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Review of Crop Circles  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It sounds like the scarecrows are the ones responsible for the crop circles. It is an interesting take on the phenomenon. One I hadn't considered before. But I do like the idea of characterizing Scarecrows as something other than the villain of a horror movie. It has an element of wizard of oz in the concept.
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Christianity wasn't created 2.1 billion years ago, you have to understand how that mistaken statistic calls all of your other statistics into question.

Now at to the argument that god could not speak things into being. Any being capable of creating a universe would be so far beyond our understanding that any metaphor for that creative process one would use would be so completely inaccurate that this argument would apply no matter how the act of creation was described. And the time scale of creation is impossible to measure in terms of human understanding. It must be remembered that the length of a day is changing minutely every day so we cannot say with absolute certainty that god cannot have accomplished creation in the number of days quoted.

Your lack of understanding of the scriptures you have quoted makes most of your arguments moot. I don't recall anywhere in the bible where the location of heaven is specifically laid out to such a point of definition that we can possibly say we have for certain looked there and found that it isn't.

lastly I have to say that the actuality of creation has nothing to do with the relevance of Christianity in modern times. That is based on the weight modern man places on the values expressed in the scripture and it is up to each individual to decide for themselves.
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh what a sweet story poem. I had a cat that owned me under similar circumstances. She was sweet and adorable and left me a few years later. I still miss her. It is strange how quickly the furry little faces can worm their way into your heart. This really is a cute poem
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love it!!! This is a really good group of stories, they read like chapters in a longer book, you should consider turning it into one if you haven't already. Definitely going to check out amazon. You've really hooked me with these! I will probably buy one of your books when I get paid. Do you have hard copies? or just kindle books?
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Yippeee this story is as good as the other two I have read. I am going port raiding to read them all now! I love kieran and Mohng. Great characters. Love a dragon allergic to human flesh. Totally funny and unexpected trait. I can't wait to read about the council of dragon elders. How old must they be?
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oooh, love it, great read Must read rest of story! I think I remember reading Kieran's story of meeting the dragon. I have missed something in between and will be looking for the interum stories. Yes, Yes must read more!!! I would definitely recommend this story to anyone who likes fantasy. And dragons!
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an excelent poem to read describing the completeness that comes with a fulfilling relationship. I hope you have shown this poem to the subject because definitely happy tears should be involved. Sometimes it is good to let those you love know just how deeply you love them.
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is an interesting idea. I like the way the story seems to be laid out. It would be a little more physically easy to read and follow if you placed a double return between paragraphs and used a larger font for the members of the website with vision issues. The double returns between paragraphs would make it easier to know where you are without getting lost in the text. You seem pretty comfortable with dialog, but the usual form for the internal thoughts of a character is to put them in italics to set them apart from the things actually said.
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
THis poem is much better than the poem I just random reviewed a minute ago. I can follow the point it is attempting to make, I especially like the last line of the poem. I like the symbolic mention of fools and hacks who claim knowledge but lack the wisdom to produce more knowledge.
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Oh my what naughty elves. Are you sure they weren't leprachauns parading as elves. I have heard that santa is an equal opportunity employer. I read one story where he allowed a bull to pull his sleigh in an affirmative action reaction to prejudiced reindeer. I didn't know Christmas trees could get drunk though. I guess you learn something new every day, or maybe that is why people recommend to get them out of the house before new years eve.
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Review of Dear Friend  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for wring this and posting it. It was a nice pick me up today when I read it. Thank you also for the lovely trinket and it's sentiment. I hope you have a great day today because I know you brightened mine. Thank you so very much for something so positive.
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Review of Georgie Flies  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Oh, such a beautiful and hopeful tale despite the serious letdowns in his life he saw his dream finally come true in the end. It is the story of a long thwarted dreamer. He had such simple hopes and such severe disappointments. I am glad he was rewarded with a flight on his dragon in the end. I wish it could have come sooner.

