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893 Public Reviews Given
894 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Dear Oldwarrior - this is so beautiful and touches my heart. You truly have a talent. What special memories you have that you can hold dear. Isn't wonderful that we can reflect and use our gifts to write it all down? Bless you my friend. I will be back to look at more of your creations. Best to you....

Seabreeze
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Review of My Storm  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem My Storn. Great analogy - storm and broken love. Beautiful words and rhyming - lots of thought into this. I will be by to read more of your work.

I see you are a real newbie, 10/29...wow. You have talent. Best to you,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
More! This is fantastic. I find it to be well written and had me on my seat. At the very beginning, I was thinking to myself, that would be something to see the actual Titanic in the harbor. Since Monday believed in reincarnation, for the story, I could see where he was being seen in many of the historical places. Years ago I remember seeing a Twilight Zone with a story of a Polaroid camera that took pics of event that had yet to occur. It makes for great suspense. Great job, and first draft. Excellent writing.
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Review of Soldier's Song  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great description of how a soldier would feel. Selection of words give a excellent picture about a soldier and his job. He tell why he is fighting and he will continue to do his job. He tell his reader that he is proud. I can just hear the troops singing as they march....I like it!
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Review of Double Trouble  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Any pet lover can truly appreciate this poem. It identifies our pets boredom, the importance of a pet in having a friend to ramp with, and it reminds us what joy they bring to us. Your poem reviews all the reasons we love our pets and all the reasons they can drive us crazy at times. It is all here. THANKS!
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Review of A Ghost Story  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wild; it keeps you on your seat. I like the way you have opened it. I am wondering if "she" could have a name, at least part of the time. I became too aware of the "she" that I started to focus on it. However, I am new at writing...take it with a grain of salt. Lots of suspense which I like.
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Review of Ghostlight  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
"How many have walked this stage
With dreams so like mine?
Hungering for the applause
Intoxicating as wine."

The lines above are my favorite. I didn't know what the Ghostlight was--very interesting. The poem flows well and as I read I want more. You really feel like you are on the stage experiencing it all.
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Review of In your eyes  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Joanne

Very nice and I wish I had a guy to share it with. It is a beautiful poem. You have a gift.

I wish you the best in your writing,

Seabreeze
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Review of Learning Chess  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a cute story; very warm and heart filling. It truly shows a little boy trying to stand up to a bigger image and the interaction with his uncle is good to see. We need more stories that have that warm fuzzy feeling. I truly like it. It could work into a short.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
This article is very helpful. It is hard to rate low as, like you mentioned, we don't want to discourage someone. But, we are all adults and hopefully can take it. This is how we will grow as writers. It would have to be pretty awful for me to give it anything lover than a 3.0, especially during my early writing career. I am sure my rating process will improve, in time, with my writing.

Thanks again,
Seabreeze
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Review of The Man  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
I like the theme and how its sounds, especially the first paragraph but I don't understand the last line "never went to be fun"? Is there a type?

Question: When you say, "I die in peace today...". I am at a loss because this does not sound like a man who is at peace. This is, of course, one person's opinion so does take too much into it. Poetry is a tough one for me. Overall, I really like it.

Best in your writing,
Sandywrite
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Review of Reflections  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I sure can relate to your story losing my husband of 42 years to cancer last year. I believe your covered your feelings well and sharing this type of story so close to your heart cannot be easy. Well done article.
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Review of Bang  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Excellent, I thought. Suspense all the way. Different approach, which I like. Like a bad nightmare in a good way! More.
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