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Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really liked this fast moving poem.

You've told a humorous tale of your son's impending parenthood really well.

*Star*- Nothing could make it a better write in my book.
ShiShad

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Review of OUR PEACE BABY.  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What a unique theme for a poem!
Of course it's unique, It's your Mum.

A lovely Tribute to the memory of your mother's birth and her passing.

This poem just flowed all the way through.

*Star*- Well done.
ShiShad

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Review of MEMORIAL DAY.  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a well written poem to honor Veterans of War.

It gives a clear look at the Vet, and what it means to be one.

*Star*- You've honored the Veterans by writing such a gracious poem about them. Well done.
ShiShad

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Review by ShiShad
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This really says exactly what it is like to be the one left behind.

You've managed to say it with dignity here.

I really like the lines in the last stanza-
"And untill I am ready to rejoin the throng of family and friends I've shut out for so long"

*Star* That just about says it all. Powerful words.


ShiShad
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Review of War  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for allowing me to read such a poignant poem.
You have succeeded in humbly answering the question so many ask of you- "Why do you choose to fight?"

Thank you also for fighting for freedom in a foreign land to you.

Oh you are a hero allright. In the eyes of many like myself who do not take our freedom for granted.

May God bless you and keep you safe always.

An excellant write. Write on.
ShiShad

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Review of My Bunny!  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Smile*This little bunny needs a review and a rating too!

*Bigsmile*I think he's as cute as a bunny can be.
ShiShad

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Review of Twins Without  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Sue,
I don't need the GPs so I'll send them back.
I just want to review this story above the rest that I have read of yours.

I really got hooked into this from around the third paragraph onward. I found the story line of a woman finding out she has a twin during her middle age years; to be unusual and intriging.

You have done a fantastic job with your imagery and the telling of this story.

*Balloon2*-I can't think of anything that would make it better.

*Note3*Overall impression -left me with the feeling that the ending was somewhat abrubt. I wanted to hear more about the story of the twins! An exceptional write. Is there more?
ShiShad

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Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (4.5)
I really enjoyed how you shared your feelings upon receiving your gift here.

I have no suggestions as how to make this any better.

My overall impression is a nice write giving off a warm feeling of gratitude. Write on.
ShiShad
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Review of A Eulogy  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (4.5)
This turned out hilarious!

Funny flowing story.

Fantastic fellow- Santa.

Tickled my fancy! Madlib on.
ShiShad
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Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the way the story flows so well, considering the form used.

I see only one typo- "In Our Tim of Such Perfect Bliss"
The e has been dropped.

Only suggestion- I would read the second line of the second stanza outloud to see if a correction need be made in word choice.

Overall impression- A delightful poem. Presented well. Write on. ShiShad
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Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (5.0)
I think this is one of the most beautiful poems I have read here. If not the most beautiful! I was totally entrigued and overcome with wonder at your awesome imagery and imagination.

You obviously developed your own structure. I believe it is working.

I'm left with the impression that you really are a beautiful butterfly!
Keep up the good work. *Smile*

ShiShad


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Review by ShiShad
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
What I like about this poem is its simplicity.
I really like I so wish
to undo myself
from the burden that's me

How revealing that line is about oneself.

Structure is good. I have no suggestions.

Overall impression here is a bitter truth realized. Very good write. Write on.
ShiShad
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Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (4.5)
Intertwining ideas abound in your self acknowledgement of your own awakening while writing this piece.

Not a 'run of the mill' simple form of poetry.

Well done. I have no suggestions.

Overall Impression - This is a very complex interesting form of poetry.
Teases my intellect. Write on.
ShiShad
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Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (4.5)
I think this is a very unique form of poetry.
At first I had trouble understanding the meaning of your bound verse.
The more I read and reread the more sense it made.

I have no suggestions.

Overall impression - A nice piece of work.
Write on. ShiShad
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Review of I Love Only Her  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (5.0)
*Smile* I really love this poem. I like your choice of repetition.
I especially like how you reversed the repetitive in the last line.

Structure is good. I have no suggestions.

Overall impression is a sweet proclamation of neverending love. Write on.
ShiShad
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Review of Our Love  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (4.0)
I think this poem says alot even if it is a short one.
It is clear ,concise, and flows nicely.

Overall impression is a working expression of love.
Write on.
ShiShad
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Review of Guardians  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (4.0)
*Heart* What I liked *Heart*- I like the concept of writing a story about Guardian Angels in the first place!
Yours is very humourous. Diego sounds like an interesting character.

*Flower3* Suggestions *Flower3*- None that I can think of.

*Heart* Impression *Heart*- A vision of impetuousness amongst Guardin Angels leaves me intrigued. Write on.

ShiShad


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Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (4.5)
Good poem.

I saw only a typo error here-
First stanza , third line.
I think it should be so instead of do.
I can't further critize anything else.

More people should feel this way.
Hope you continue writing. ShiShad
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Review of In Shades  
Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (4.5)
I think this is good.

I did have some trouble with the 6th stanza. I think I would change the last line of it.

I really like the last stanza

'Over the hills, in death I hear
The echoes of the distant times..
Visions I knew once so true
Lay lost in the sands of time.'

Wise powerful words!

Write on. ShiShad
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Review by ShiShad
Rated: E | (5.0)
Just visiting your port.
I really like your story.
Very clever. Very good.
I found nothing wrong with it.*Smile*
ShiShad
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