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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE

I related so very well to this poem from you. Funny enough, I live by the sea too and visit the water and shore when I can. The refreshing feeling and spiritual pull of the waves and scents is sublime. The ocean always makes great poetry, I think every poet has written about the ocean. I did spot something in the poem that could use some attention. The 3rd line from the end seems to have a higher syllable count to the rest of the poem. I thought this distracted the beauty from this poem. It is just my preference and you dont have to take my advice. But I would take a look at shortening the line. I hope you are not offended. Other than that, this is a lovely poem.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
KimE

I decided to visit your portfolio and read some of your expressive poetry.

I liked the title. I liked how you expressed yourself here. To me there were no signs of a Bi-sexual writer. I think your words were straight from the heart and feelings. Your writing held good emotions and you have a heart worth gold. Love works best when we don't push it. I step back and let the real feelings shine through.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Memorial Day 2022  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Jay O'Toole

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I enjoyed this poem from you. For me, there was excellent imagery here. The noble and powerful way you wrote this was great. I liked the cutting edge this poem gave me, a heroic feeling. Good writing and great work.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Welcome Autumn  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sumojo

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I enjoyed reading this through. I also related well to what you had written. Nice presentation and even stanzas made this attractive to the eye. A good theme and a nice flowing rhythm. I liked the imagery that came along with this poem. Good work and write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
winklett in the woods

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I thought you wrote this in a clever way, as though speaking for the planet itself. I found it poetic and interesting. Nice word crafting. I liked the length of the writing, it kept my attention levels up high. A good read and I enjoyed reviewing it.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
🌷 Carol St.Ann 🌷

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

You manged to say a lot in just a few lines. Great presentation on the page. I found the little twist in the last line summed the item up perfectly. There was a nice poetic sway to this poem and it was enjoyable to read and review. Nice work.

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Review of RAIN  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Naomi

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I think this is a lovely little story from you. The words to the song are very special and heart warming, I felt the romance. You have a big heart and proved it here by singing your favourite song. Love always makes good tales and is healthy for the spirit. This was a lovely read, thank you for sharing it here. God Bless you!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Kaya Rechelle Zerwis

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I admired your honesty in writing and posting this piece. I wouldn't worry too much, it seems like you are a very sensitive person. It is ok to care and have feelings. You are thoughtful and honest and that is something to be proud of. Just don't let anyone rule your feelings.

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Stay True

Hi, your writing was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I thought you expressed yourself very clearly. There was an emotional power over me as I read this through. I liked your honesty here, you were not affraid to empty your feelings onto the page. I guess this is why womem wear make up, so they can be spotted in a crowd. An interesting item.

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Review of Less Than a Month  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AmyJo- only 2 steps behind -

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I enjoyed this funny little poem, you made me smile as I read this through. The imagery was great and the flow was good too. I think you used the prompt so very well. Nicely presented, colourful and bright. Good writing.

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Princess Megan Rose GOT Fox

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

A lovely little item to read through. I was filled with wonder and joy as I read this through. I was proud and hummbled when I learned Serena lived in England, I live by the sea so I will take extra care to look out for her. A refreshing little read. Thank you.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Vamp for Time  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spring in my Sox

Hi, your story was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I thought this was an inviting little piece. I enjoyed the tale. Good grammar and good story telling. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I think you used the prompts very well. Good work and write on !!

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Review of Fool of It  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
LeJenD' Looking Up

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought ...

I thought this was very funny and cute. I smiled as I read this through. Great presentation on the page. Nice rhythm and nice flowing lines. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work and write on !!!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Cubby

Hi, your poem was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought..

I thought this was a lovely, sweet and positive piece of writing. There was such a poetic sway to this poem, the rhymes were perfect. The admiration of your sister is well documented here. I smiled at the message. I smiled at the heart warming lines. A special piece to read through.

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Autumn Ebbing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Words Whirling 'Round

Hi, your item was selected by the random read page, here is what I thought...

I thought this was a lovely piece of writing. I love autumn and so I related well to what you had written. Lovely poetic power to this piece, describing the seasons change so very well. Well crafted and well written. Good job done here. Write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Daydream  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
SeanFear

Hi, your writing was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought...

The title drew me into the poem firstly. I thought this poem from you summed up the meaning and beauty of poetry and writing. Your expressive tone in this piece was great. I felt your emotions were running deeply here, the whole piece sang deep quality to me. I understood how you feel. Nice work and write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Joseph

Hi, your item was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought..

I thought you did a lovely job of this poem. Your description of a rainbow was fantastic. I loved the overall poetic power of this piece from you. A great read and I really enjoyed reviewing this poem. Nice work.

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Review of Untitled  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
LilacMist

Hi, your item was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought...

Nicely written and well executed. Good flow to this work. I liked the quirky writing style. I also feel you expressed yourself so very well. I enjoyed reading this piece through. I related to your desperation. Keep writing....

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG

Hi, your item was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought..

I have related to how you feel. I see this was written some years ago now. I hope there are no scars. By me reviewing this item will probably bring all the pain back, so I apologise. I have lost two dogs in the past and it is not easy to take. The hurt is awful. Keep going...

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of First birthday  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Happy to write

Hi, your writing was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought...

Simple, direct and honest. A sweet little piece of writing. A new life is always good for poetry. I liked the length of this piece, it kept my attention levels up high. Nice work and write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of The Shape of Love  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Spring in my Sox

Hi, your writing was selected by the random read button, here is what I thought...

I loved this poem from you, you gave some great advice here. The meaning was lovely. We should all share the love for a better life and experience. The presentation was special and rewarding. You made a good job of this poem from the prompt. Good work and write on !!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beholden

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought..

I enjoyed this piece from you. It was written very well. I liked the imagery that I recieved as I read this through. A nice sized poem, not too long and not too short. Great presentation on the page. Good writing my friend. Write on!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of Shadows  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dave

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought..

I liked the font you used. I liked the descriptive words and lines. There was a poetic sway to this poem and I enjoyed reading it through. A nice length of a poem, keeping my attention levels up high. Sweet work and write on !!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of "FOREVER"  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Tommy Gunns

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought ...

I thought the rhymes were great and they helped the poem roll along sweetly. The love quotations here were lovely and romantic. I enjoyed reading this through. A good sized poem, you managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work and write on !!!

Spiritual Dawning

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Review of The Wolf Speaks  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Amethyst Angel🌸📝🪽

Hi, I came across your writing in the random read page, here is what I thought.

A lovely, sweet story to read through. I am glad the wolves were friendly to your character. The ending was nice. I liked the magical feel your words gave me. It is always nice to be swept away by fantasy. You are a good writer of short stories. Good work.

Spiritual Dawning

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