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"The worse part was scaling the city wall ..." - It would make more sense to say worst.
"but once I entered the forest - the same forest I had heard rumours of – where people went in, but never came back." - This sentence is incomplete. By saying, "But once I did this," you then need to follow up with the consequence of you doing it. For example, "But once I entered the forest - the same forest I had heard rumors of - where people went in but never came back, I saw the light." However, I would try to break this sentence down a little for clairty.
"It was filled with a multitude of star light." - Firstly, starlight is one word. Also, I'm not sure multitude is the right word because it usually relates to sound rather than vision. Something like abundance might word better.
"The log, on closer inspection was set up like a table with party plates ..." - I would place a comma after inspection.
" ... he would be able to undue any influence I had bestowed." - It should be undo.
There are a couple of places where you place a period at the end of a dialogue line, when it should be a comma. For example, here: "'Bryanna.' she called moving swiftly across the mossy grass to pull me into her warm embrace."

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Just another Small Bang
"After I wrote my first two E-Books "The Small Bang Theory" and "Echo's of a Small Bang" I was a little bit skeptical about starting a third book." - Just a tiny point. I would take out bit. It isn't necessary and it would make the writing tighter.
"So as little Henry's buddy Stinky was walking on by he felt he had to ask ..." - Henry is the subject of this sentence, so it reads as though Henry had to ask. But, it was actually Stinky asking.
"'At least that is plan A for now.'" - I would take out "for now" because Plan A is Plan A, and it always will be. If they move on to the next plan, it's Plan B.
Time Brings Humor to Everything
"Of course geologist also like to listen to rock music ..." - This is funny, but you need an s on the end of geoloist.
"He couldn't open his door using the cars remote control." - You need an apostrophe before the s in cars.
Hurricane Ready
"The last time I ask him he said he was eating imported food." - I would change ask to asked.
The Continuing Caps Story
" But all good things must eventually come to an end, as so did this method of bartering." - I would either write "and so" or just "as". It sounds a little clumpy as it is.
"What happened was some other worker's in the Widget factory ..." - No apostrophe is needed here.
Little Henry's thinking about a job change
"It might only be a seasonal job, but he figures that he could also do ..." - It should be figured. Also, that is not necessary here.
A couple of times, you say "Santa Claus'" when speaking about the plural. It should be "Santa Clauses." No apostrophe.
"'I can't right now I'm Busy.'" - No capital B.
"It was one of the worst smells yet to date ..." - I would either say "yet" or "to date." You don't need both of them.
Little Blue Easter Egg
"Stinky wasn't no where as stinky as he is today ..." - No and where should be one word. But you have used a double negative in this sentence, and I would change it to "was nowhere".
"That first year of school sailed on by for the two buddys ..." - It should be buddies.
"Once out of the eye sight of their parent's ..." - No apostrophe needed here. Also, eyesight is one word.
"'It was slimmy, silky and buttery with a crunchy shell on it.'" - I think you mean slimy.
In general, whenever you are addressing someone by name, you need to surround that name with commas. Also, whenever you mention the widget factory, sometimes you capitalise the W and sometimes you don't. It should all be the same.

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