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Review of Sleepless  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Kalixta

The snapshot you have posted did bring those warm and vibrant memories with fizzy crackle. This poem is beautiful...written to make the reader reflect...think...ponder and feel the sleepless moments in so few a word. Once again....great job!!~

Write On my friend!

Sindbad


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Review of Confessional  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
C.O

Hello again! Decided to read another of your poems since I liked the first and second one so much.

This is a beautiful story of a very intimate relationship and bond between your past and the present confession. You used words that made the reader feel and understand them and what message you were getting across through your words like - August dalliance, for a truth that could absolve.
Good Job!

Sindbad


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Review of Pisces's Son  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
C.O

Hello Again! Once again I found myself wanting to read more of your work....that is what we as writer's want...to leave our readers wanting more! You do it and you do it well!!
I always love reading your work...it is easy to follow along with because they are so well written and the words flow smoothly. ALWAYS in a matter of a few lines you come across with such powerful words. It instantly pulls the reader in and they find themselves lost within your words.
Well written, flows smoothly and is an easy to follow poem.

Sindbad


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Review of Memorial Junction  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
C.O
This is a beautiful take on a topic that brings deep and iconic memories to readers. I connected to it on so many levels. The reader can feel the emotions as they read your expressive words...telling a story that is such a special one! like - I know as much as his greying face, more aged now than before when we skipped class at cedar shoals high..
Well written, powerful story that catches the readers attention and tugs at their heart as they read along...your words flow smoothly and it is a nice piece. Write on with such zeal...Sindbad


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Review of The Sirens.  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
inkwell

This is a nice and interesting poem on siren and its subtle and deadly effect at sea. This was well written with a even flow to your words.....my only suggestion is that maybe you try to center it, add text color and change font style....it will really pull it together and enhance the effect!

Great job

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi
Pwnisher969

These choice and their well rehearsed adventures and indeed creative and exciting. As a participant I did feel the freedom to express my story in a creative manner is achieved effortlessly. Overall a nice and smooth set up that does excite and involve readers and participants in large numbers..Sindbad
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Review of To Go Around  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu

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A good style, nice tone and a bouncy poem that is cute and creative. Guess a perfect and brief note of caution on promiscuity like But that wild, instinctive passion
And incessant yearning Take complete command. A nice rhyme pattern gives this the right flair and sews the words together. Well written details with special attention. Good job of writing on a difficult topic...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu

This is an "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  Springtime Review RAID Review!
This is a nice and short poem on aspiration luck and dream in recreational or professional sports, and as a reader I did find it an interesting concept with strong inclination for more addition with timely and glorious answers or wrapped up promises. A short little poem comparing the ability to take a gigantic leap forward. It makes a valid point. Well done. Keep writing...Sindbad


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Review of Delta 02  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
Ember
This is a long and interesting story, and as a reader I couldn't keep my eyes of the story as it is interesting and nothing short of a thriller. The story and its main character Jonathan did leave a deep impression. As a aspiring author I did get good tips in keeping a story balanced and full with excitement with interesting events and nuances.
This is an action packed adventure where actions and sudden developments bleeds into reality for a young man Jonathan, his exploits and ordeal seems so unorthodox. He finds his ultimate mission through vengeance and unexposed risk taking ability.
I like the rapid fire movement of the action in your story. It sort of leaves the reader breathless in trying to picture what's going on and question what is real and worth grasping. I like how you make it all clear at the end.
You really do have a way with words as you paint a very clear picture for your readers to see and not only see, but feel as well! Continue being creative and doing all the wonderful things that you do, keep sharing, and most of all keep writing, no matter what. My rating is five stars...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and intimate expression of feelings both emotional and physical with embrace of a beautiful girl. As a reader I felt an awe with your penning an instinct and feeling coupled with exquisite sensitivity. The warmth with words like luscious babe, tightly-squeezed embrace,cozy, balanced feel are worth cherishing. A powerful poem that hits home with this reader. Awesome job, this is my favorite of today's read..Sindbad


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Review of We Both Love  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and delicate poem on intimate relationship. Beautiful imagery and well written stanzas that carried this reader from beginning to end with love and its passionate, joyful, and true nature for eternity. The poem flows smoothly and enlightens the reader along the way.I particularly connected with the last two stanzas The not-too-distant and supremely magical future! Our love will remain passionate, joyful, and true For all eternity…Thank you for sharing your insight on intimate relationships..Sindbad


