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Review of Length or Width?  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed stumbling upon this little ditty. The poem sort took off and sailed professionally into that second stanza. The rhyme/meter and ease at which you articulate knowledge made this a very clever offering.

I especially enjoyed the final two lines. It's wise and comical, affable. One suggestion: remove 'the' before sand and just get right in it. I think it might add a little punch to that delivery.

Good stuff, write on!

Brian


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Rated: E | (5.0)
There is so much to consume in this poem, I don't know where to begin. I'll say, I'm impressed with such haughty word choices that go beyond my lexicon. I'd have to pour over a dictionary to truly appreciate the full meaning of your poem

Your rhyme is driven and tight while managing to bang out an acrostic no less. If the form weren't necessary, imagine how much more you could do with this. Much merit for this effort. I'm impressed. I could never pull this off like you have.

I think what could help: I'd to remove 'ing' and 'ly' in a few places to tighten. It can help a reader better absorb the intensity of the poem's message without being overwhelmed by its great vocabulary.

Kudos for this,

Brian


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Review of Walking South.  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello All Smiles,

Walking south is a good direction...warm in my thoughts. I enjoyed reading your poetry tonight and took time to linger over this piece. You write honestly and directly from the heart. Your poetry speaks directly what it needs to say, not wrapped up in hidden meaning. It's refreshing to see such forthrightness.

Your poem reminded me what it's like to be with someone new in that setting...romantic, hopeful. The poet could imply more with the repeated direction. That's why I feel it is suggesting good things for this couple. The act of saving her when she stumbles is a good moment to show a trust bond forming between the two. You did well to show intimacy forming.

Impressed and pleased to read your writing,

Brian


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Review of Toressa  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I see you write and perform your own music. You must have recorded this? I bet if you add a link to the song from your website, readers could get a better feel for the rhythm of your words.

Torressa is a beautiful name and makes me think of someone Italian overseas. The more I reread, the more I can get a feel for the flow of these lyrics, though I may have a entirely different song in my head. Had you wanted to rhyme with the name? because then you could have something really Italian with something like 'it's you I wanna caressa.'

The expressions and sentiment in your lyrics are straightforward. Her name gives me visualization, but if there were just a few things to describe what she wore, hair, perfume. The whole where is she now or what happened makes me wonder about the pining. But, maybe it doesn't matter. It is a fun, carefree song because, oh well, it's in the past...I think.

Best of luck with this and your music,

Brian


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Review of flutter  
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Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Way to bury hope alive while seemingly giving it a chance for life. The imagery is stark and effective, the feeling of having that small fluttering feeling encased deep within nothing. It could be nightmarish to live through that feeling and come out alive. Unnerving feeling of a life ever altered while still sustainable. Interesting read.

B


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Review of Lonely Crow  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Someone ,

You have some excellent imagery and symbolism at work in your poem! I was very pleased to discover this as I wanted to repay you with my thanks for taking time to recently give attention to my writing.

I initially had a humorous reaction because of my relation to your main character. It reminded me of the TV show Monk when the main character would frequently say, "it's me, isn't it?" I was pleased with how much I related to your words.

The opening lines are vibrant in the elements that give your subject such rich depiction. Black in shade like invisible and voice of the voiceless having no voice spoke to me. I also like how stained by the color black felt. This crow still persists despite how it is viewed. I, however, stop drawing the comparison to myself when it does its bidding for the devil. Being hated for being selfish I accept.

Though, I can relate how one can be viewed as evil or be labeled as such through misunderstanding. It's hard to shake that image once you've been stained by perception based on color or assignment.

This is very strong in imagery, a good companion to Poe's raven...which symbolizes darkness within. Thanks for stopping by to read and give me feedback. This was a pleasure,

Brian


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Review of Choosing Happy  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello LadyLeo

This is an insightful, philosophical musing. Much of what I write is cloaked in hidden meaning where you openly attest, like I once did. I have lost the touch for crafting rhyme like yours. I run away from it now. Keep it flowing, don't lose that rhythm because it will gift you many more precious thoughts and feelings in need of expression like this. You will grow as a writer.

Happiness is a great goal, but fleeting. I think of times I'm happiest and try to recreate moments with whatever vice, like coffee and a little quiet while looking out the window. Or, when I have trouble falling asleep, I make up a little story or remember things I'm fond of.

I enjoyed this. I see you are new at this website. Lots to take advantage of and give you inspiration as you look around. Flattered that you discovered and took time out for me and my words. I hope we will continue to cross paths and rub elbows as we write and share here.

