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Review of Jewels  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Chasing Worms

This is a nice and balanced take on your daughter and her aspirations. As a reader I did learn your inherent love and support that unfolded as such and emotionally enriching story. A story that did imbibe some deeper meaning to your daughter. A very entertaining and intriguing read.
Keep writing! Wishing you all the best.

Sindbad

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Review by sindbad
Rated: E | (5.0)
Once upon a time there was a lovely little girl was holding two apples with both hands.
Everyday,her mum came in and softly asked her little daughter with a smile: my sweetie, could you give your mum one of your two apples?

One day, the girl looked up at her mum for some seconds, then she suddenly took a quick bite on one apple, and then quickly on the other.

Because of that, the mum felt the smile on her face freeze. She tried hard not to reveal her disappointment.

Until finally, the little girl handed one of her bitten apples to her mum,and said: mummy, here you are. This is the sweeter one.

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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi
Rich

A nice and interesting take on different animals and their behaviour and orientation while being domisticated. The lighter tone and a semblance of suspense on your outsmarting the monitor lizard, or your being humbled by a monkey did add to interest and learning of the readers. Overall the pace was indeed perfect for a specific group of readers. I am one of them, however if you can highlight the uncertain elements in dealing with different animals their perception and your perception, also comparing some of the common traits will interest a larger audience. The younger generation needs such unpredictable dilemma with a fair amount of adrenaline rush. Overall a nice and elegant take, with interesting and humorous incidents so subtly expressed...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

This is a romantic and yet fast paced poem you have written for your love interest. There was a spiritual aspect so well highlighted in this poem with lines like - All hands belong to His willful tasks. Morning beckons sweetly, And the spirits have awakened To His everlasting reward, Another day’s tempestuous And honored displays.
As a connoisseur of specific beauty I did absorb the essence of spiritual beauty with a blend of everlasting preordained vision. This is a rhythmic poetic piece and the style is elaborate.The language and vocabulary are good. The descriptions are rich...Did enjoy this marvelous piece of creativity..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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J. A. Buxton

This is a nice and perfect read, and as a reader I did learn the foolhardy nature of creating a video irrespective of personal safety, it was indeed educative and inspirational as well. This is an insightful piece. Bringing back the notion of foolishness of a young man wanting to take a video for YouTube provides an critical slant on a timely topic. While I enjoyed the concept of the piece, and I found it felt authentic (which is important in resonating with your audience), at times it diverged into points that were interesting in and of themselves, like- Michael tried to pull lifesaving oxygen into his heaving lungs and found overheated air instead. By now, he knew he was dying with no way to escape. Resigned to his fate and too weak to struggle, he lay down on the road next to Lucy’s body and waited for the end.

I really enjoyed this story and hope you continue to write and share with readers your sensitive observation, creativity in capturing defining moments. Your ending leaves the reader deep impression of unpredictable course of a natural disaster. Good Read!

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

For starters, the title is a perfect fit.
My experience with this style of poem is limited. I was pleasantly surprised to see you demonstrate a more mature and practical use of the topic with a pertinent issue beautifully demonstrated with words like- This time, inspire, ride disdain;
A mighty ocean, round again!
I found your word choices to be quite thoughtful and appropriate.
Who knew there would be so much to say about high stakes, the motivation level. Your poem inspires me to try one and get on board the train.
Nice work!

Thanks for sharing

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow indeed a nice and candid, surmise with anecdotes that leaves deep impression to readers. In short a perfect specimen for wannabe writers to write about themselves in dear me section to have maximum impact to readers.A well balanced and effective take..Sindbad


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Review of Be real  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Jester

This is a nice and interesting parody you have here. This format the the subject you have expressed is rather unusual and you have dealt certain nuances very effectively with catchy words like creativity loan. The lines I liked- So many people tried to lead you to water, you didn't drink so your voice got hoarse.
You ask why and why? I respond because of your stubbornness of course.

I enjoyed your take on our inner demon. If we delve deeper you have a perfect take on belong, with nice lesson our artificial outlook..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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lucifer very very very 1st

A very good read, a very compelling poem, written from the heart. I see a lot of talent in this poem, specially philosophical writing and I hope that you will continue to write with all your powers of creativity and expression!

KEEP WRITING!