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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hillarious. I am the one with the habit of wearing out my clothes like that. I even patch them when they get ripped. My partner made me throw out my favorite frankencoat a few years ago. I wish I had this kind of story to go with that loss. I actually considered burying it in the backyard. I had that coat for over a decade.
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a cool poem. A fantasy story poem in at least three parts. I like the atypical rhymes. They almost stretch the concept of a rhyme scheme. the rhythm seems a little less successful to me. I can't really complain though. It would be a little better if the font were larger, and the blue was a little hard for me to read. I don't know why.
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Review of What Goes Around  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (4.5)
THis is a wonderful story poem about the reality of karma. It is important to treat everyone humanely because you never know when your personal reality could change drastically. You might need the help of those you would show scorn or realities can easily be reversed. Not many win the lottery but nearly everyone experiences a rock bottom at one time or another.
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (4.5)
What a crappy thing to do, drugging her sister to steal her man. What would happen if she overdosed on the tea? I like this story it has a very open ending. Twins can have some of the worst sibling rivalries. One thing though I don't see why Marla can't become a nurse just because of hearing loss. There are totally deaf doctors out there.
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Review of FIRST WATCH  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Ooh interesting exerpt. Is it a zombie apocalypse situation? or is it some kind of disease spread by contact? Radiation. I want to know more, I want to read more. This is an unfair teaser of a piece. Please post more! The writing is strong and the characters are cool. I want to see inside the sanctuary I want to meet the rest of the population!
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Review of Christmas 2013  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a good poem though quite a bit depressing. It almost fully describes what Christmas has become in the modern age. Being eight years old this poem doesn't cover the disappointing phenomenon of Christmas products being rushed into stores right after fourth of July. there are some items that they run out of before thanksgiving.
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a very sweet story, I wish that it worked this way in real life. The fact is that people with niklas's attitude are rarer than unicorns. At least at that age. he has the type of maturity that one only shows after decades of life or experiences like war, terminal illness or extreme loss like of a parent.
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Whoa, now I can say I know a conspiracy theory nut too! Yea me! Do you believe the earth is flat? How about the moon theory, namely that the moon landing was filmed on a sound stage. Sorry! I actually do find the coincidences you have pointed out rather convincing. I find those and other coincidences to be far too coincidental. Have you looked into the coincidental similarities between the kenedy assassination and the lincoln assassination?? They are highly parallel. I don't know if I blame those coincidences on the cia or the Illuminati though. It seems more like proof that we live within a computer simulation like the matrix. I mean there are a lot of coindences that point to that. I also saw a picture recently that looked like it was a badly rendered video game image, but the person represented it as a completely undoctored real life photo. the fact is that a lot of video games these days appear to be more photorealistic than a lot of real world photos I have seen lately. So which reality is real?
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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
this was an interesting romp through wdc history from before I was a member. A lot of things make a lot more sense now. I like the voice throughout this story and the pictures. I wish I could have been a part of the good old days. Things sound like they were fun back then. But they are fun now too with a whole new crop of people.

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Review of I Miss My Dad  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a hard story to read for me. I am having a hard time with the anniversary of my mother's death. Her end of life was entirely in a nursing home and she begged me every day to bring her home. I am glad that your parents were able to stay in a family home for the most part. I know it would have made it easier for me if that had been the case with my mother.

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Review of What now........  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
this is a hard poem to read. My empathy wrings stress tears out for the poet. I hope everything came out well. I have had scares after mammograms and I can only imagine what this must have been like for you. I hadn't considered the possibility of writing out my fear and frustrations like this. Fortunately my tests came back good. again I hope yours did too.


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Review of O Restless Heart  
Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I would call this a poem. Free verse but still a poem. To me the other category is for something even more experimental than this piece. The thing is I feel that the category of other is too simple for the theme as well. I would call this inspirational, experience, I can't remember if there is a faith category but I would say that would be another good one if there is.

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Review by Spring in my Sox
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Such a vivid account of a cool collected spree killer. He seems to think nothing can stop him. He is way wrong but his whole sense of logic is flawed. I wish he hadn't been through what he went through. I have a character I am working on who has a similar background, but she got a hand up rather than knocked down and she is a hero of my story rather than an antihero. I applaud the way you have made a detestible person with no remaining redeeming characteristics relatable and sympathetic. Cudos and congratulations.

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