Best wishes for you and yours and future yours,

Brian


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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm reminded how important the gift of ourselves is to our children. Sometimes, handing down a special tradition, like this song, something unique and crafted just for us.

Your poem is sweet, whistful, nostalgic. The introduction gives perspective before embarking on the poem. I could visualize my own setting without description. As a reader, we can craft our own depiction of what this poem means to the reader.

I think a poem about passing on this tradition or about taking care of the grandmother after she cared for you could also be explored, if you find yourself wanting to craft more words...future odes. And wouldn't it be sweet if one day, out of the blue, she had started singing you the song while you were caring for her? That would really make us want to be a little kid again. (I got scolded once by my normally non-communicative mother in a nursing home once, making me smile) And isn't that what we all wish? To be little again. They sheltered us from the worries of the world, gave us a place where we were safe to dream?

Nicely done,

Brian


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Review of ocean thoughts  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem reminds me of how we want someone to stay fresh in our memory. There are so many ways to rekindle sweet thoughts, best captured by the feel of that warm sand between toes. That's what cinched it for me.

The poem takes us on a journey of sensory reflection. Very effective in describing the feelings when connected with nature and memories of another on the beach. This takes it beyond smelling a shirt hanging in a closet or viewing something we cross in the house daily. This is a beautiful place where winds can whisper words, carry unheard voices to capture our nostalgic tryst with someone we can no longer see, feel, touch in the present.

This is spiritual in nature. Anyone who wants to revisit another could imagine a shared experience, even without the other there. It brings a smile, it brings comfort, and it celebrates a beautiful person who is still inside of us, who still inspires with memory.

Artfully crafted and sweetly unfolded, I connected with your poem on great levels of appreciation. I hope I have such a positive influence on another when I can no longer be with them.

Brian


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Rated: E | (4.5)
A lot of thoughts come to ,mnd when I read this poem, but cohesively the rhoughts lack unity. I'm most intrigued by the second stanza, in particular the lines about the actor needing to dial in pain. There is so much I wonder about that goes in to making film, making it believable. There are actors in our daily lives who would deceive us for personal gain. But, what is their game? Without knowing their angle, we must trust their words until true intent is revealed. I think you tapped into something here...but what?

And what aftermath are we to conclude? Me thinks you are ahead of all of us. The poet has the true vision, knows the true course. And, what are we to make of these liars in our world today. So corrupt.

Keep writing,

B


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Review of Honoring the Dead  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
You have a lot on your plate as an excellent poet and multiple contest organizer and judge and who knows what else. (Getting stuck with this sand bag as a writing partner *Laugh*) Either crazy or greatly gifted at multi-tasking, you are an influence on fellow writers providing a forum and an outlet to showcase writing skills.

However aimless and aloof some of us may seem, our thriving muses pen so others realize we too breath life with our heart lungs, husk essence on mead and lighted screens, so others know our true beauty. There I go, getting all poet-y again.

Hopefully, you've learned now something about me, as I am learning from you. Community is good. Isolation, well, drives a mad heart to pen an opus of revelations. I hold you, as many others, dear in my heart for accepting me.

Best wishes,

Brian
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Review of A Rising Flame  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This was a sad haiku. The first two lines bespeak of a fire, the last, a resulting tragedy. has a shock effect for a reader.

I have been reconsidering the haiku form recently when I came upon your offering. This followed the 5-7-5 three line syllable formation. your visuals from flickering flames and flying ash are very good. The brief final verse quietly delivers in short the sad news about the family that perishes.

Pretty well done piece.

Brian


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Rated: E | (3.5)
Where to begin with a poem such as this written for the Josh Groban prompt in 48 hours as a spiritual piece.

The most important thing is its enthusiasm. It's a poem fully influenced by the message of the Groban song. Despite some glaring issues like rhyming the same words? Dawn with dawn and God with God. J morn? Destiny? Going for a unique vernacular maybe? Wasn't sure how to interpret as a reader.

But, with just a short time to come up with something, it can be difficult. But, it's a poem full of anticipation of the return...J = Jesus. It has its moments.

B


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Review of Love’s Vow  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This poem sounds like the start of something new and sparkling, full of hope and return on everlasting promises...as "dreams and visions await."

Definitely reminded of a vow spoken on one's wedding day. It's full of anticipation with "happy endeavors" with "lofty heights." The word choices are superfluous and give a hazy sense of this blissful happy moment of adulation captured in prose.

It seems effortless as candy that is savored by a sweet tooth. And the whole plan is tied to God's promises. There is so much security in knowing the union is a sacred blessing.

