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893 Public Reviews Given
894 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Not sure I have a style....I learn as much from you as you from me. I will point our typos, grammatical things if I see them. I love poetry and when it comes to stories, please nothing "dark"....not my thing.
I'm good at...
I will find typos, incomplete thought (unless I believe it is conducive to the poetry structure).
Favorite Genres
Romance, personal, periodicals with history, comical, stories about true life, children, animals
Least Favorite Genres
Dark, morbid, Sci-fi
I will not review...
Dark, morbid stories
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Review of Have I told you?  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice poem. I especially like the ending from the last stanza to the ending. I see this was added in 2003, a few years ago. I hope the love is still strong.

Seabreeze
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Review of I Write  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love this image. The color, design, subject matter - very nice to the eye. I see you say you write poetry for your babe...nice! My husband and I would read it to each other. He wrote a couple of things but I did not find them until he passed away.

Just had to stop by and look at your creation.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Love all your c-notes and was glad to find this group.
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Review of The Face  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice writing. Excellent selection of words. It is interesting, because your writings brought back to me some sad sights, I remember, when my husband was dying of cancer. I was assisting him, at home via hospice assistance, as my husband only had a few months to live (lung cancer). He was fighting to stay alive and I was trying to make him comfortable (giving meds, etc.). He felt I was trying to kill him. I remember this "look" of my husband's face still embedded in my mind - so hard to shake even after two years.

Sorry to share all of that negativity. It is okay for me if I talk it or write it out, it helps.

Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice creation to your mother. And, it seems God gave you a very nice mother. You do write beautiful poetry. It is all there - love, play, companionship, caretaker, friend - all the titles of mom.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I love your "The Love You Can't Deny". It tells of my love past (to cancer). I hope your freedom is all that you wanted it to be. My favorite stanza is:

Let your spirit free while you dream (free or run free?)
Riding on the tail of a moonbeam.
Hold on to the love in your heart
As spirit lovers, never to part.

It is a wonderful poem and I am please that you have shared it.

Thanks,
Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I smell romance! Great short. I could see this being an opening for a novel. Got one in the works?

You put in some really nice adjectives and gave it intrigue. Now I was hooked!

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi 4Wheels,

I like your poem, One Handed Writer. You have a great flair for words. I encourage you to do more. You have written many words that I like...I like the way they flow. "Who will try to write no wrong. Because it just does not belong. Just want everyone to know. I am a one handed writer. Not a famous prize fighter." You may have a challenge because of having one hand but your creativity is tops! Let's see more!

Best to you,
Seabreeze

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Review of Scrapbook Wishes  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice C-note that I am sending to my friend, Gladiola.

Here are so gift points for you, Scrapbook Wishes.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I still think Nero was the worst; Caligula probably close behind. Good poll that brings out our thinking process. Right now, Obama is probably falling in the "other".

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (4.5)
Sorry but my choice isn't on here. It would be Obama. Nice poll though.

Seabreeze
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Review of Sinking Ship  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
It was fun, but I admit I did it several times and still not satisfied. What a fun way to create!

Thanks for the coffee break,

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Paper Doll Gang - I would love to know how you picked the title - I love it! Your art work is very nice and makes a wonderful signature. Best to you.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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My entry for Honoring Our Veterans. Looks like fun and for a wonderful purpose. GPS to you for your contest.
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Review of The Pot Stirrers  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, learned something new again. Loved the writing. Wasn't aware of the term but sure have met and maybe have been one myself. Nice work....it has been fun playing on your turf!

Seabreeze
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Review of Moonlight shadow  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice. It took me right in. You kept my in suspense and, for such a short story, I was well rewarded - well written.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Nice collection of "write backs". I especially like the one from Roald Dahl. I am not familiar with the individual but it is impressive. Such a fun collection you have going. More to come??

Thanks for sharing,

Seabreeze
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Review of Art  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice indeed! I know of what you speak about being afraid to write or anything else. I was always shy and pushed myself one time and took a class where I sung in front of a small group. Best thing I ever did. No, my voice is not that good but I had fun.

Your poem is well written and says a lot....I love it. May I also say, welcome newbie!

Hope you will stop by and look at one of my creations.

Your fellow writer,

Seabreeze
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Review of Maison Diable  
for entry "The Picture" 
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Oh how our mind can play games - imagination to feed our writings. I loved every minute of it. Your choice of words so well placed to "pull" me in. I believe we all have been somewhere, at some point in time, whereby you feel someone is watching. You brought me back to a couple of those places.

Thanks for the haunt.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have recently been teaching myself chess and appreciate the words you have put to play in your poem. It brought back to me thoughts of my husband, who played, who has since past on. It also reminded me of a short video cartoon of an old man (cantankerous grins,) playing chess against himself in the park, Geri's Game AK (http://youtu.be/1m7dcbIKvlw) . The whole poem gave me smiles.

Thanks for the treat!

Seabreeze
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Review of In Your Eyes  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. I love the words you selected to use and how they flow. Eyes are so important when it comes to communication. You have told it well here. I read recently that, I believe, 93 % of our communication is body language...and those eyes carry a lot of weight. Thanks for sharing...

Seabreeze
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Review of Beautiful Girl  
Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice...words say just what you need and has good flow. I like it very much.
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Amazing what are mind can tell us, if we let it. I like your words and its "flow". One will succeed because one tries and learns about life.

Seabreeze

p.s. Welcome, newbie..........
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Lovely tribute to our Savior. I love your work. I have one poem about our Savior. It is a sestina poem. It wasn't easy to do but was fun. I had no idea the various styles of poetry until I did so research.

Thanks again for your loving writing.

Seabreeze
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Review by Seabreeze
Rated: E | (5.0)
Excellent. I love the words and how they flow. My favorite line:

"The children are at play
With balloons, balls and kites.
Moms with babes in strollers
Enjoy the nice spring sights."

You, my friend, have the talent...

Thanks,
Seabreeze
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