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This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your feelings about writing on this site. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you and why you are here. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an aggressive style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The poem starts off with a tone full of serenity but ends up full of tension. This takes all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about someone dreaming of their quiet paradise in the middle of their real noisy, urban home. We moved just outside of the city in which we lived to get a bit of peace and quiet. We found it. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of sorrow and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a relationship in which one of the parties has stopped trying to make the relationship work and the other doesn't understand why. I am going through this right now, and I identify with the emotions in this poem. I read to the last word to see if this relationship would be mended. I loved this poem. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You do not use punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about your childhood and your thoughts about troubled childhoods. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use an emotional style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a wonderful story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if Morgan's future plans will include reading, traveling or both. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a girl who loves to read and develops an interest in traveling as well. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. This is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:
1)She said, "What if you could travel tomorrow? Saturday. I know a way for you to travel anywhere you want to go." I watched her almost jump out her new shoes. She said, "Where Mom, where." My wife said, "The library."-Two characters are speaking in this paragraph. Each piece of dialogue should be in its own paragraph.
The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my article. This is a fabulous article. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the article is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion of the practice of giving motivational quotes to workers. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written about workers not working efficiently in the workplace. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of trepidation and nervousness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Abigail can help Sam. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a young man who visits a woman rumored to be a witch to ask for help with a family problem. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with curiosity. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if there is something strange about George, like Bob thinks. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a police officer who believes there is something strange about his new partner, besides the fact that he smells like roast beef. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of love and disbelief. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Aele and Will be get together and remain happy. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who falls in love with a man with a secret. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about handling transportation during rainy days. Driving in the rain can be challenging, but, usually, it is just a matter of keeping your speed down. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The poem has a unique rhyme that is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the poem and subject matter very well. The poem is about the role charcoal plays in the creation of art. I do love sketches. I don't know much about art except what I like. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic article. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what they will be getting out of the article. They are intrigued and will begin to read immediately to find out more. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion about allergy season. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You written about coping with outside work during allergy season. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love but is tinged with insecurity. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about how true friends should perceive their relationship, with the mind set that they will always be there to support each other. This is how I look at all my friendships. I always try to let my friends know that I will always support them. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and plot very well. The reader is wondering if the plover will be in any danger from the crocodile. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a crocodile who cooperates with a plover she is looking for a meal for her hatchlings. The story is narrative as opposed to conflict based. The is rare in literature and very interesting. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.
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This is a fantastic piece. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the piece is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to reader to find out. You launch into the piece without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the piece. They will read to the last word. You have written about a time you went walking to get away from thoughts of your absent love interest. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader.
This is a fantastic piece. The tone is filled with confusion and frustration. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker will find who they are looking for. They will read to the last word to find out. The piece is about someone who is looking for a missing person with little success. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with delight and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about you enjoying the spicy Pringles chips even though you know your stomach will argue with you afterwards. I love Pringles. I buy them every chance I get. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is filled with wonder and tinged with aggression. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a neighborhood you visited in San Francisco which seemed to be stuck in the late '60's. I loved the look I got at you as a person as well as a writer. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This review comes with a huge thank you for reviewing my greeting card. I wrote this for my cousin's wedding. I had forgotten that I still had it posted here.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of passion and tenderness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a woman who surrounds her lover with her power to release his pain so they can be together. I love poems with magical aspects. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is full of love and joy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a man who has loved one, particular woman for many years. I am wondering if this relationship will continue until they grow old together. I read to the last word to find out. I loved this poem. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled if very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have not used punctuation in this poem, but this does not interfere with the flow of the poem. You have used grammar consistently here. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of serenity and wonder, but, also, tinged with nervousness. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if the speaker has gone back to the BlackBerry bush very often. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a woman who encounters a mother bear and her cubs while on a walk. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the woman in the story, and she comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.
This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of urgency and confidence. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if The Ripper will get to kill his prey. They will read to the last word to find out. In the story, Jack the Ripper is pursued by two time travelers and Nikola Tesla. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.
This is a fantastic poem. The tone is light. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a poetry competition organized by the Story Master and Mistress. The reader is fascinated to hear about the early days of WDC. They will read to the last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhythm. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.
This is a fantastic essay. The title poses a question to the reader. They are immediately thinking about the possible answer or answers to this question. They will begin to read right away to find out your thoughts on the subject. You introduce the topic with a brief discussion about we perceive large and small in our daily lives. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the essay. They will read to the last word. You have written about how we can find it difficult to perceive larger concepts of big and small, and you attempt to make these concepts easier for us to understand. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the essay tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.
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