Well done,

B


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Review of Stranger yet  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
A brief description of this poem couldn't possibly exist, and ten years later still does not for a cryptic piece that speaks of covert actions in the face of conformity.

There is definitely a desire to tell something in code with this poem. Makes me think this of someone living in a dystopian world and has been colluding with others to break rules and apparently get a kick out of getting away with it.

There is a tone in this rebel poem that suggests repression. Teenager? Not with complex, evasive language like this that teases a mind to wonder. I could only say I relate to this on a fictional level.

Orwellian? Maybe, not. Interesting read.

Brian


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Review of Sunflowers  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an excellently developed scene and it wasn't really about sunflowers, though it sets and ends the scene with their stoic, almost watchful, depiction in this scene.

We are experiencing relatable events of youth discovering lady bugs in this summer place. It shows beauty and respect of nature and gives a reader a good appreciate of how innocence is discovering, respecting these bugs and nature.

Your word choices were carefully crafted in what was a nicely narrated scene. You warm a reader with your approach to subject and help us appreciate what most of feel is lost...innocence.

A pleasure,

Brian


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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I have found so few poems remaining from this dear poet who was just beginning to realize potential during an exploration of words and divine feelings of enlightenment. It's unfortunate when someone with this ability to harness their muse never got the chance to fully realize their calling.

There are four poems in this place that stand alone as the favorite signature pieces of the writer that was emerging on a horizon of hope. With your beauties, you took pride in their innocent beauty. You showed your vulnerability as a lover and writer. You asked why you should feel shame as you spun stories, fantasy.

I could see a brief glimmer, an inkling that you would grasp it. That you would rise ethereal and breath through your crafted words, now just images of characters trapped on Manila pages of light. It was a pleasure to discover and comment, though too brief was our time together.

May you have found your peace, having moved on from our world,

Brian

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Review of Willpower  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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It is a many splendored thing would seem an odd way to describe love. We get a gist of what the poet is teasing here, however. We as readers are left to fill in the thoughts, the fantasies we might imagine.

The poem as it stands I s inarguable. We've all been told by thought police how to behave, to conform, to curb our urges, desires. This poem speaks to those who have will, have desire, want to explore ideas, feelings. Do we struggle because of the restraints? Would we explore further, if we hadn't been told no, slapped on our snouts by our masters rolled up paper?

Perhaps, others do not understand poets, emotional people. But, why restrain them from thought? Why coerce us all to behave as lemmings without eyes? It's an unfortunate truth that the world stubbornly tells us to stay in our lane with their rules, the political correctness, guilt and shame. Greatness knows no bounds.

I wish I could have told you, "Explore, dear poet! Feel free to express yourself." I'll be here on the sideline with conformity until I'm healed...unable to get in that game where I play.

B

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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In your poem, "In The Long Ago," there is pondering how love came to be. I can see this poem is inspired by its wistful title line. When a poet's eyes have been opened to potential of exploring these inspired words, it's like a research writer trying to support a topic sentence.

I think the exploration was a good process, but felt you overlooked clues that could have surfaced and the summation was lacking because it was difficult to follow that title line. But, there were definitely some poetic devices at work in this free verse, flow of consciousness piece.

The use of platinum handcuffs to describe the strength of this relationship seemed unique. And I believe all of the searching should lead to the conclusion that maybe their fated meeting was just random, but romantically, we all feel destined when it lasts.

It's good work with a typo that did not distract this reader.

Brian

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Review of Fantasy  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Dear lost friend, you and I romanticized in a similar fashion. It's sad to have discovered you late. This is the type of poem that dreams alone, but begs the reader rest here with me and my visions. I could willingly escape to that place.

We dabble in the spiritual belief in fantasy. Such words emotionally driven to pump out deep feelings of reflections -- sends poet to paper to scrawl words like emotional blood, permanent, forever displayed here as our dear departed writer.

That first verse of free verse can put a reader in a trance. We are willed to realize anything we want in that tender spot in our mind, only openly shared by you. There is no room for rejection. We are welcomed, unafraid put ourselves out there for consumption, for affirmation.

This sings sweetly to me, summizes that we are still alone, despite the open invitation, to remain with what our minds fancy. We can create alone, hoping that another might stumble upon us. And one did! You cannot visualize any longer our love or deep satisfaction in how your striking words are amplified in this poem, I feel the longing, one waiting for the indifferent world to look her way.