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Review of Two Lovebirds  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice inspirational and difficult take on two lovebirds. As a reader a deeper spiritual tilt is clearly visible with Mother Earth to our spiritual ascent or Which spans all eternity,And which lays in the hands Of our all-knowing, merciful Creator. Thank you for encouraging me to think as well about how I use the resources available around me to work on my spiritual ascent. Overall an excellent impression..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and elegant take on a supermarket with plethora or stuffs that excites our senses, and you beautifully zeroed on wondrous bouquet of flowers and the direct correlation with love. I enjoyed reading the points raised and the reasoning behind each, clearly you put bold and sensitive take on love and the way it flowers us all. This was very written, the topic inspired thinking outside the box..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and rather sensitive take on a handsome and delicate deer. As a reader I did perceive and ponder on your deep observation skills with words like mortal deer or eagerly hapless deer or wide open wilderness or open patches of wilderness. This shows your sensitive repertoire of words to depict a subtle image with majestic and somber environment. Keep writing such excellent poems and I will keep reading. Excellent writing...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and delicate poem on sharks and their cold and efficient attack on their bait. As a prose this poem did hit the target with dynamic words like shore’s heavenly periphery or enchanted orb makes its nightly appearance or lethal marauders and their hunger or exist in this darkened environment. All this metaphor did leave a deep and factual impression of this magnificent and versatile killing machine. This is very pretty with lovely reflections and I would like to see more such interesting take on majestic and versatile hunter. A good tone with a good word flow. I feel like I am there and this has good imagery with a strong lesson as well...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and rather picturous take on offset of monsoon in a typical south east Asian country. This has a good style with nicely written details like "Although bad road conditions often seem a dog Whose bark may be worse than its bite". Easy to follow with perfect title and as usual very unique..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and rather interesting take on a seafaring journey. A good style and you can say a lot in a short poem. A clear message on skills, experience, and mental fortitude required for sea faring demagogues. A good style with powerful words like premier seadogs or stout-hearted Limey. Excellent take and not the least a very rare and subtle grasp on this subject..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and interesting take on Earth's most detailed design. As a reader I did appreciate the synchronous flow and concept or idea behind this beautiful poem.
The survivor of every creature along with deciduous varieties or aqueous vegetation or ubiquitous scenery or exquisite fruit-bearing ones, binding all these different multitude of plant life and their altering effect on nature has indeed been a creative and strong contribution in this poem.

As a reader I did like your take and will strongly suggest in expressing your creative observatory power in expounding different varieties of plant life and their subtle effect on mother earth...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and interesting take on victory and the emotions that go around with it. I did appreciate your comparison between disease and work habit of a victorious player with all the applause. I did take a lesson of believing and its miraculous power in this poem. I think this poem will work like inspiration for millions of sports enthusiast and the inherent celebration ritual..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and bold poem you have penned here. The relationship between innocence and boldness is very unique, and generally overlooked by major population of writers. Your sublime understanding of bold way of moving ahead and yet maintaining the innocence, and not get effected by ego is indeed a deep level of creative writing. I feel you have experimented with lot of ideology and miss the old era. With this poem you have maintained the balance beautifully. Overall a nice and bold poem you have here with deep meanings..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
S A Gibbins
This is a nice and interesting childrens story from a different era. Such works are rare and difficult to come across nowadays. We are flooded with works that gives ideas to latest technology or fantasies based to technological up-gradations.
So long story short, you've drawn me in. I'm interested in what's going on. Your prelude, here will be great in enhancing the reading component. There are questions the reader will inevitably have, some of which likely foreshadow something terrible, while other questions lead to answers I'm sure you will develop in your story. The questions in my mind are intriguing enough that I would love to read on, and I would love to have a better understanding of the world ahead. Your characters do very little to draw me in and in fact I was a little... well I'll keep that all in one place actually. I'll get to that in a bit. The characters didn't draw me in, but their backstories did and I feel I have to know what's ahead.
I'd love to see where you go with this. I hope you do continue and manage to justify the intrigue you've created and please include a prelude here...Sindbad


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Review of Easy Goes It Does  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and deep poem, that gives us a glimpse of positive and progressive way we should all strive for. You have given simple and perfect guideline for readers about intellect and value that makes us a successful and model citizens.Well written with a nice flow to the words that the reader can easily follow along with, holding their attention throughout the entire poem.Nice Job!
Sindbad
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Review of Delta 01  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
Ember
This is a interesting and a welcome addition from your creative portfolio. I reviewed your work a long time ago and am a fan of your subtle and bold writing. To elaborate you have a knack of maintaining a readers interest with simple and yet effective nuances like, " He traced his hand along her cheek again. "You do have more to learn, but it does not disqualify you." She tilted forward and leaned her head on his chest as she worked her way into a hug. Jonathan continued to hug onto her, not wanting her to leave. "Perhaps you can teach me a thing or two about not having to go about living life alone."
Nicely written with good details. Easy to follow with good imagery. JDT and Alexandra did have a happy ending in the end. Well written...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and colorful poem on enjoying god, heaven and earth. Your take on counterfeit, the nickles and the blessed dimes, or love with brand new start has indeed been creative and different. I agree with this poem about love is found at last. A good style and I love the word flow. A nice tone and a neat rhyme pattern gives this a good flair and sews the words together and gives it magic. Creative and excellent impression..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Tim Chiu
This is a nice and progressive poem you have written on a legend and his achievements, with a clear intention of leaving a deep impression on readers about exploits and achievements of Jason Belmonte. You always inspire me, Dear Friend. A good style as you ponder what to write but your devotion to the passion of sports inspires you and that is a rare gift. Nicely chosen words that flow together well. I appreciate the rhyme pattern. Great job. A very happy and vibrant New Year, Your Friend...Sindbad


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