Interesting item featured in this week's Spiritual Newsletter. I found it to be very well-formed with descriptive words that flashed at me well. I liked the line: Each and every memory's here,
as the piece worked its way through my mind. Eventually, that last line mastered the vision you might want us to see. Best Regards.
I liked this poem because it measures time. I liked it for it's sustenance, its strength in the lines, its clarity, its breath.
Best line:In the beginning there was a point,
hurling its contents through the ages.
This really made me think! Saw it in this week's Spiritual Newsletter. Have a nice day!
I just love this poem for its detail. I felt that great tragedy when it happened and was deeply touched. I think we all were on that eventful day. With numbers
like this, our security system has to be air-tight. Don't you agree? Well done. Best Regards.
This made me think before I readilly send to myself, Jesus is safe with numbers. Just the psalms even make me believe. Maher certainly must have had a different background when younger, than I. He's a card. Excellent poll though, I surprised that my vote only had 8. Best Regards.
It was a tough situation. You really showed the elements of the man/woman against nature theory in your quest to save Necia. I liked your active voice. It moved. There is only so much we can say about "passive sardine sandwiches" is how one author but it in writing.com. Best Regards. You're an excellent newbie.
I like the line that describes this piece: "It was a simple case of devotion." You have a good historically referenced story, and it is very well described. Great job!
Awhile back you reviewed my mystery book. It has gone through many revisions and thanks to writing.com I felt I could publish it.
Great entry. I love your simplicity with such meaning behind it. Your form was flawless. I like what you did with the prompt--kept it obvious yet coy. Swell poem. And always, your passion for writing shows through. Best Regards.
How good. I really read each line of this piece, it moved so well, so stylishly. I liked your attitude and wondered if it was fiction or nonfiction. Both seemed just as great. The dream-girl in this is a real human kiddo. Liked my read alot. Saw this featured in this week's Romance/Love Newsletter. Best Regards.
Excellent sestina. I had written one awhile back, and realize the time it takes to think on it. Your goal was true, and your words hard-fought. I think it is a genuine poem and stands apart from sestinas that are shallow only for their formula. Very good. Found it featured in this week's Poetry Newsletter.
This is a wonderful view of Colorado. I liked your active lines that lead one into a picture of a beautiful state. Saw much has been said about Colorado but you, too, have done it originally!
Favorite line:I can hear it in the distance
as a sunset's beauty stuns.
Echoes heard so far away;
through a million setting suns.
That last line shows us you have been there, done that. You probably really know Colorado. Nice to hear. Saw this in a Poetry Newsletter. Best Regards.
Fabulous poem. Just the mere metaphysical sense of this style is outstanding. Each line eeks for more lines and it builds. Really builds! I love the place in which you speak, and yet fearful of it from your description of "the door", as it lends thought to a haunting, yet paradisal space in time. Best Regards. Saw it mentioned in a Poetry Newsletter.
Oh, this is so great! Being from Pittsburgh, and my mother from Florida many months of the year, I really identified with it. I love the idea! I want to
be cremated as well, but I never never thought of it this way. Way to go! Best Regards.
Great little reality story. I wish everyone who wished for a miracle could have such great proportions as yours. I know, myself, my brother is a quadraplegic and my mother crippled too, and I haven't been able to give them their freedoms but God sends messages to both of them and they become totally amazing in their quest to be able to do things like other people. Thanks for a great read. Saw this featured in this week's Spirtual Newsletter.
I'm glad to see you and your grandmother made the trip safely. I was wondering for a bit, if something might happen. This was good suspense and made me read on. You described everything so well, and your trip sounded exciting. Good job! Best to you.
Roses are so special. How provocative you made that yellow one! The differences, the meaningfulness, hat makes us notice it--those things mentioned here give the poem thematic excellence. I really liked your choice of words. Saw it featured in this week's Newbies Newsletter. Best Regards for a wonderful Christmas.
How sweet and true this words are. You have dealt with the subject of loving oneself as well, the theme featured in this week's Spiritual Newsletter. Without love of these things you speak of, we can't be happy with ourselves. Nice job! Best Regards for a wonderful Christmas season.
The Spiritual Newsletter this week is dealing with this subject: how to love oneself. You have been featured as a poet who lends to this. I liked what you have here. It is marked candid. Yes, love can grow in the heart. If you leave it to yourself to do this, it comes back to you threefold. Best Regards for a wonderful Christmas season.
I liked your rhyme in this poem. I think that we should all think about something like this as we eat our Christmas Pie. This is food for thought that we shouldn't take advantage of what we have, and that we as a nation are destined to continue to uphold our freedom. Thanks for sharing this with us on WDC. Best Regards.
A perfect Christmas Yuletide story. It has massive lines and pulls out all stops. Then, the thoroughly wholesome happy ending. A great way to enjoy this season here at WDC. Best Regards for a wonderful Holiday celebration.
Excellent description. I was curious about your Portfolio and thought I would visit yours after I liked your comment that was featured in this week's Poetry Newsletter. You have great style. Best Regards for a wonderful Christmas season.
You know, I consider this poem very liquid. It varies into shape and form, and runs the course of active words which make for a wonderful poem. It is such a good adventure for us all at WDC to imagine the most interesting, perfect moments and then too, breathe with them. I like your poem. It even holds spiritual weight. I discovered it in this week's Spiritual Newsletter. Have a nice day. Best Regards.
I loved the graphics on this, as I gazed at it, I pictured the whole poem. It was so real, so tantalizing. I drink far too much Diet Coke. I guess I'm a soda junkie. Take it easy, Megan.
You are so right. 'Delighting in His Commands' has to be a total part of one's faith. Would you think on me kindly, Marilyn? I have so many problems, many people in my life who are handicapped, including my brother who is handicapped, my mother who is crippled with Multiple Schlorosis, my brother's good friend who is blind, my friend who has mental problems, my boyfriend who suffers from "slow" thoughts, and his brother who is mentally retarded. Can these people wake up and help themselves? Can I myself know what to
do in their lives? I don't want to fall apart over other people's problems. Just say a prayer, I will be grateful. I will think on your piece, about doing this without feeling helpless and knowing that God helps those who help themselves. Bless you. Best Regards.
This is a brilliant little piece. A lesson. I really loved it. The reality of that mockingbird made me think. How did he embrace a song that was not his own, you know? It was masterful. Again, set with God's will. I like pieces that give us extraordinary moments in our lives. I wish my own writing was more spiritual, my might think on this, and begin to examine myself with those moments in mind. Best to you.
You are a wonderful part of the Lord's Plan, Marilyn. You give up so much of your time, and it shows and you have laid down testimony to it. Just as in this piece, with that strong quote from the Phillipians, you can do all things. You can be like a steamroller! A tower of strength! All things are possible, and you can be even better, if he tells you you can! Best Regards.
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You know, I consider this poem very liquid. It varies into shape and form, and runs the course of active words which make for a wonderful poem. It is such a good adventure for us all at WDC to imagine the most interesting, perfect moments and then too, breathe with them. I like your poem. It even holds spiritual weight. I discovered it in this week's Spiritual Newsletter. Have a nice day. Best Regards.