I struggle to fully appreciate the words of the departed, white case or not, knowing they are no longer with us to continue their message. We have an appetite to know how it worked out. Would there be a happy ending we can savor, let echo in our souls, since we have not the strength to realize our own satisfactory stories end.

Until we may meet for the first time, *Smile*

Brian

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This is a sad but interesting poem that ends on a happier note. Each couplet intoned the title and really dug into this theme where as human, the writer, finds a connection on earth is not that easy. The poet in the end discovers one true attendant in his life with faith.

The lines from a prompt were given deeper meaning than just cliche words on the face of it. We're all off our leash in life. We find little support or love for what we do, what happens to us. We feel alone without, at least, a spiritual connection. This poem finds comfort in knowing we will be received in the afterlife, if we trust and obey the one who made life possible.

Simple, rhyming couplets that do what they intend: tell a story of loneliness and faith. Moving to see one's steadfast connection in faith.

Brian

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This is a sad but interesting poem that ends on a happier note. Each couplet intoned the title and really dug into this theme where as human, the writer, finds a connection on earth is not that easy. The poet in the end discovers one true attendant in his life with faith.

The lines from a prompt were given deeper meaning than just cliche words on the face of it. We're all off our leash in life. We find little support or love for what we do, what happens to us. We feel alone without, at least, a spiritual connection. This poem finds comfort in knowing we will be received in the afterlife, if we trust and obey the one who made life possible.

Simple, rhyming couplets that do what they intend: tell a story of loneliness and faith. Moving to see one's steadfast connection in faith.

Brian


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Review of According to You  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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"According To You" is a beautifully titled poem of such empty pining for another who has not seen the poet as a viable love interest. This is the type of poem that fits perfect in a poet's wheelhouse. We are all emotionally driven to pump out such deep feelings of reflections -- sends us to paper to scrawl our words like emotional blood, permanent ink forever displayed here for a dear departed writer.

You cannot visualize any longer our love or deep satisfaction in how your striking words are amplified by your departure from our community. In this poem, I feel those eyes of the longing one waiting for the indifferent other to look her way. But, when his eyes do make their way around, they don't visualize the efforts to attract.

Some would say, this is a tender trap. We put ourselves out there for consumption, for affirmation. We try even harder to get the indifferent to react, as if this would really be an achievement. Leaves us to ask, what would you do once love is returned? Time for reflection if it was worth the trouble. Better to have loved and lost...or better to not have loved? Maybe, the latter.

He was an idiot for not noticing, after all. Other fish in the sea. Try a spot where you can throw 'em back, I say. *Smile*

Brian

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Review of Fantasy  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Dear lost friend, you and I romanticized in a similar fashion. It's sad to have discovered you late. This is the type of poem that dreams alone, but begs the reader rest here with me and my visions. I could willingly escape to that place.

We dabble in the spiritual belief in fantasy. Such words emotionally driven to pump out deep feelings of reflections -- sends poet to paper to scrawl words like emotional blood, permanent, forever displayed here as our dear departed writer.

That first verse of free verse can put a reader in a trance. We are willed to realize anything we want in that tender spot in our mind, only openly shared by you. There is no room for rejection. We are welcomed, unafraid put ourselves out there for consumption, for affirmation.

This sings sweetly to me, summizes that we are still alone, despite the open invitation, to remain with what our minds fancy. We can create alone, hoping that another might stumble upon us. And one did! You cannot visualize any longer our love or deep satisfaction in how your striking words are amplified in this poem, I feel the longing, one waiting for the indifferent world to look her way.

I struggle to fully appreciate the words of the departed, white case or not, knowing they are no longer with us to continue their message. We have an appetite to know how it worked out. Would there be a happy ending we can savor, let echo in our souls, since we have not the strength to realize our own satisfactory stories end.

Until we may meet for the first time, *Smile*

Brian


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Definitely read this as song lyrics, easily country, and assume intended. The repeated lines, "Pack me up, dust me off and slap me on my back" have such a nice lyrical, rhythmic quality to carry poem and theme forward.

It gets cryptic when it addresses the person "you made your bed, you're sleeping by his side." It took this poem in another direction. But, I think it still comes back to this independent soul who wants you to know he is self-made and motivated and just needs his horse to be happy.

Ends with "I don't need love, I don't need empty cheer." It seems selfish and narcissistic, but that's the point...don't need anyone to make us happy. When someone chooses to bed down with us, they shouldn't expect us to change to suit their needs. This is not a story about compromise to make a relationship work, but about living life the way we see it. No conditions put on it.

Clever, well crafted poem that sparked my imagination and ear for its quality.

B

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