This poem has great effect. It is lithe like and evolves with good flow. I liked the line breaks you decided on and the challenge you proposed with leading us to 'angel'. The movement of the poem relies on some rhyme and I apologize for not recognizing the rhyme scheme but it is a good one. Fresh, a good mix.
What can she not do, but this? She, the fragile poem?
Excellent cat-tale. Saw it featured in this week's Mystery Newsletter. I liked your style with felines, which was what was discussed this week. It was clever and coy. I think you followed up on all your clues and had a nice suspenseful flow. The best think about it was the cheeky humor. It was done with finesse. Good item. Best Regards.
Brilliant again. I thought I saw reflections of a great man here, and yes your angle with "defeat" describing the man while administering to this "fragile puzzle of mortality" is a knock-out. I just love your poetry. Visit my Port anytime.
Best Regards.
Oh, such marvelous lines! I totally understood his poem, it had strength in its body and the value of this poem is immeasureable... brilliant item. It was not phoney, it was realistic and glances like this give us time to think of life "like the wind in love". Lovely. Best Regards.
I really enjoyed your mix of mystery with this piece. I always feel that description makes a mystery great and done with poetry here it has a great quality. Your lines are indeed haunting and misty and make the reader feel the alllusions have a good method to it. Imagery and specific words key into the theme. Best Regards.
This poem I think purposely uses abrupt phrases to make their point. I see politics, I see loneliness, I see metamorphosis, and that first stanza which explains your idea of the first person, I believe. The poem has a nice means to an effectual end. It is just long enough to become catchy and very original. Well-done!
The poem speaks so well with "everything edible" in mind. Saw it in the Romance/Love Newsletter and it features summer items. Nice rhythm and ryhme and valuable knowledge in discussing love and a relationship. Deep "revealing passion" that gives one my favorite--love golden. Best Regards.
You know, Megan, your stories are often consistent with one thing--magical mixes. I just adore the characters immediately, and your sense of plot that keeps them in the fantasies they portray. Often, you teach a lesson. Other times, undeniably, it is an affair of the heart. Characters names here are ecognizably interesting and the fairy tale that goes behind that. What I wanted to tell you today was I have a feeling you are very aware that your two books I read become the ultimate product. Your creative talent stems from involvement with plot lines that work out and give us suspense, literature that can ven be read by a younger set, and that ultimate ending which does not give us depression. Your items on internet however are just as fun to read, and thank you for that. Not a day goes by that I don't look forward to you coming up with a great little item. Best best regards to you, Princess Megan Rose. You are a treasure.
How suberb. I just love cats. Bandit was an unusual cat to have met?, without the domestic life one might consider a cat has, you know? Your writing is excellent, in just the way you presented your folder with this one. Best Regards.
A wonderful accomplishment. You should be proud. Even though "Peacock Lady"is a beautiful sexy portrayal dollie which I really loved in one of your best image-poses, this one gives you deeply valuable prestige. You deserve it. Best Regards.
A great little piece. Not until that last line did I
really know what was about to occur and what had occurred in a definitive way. This is kind of an original fable-style piece in a way, motivating us to think about what has happened. Great job. Best Regards.
I tell you, there is lots of worth to this poem. The premise of it with "broken glasses" is unusual, and perhaps not popular, however, I really liked it. I always loved "The Picture Of Dorian Grey", by Oscar Wilde and that thought came to me when reading this. To do a twist like this one does, is always challenging to read, because you so often get the "typical" with poetry. I think your lines were good and impressionable and you gave us a good poetry device with your allusions. Very good. Saw it highlighted in this week's Noicting Newbies Newsletter. Best Regards.
You know, this is an excellent poem. It has some good poetry devices used in it that I liked and the flow is so good. I liked your premise and you marked a bit of 'life' with this poem. That last line, "Trees scream. Can you not hear?"--how excellent. Saw your poem in this week's Noticing Newbies Newsletter. Best Regards.
Excellent thorough article. With it's premise as how to recognize the signals of love, relationships in it, this formal statement comes across very strongly. Your lack of interviewing others I thought did not enter into it;however, it established a good sense of flow for those who love to reason with their psyche when it comes to the "goddess of love". Candid, psychologically educational. Best Regards.
Excellent ironic formula for a reality poem which also has flowing lines like: While I sat to sip my bliss with chardonnnay, I really thought you gave us a picture of "timelessness" that cross-sectioned life as it passes us everyday. Very good. Best Regards.
How absolutely fabulous you write. Your knowledge of Shih Tzu's is vast. This was a genuine thorough job of it. From training to antidotal remarks I found the item to be filled with activity. There is nothing better than pets to write about, in my opinion. With no children at home, my cat has true meaning to me. I loved your graphics. High grade. You have great strength in your honesty and love of your pet. Best Regards.
A wonderful poem. Found it on the Bidded Page. Filled with rememberance and thoughtfulness. Family ties give this a great thrust into what perhaps that last line can mean, in an ironical sense as well. Really loved it. Best Regards.
I have always loved Hepburn movies. One of my favorites is this one, too. She was in another called "Samantha" with Paul Douglas and William Holden that was great too. I think I understand Audrey. She was married to a psychiatrist and lived in Italy for a long period of time. "Moon River" makes me cry because when I was young my brother who is now handicapped use to play it for me on the piano. He no longer can do so, but sometimes he sings that song to me, wistfully. I love your folder. I'll be reading more of her momentarily. Best Regards.
More supportive words I couldn't have found. I have mixed emotions about the war in Iraq. My heart goes out to the fighting men who have died. When will it end, Megan? Will it at all? You touched on a
very emotional subject. I see what you want us to understand. Best Regards.
How clever to have thought of those heart-wrenching cliches we muddle through in this way. Your journey kept me interested throughout the poem. It was featured in this week's Poetry Newsletter about cliches. I found all the items used were very useful in understanding and unearthing cliches. Best Regards.
How true how true. Cliches are something I fear, yet a basic reality. They were explored in this week's Poetry Newsletter and you were featured as one of those who explored them. When I get nauseated, out comes a cliche, it's all most like spitting up. You know? Yet, they are tied to the tried and true at times and their sentiment wavers on brilliance. Thanks for sharing.
This is coyly subtle. And very very good. I liked the meaningful confession you displayed here. "Lost in transition" is almost like "Lost in translation", you know? To find your own style would be a great feat. Best Regards. Happy spring!
Just wonderful, Marilyn. A prayer in a prayer in a poem. Very worthy of praise. At times, my life flashes before me and I think of my last breath, and I want to breathe in life in this way, when it comes. You have great faith. Thank you. This was featured in last week's Poetry Newsletter. Best Regards.
Think spring!
This is brilliant in your own right, Harry. Have always loved your style. You never let us go without
those ironic twists and turns of a great story. Excellently done. Saw it featured in last week's Poetry Newsletter. Best Regards. Think spring!
What a show of words! Brilliant original copy. The mix of regret and reminiscence is amazing. I loved the angles you used and it finished off with metaphorical remorse. Favorite line:Pens and pencils, pins and paper clips,
erasers, old coins
and a plastic toy camel
crowded the air above my head.
It is alive with a calamity of rich images. Well-done! Saw it featured in this week's Poetry Newsletter. Best Regards.
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