this through. There was also good imagery coming from the words and lines. I loved every word you wrote. Good work and keep going.

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Review of MY SISTER  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Monty

Aww. I thought this poem from you was beauitful. I am sorry for your loss. I felt humbled as I read this through. The rhymes were great and the flow was awesome. I really loved the power of feelings here in this writing. You expressed yourself so well. I did feel emotional as I read this through. Good writing and keep going.

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Review of The Course  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Have a sunshiny day!

I enjoyed reading this poem through. I also enjoyed the form you used. I thought the summing up of life here was awesome to me. There was a lovely poetic feel to this writing. I loved it all. Nice rhymes too. The size of the poem was great as it kept my attention levels up high. Good writing and keep going.

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Review of THE PERFECT GIFT  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG

I liked the sweet humor used in this poem. I thought the rhymes were great and flowed along perfectly. Men shop diferently to women, some spend hours in shops and some spend moments. I prefer short visits. I like how you wrote about WDC here and the raffles too. This is certainly a great place to be .... good work and keep going.

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Review of MAMA  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
SSpark

I saw your entry in the newsfeed so I gave it a read.

I am sorry your Mama is no longer with us, I know life can be cruel. After reading this writing through I thought you are able to look back on your mothers life and smile, almost celebrate her awesomeness. The grammar in this piece was cheerful, colourful. It has been a long time since Mama left and here you are writing about her. She must have made a huge impact on you. Some people are in a league of their own, your Mama sounds like one of those people. I felt your reminsance in this writing. I could sense a tiny tear drop but with a little smile as you wrote this out. One day you will be back with her and smiling again. Keep going, thank you for posting.

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Review of Truth in Action  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo- only 2 steps behind -

Nicely executed poetry. I loved the rolling rhythm to you work here. I never use poetry forms so I cannot comment. I liked the different stance to this writing, it was very refreshing to me. A nice size too, it kept my attention levels up high. Great work and keep going. Thank you.

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Review of Barnwood  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Words Whirling 'Round

Nice structure. Nice flowing rhythm. Lovely descriptive manner in this piece of writing. There was a beauty about this piece. Capturing time as the barn rots. I was gripped to every word and every line. No way of improving this piece. Great, inspirational writing. Thank you.

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Review of the dream  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
lynn avalon

I have one request from you before I start your review. Please try to capitalise the I's in this writing.

I have flown across the fields.

Not...

i have flown across the fields.

Well, I thought this writing from you was absolutely amazing. So rich with great grammar and story telling. Honestly, this writing from you sent shivers down my spine and lit up all my senses. Such a beautiful piece of writing. So deep yet easy to follow. I just loved the philosophy of the meaning here. This is by far the most creative piece I have read in many years. So beauitful. I cannot praise this poem enough. It was so very special. This is poetry and writing at its best. Fantastic work. Thank you.

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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Arakun the Twisted Raccoon

I loved the story in this writing from you. I really apreciated the depth and meaning. Your descriptive lines were a real treat. After reading this through, I stopped to think for a while. The solitude in Jim's life, the life he has, the meaning of the soul. This was a great inspiration to me. Thank you.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Naomi

Well done you for believing in hope. What we have to remember is that us humans are very complex and will always trun things sour when they are good and good when they are sour. Life is actually quite a simple little thing. Unlike love which can kill. Thank you for writing a positive piece of writing. Keep going.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
DragonBlue

I found this writing from you to be very good by theme and details. A simple message here, a simple plea. The title was very fitting for each line you wrote down. A thinkers poem, with depth and conviction. I enjoyed reading this through. The thing is, everything you wrote was so true and exact to life. Great writing and great thinking. Thank you.

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