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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DW Olsen

This is a nice and creative about an older and younger roommate. I like this story very much. What I liked the most about it was how it ended. Most writers would have let it continue the routine path, however you gave a whole new enigmatic ending with words like- The younger man was happy as he greatly enjoyed listening to Elvis music, and now he had someone to enjoy it with . And I like that a whole lot. Thank you for sharing this story with WDC. And sharing it especially with me. Keep on writing great stories like this one...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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GreyJoey is Ironborne
This is a nice and elegant poem on music and what it means. Thank you for sharing your work. If the challenge of the prompt on Game of Throne was indeed demanding and you have done a perfect job. In any case, great job with such a low word count. I didn't see any errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation, so that's always a plus. Keep up the good work and write on!

Respectfully,

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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lucifer very very very 1st

This is a nice and elegant poem, even though the appearance and the meaning as conveyed are two different things. Free is freely a sign of speech sounds unique and creative. I did find the trend unique with the flow of word along with word choice creative and rhythmic. I thing a specific mood and activity can create such effortless flow of word with perfect meaning. Overall a nice and creative job I wish yu all the best..Sindbad


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Review of Tenebrae  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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cat on the wall
This is a nice and elegant poem on Tenebrae. I find this piece to be very philosophical and it makes the reader think hard about the many layers that can be unpeeled after each read. I like the words- Oh Shadow! Oh Dark! The sky is falling! 10,000 gods. They are kamikaze men.
This seems like a war cry and so well written. I found the poem to be well balanced as to which poetic devices you used. Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You...Sindbad


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Review of Quantum Communion  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Joto-Kai

This is a nice and rather unconventional poem on spooky touch between two who are as one. You did bring some component of quantum physics that was indeed creative and far reaching. Your poem touched on communion wherein a wide variety research going on in quantum physics which I liked like- Glittering spatters pooled in the soils of my core. A tender shoot grew there..
I liked the title for this item I felt it was appropriate for it. The item description can include emotional attachment on quantum level between two people who love each other.
Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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WetAshes

This is a nice and teasing poem on butterfly and the rock. As a reader I did appreciate the creative comparison and delicate nature of the butterfly. I think it was very cute. I enjoy reading your writing you did an excellent job on this item. It was really good.
Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You..Sindbad


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Review of In Mongolia  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Kåre Enga går til Noreg

A good style and some good choices of interesting words that describe
stunning picture in Mongolia. Good reflections and nicely written details about laughter being fit. This poem describes the picture so well the reader can feel the essence as well. Creative and different. A nice job of such a interesting and imposing laughter, leaving a timeless value..Sindbad


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Review of As My Love Dies  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Redtowrite

A good style and some good choices of interesting words that describe emotions and pain of losing a loved one. Good reflections and nicely written details with inherent pain. This poem describes pain,anxiety and hopelessness on watching someone loved passing away. Creative and heart touching. A nice job of writing such heart touching poem..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

A good style and some good choices of interesting words that describe yuckster. Good reflections and nicely written details specially, But this patient young man knew that pastimes so steady Should be done after meals, enjoyed when they’re ready.. This poem describes a carefree life of Buck and his interesting passion so perfectly captured here. Creative and entertaining. A nice job of writing a balanced and interesting poem..Sindbad


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Review of Pure Imagination  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

A good style and some good choices of interesting words that describe wild imagination and its pitfall in love. Good reflections and nicely written details. This poem describes when imagination leads us down the wrong path in love, recovery isn't quick. Creative and entertaining with interesting lines like- Those embers oh-so bright,
And bless’d, eternally – Above us shines His light, For close to you, I’ll be. . A nice job of writing such interesting poem..Sindbad


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Review of Liar's Deathbed  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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RadioShea

A good style and some good choices of interesting words that describe secret that would erase any memory of his hard work. Good reflections and nicely written details. This story describes 52 years of sacrifice and the sub plot beautifully. Creative and thrilling way of getting exposed. A nice job of writing...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Redtowrite

A good style and some good choices of interesting words that describe emotions and pain of loss as a reader I did get a deep impression. Good reflections and nicely written details and each words hit reader with human spirit of innocence. This poem describes anxiety as well as joy and expectations. Creative and heart moving. A nice job of writing such a critical sacrifice...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Redtowrite

A good style and I think we have all felt empty at time about someone we miss, you have done an excellent job with Billie Holiday. Easy to follow with a nice play on words specially referring to sweet songs. I think we think we should have tried harder as you said here about Billie Holiday and her painful life. Nicely expressed details and creative. Good job..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Redtowrite

A good style and I think we have all felt the nasty business in military ads. Easy to follow with a nice play on words. I think we think we should have tried harder as you said here to deter the moves made by military mentioned in you poem like- At the age you decide to kill for your country,an age most discourage being wed.
Even choosing a profession is not wise, your brain is not quite the mature size.
Nicely expressed details and creative. Good job..Sindbad


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Review of Valentine Flight  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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iluvhorses

Thank you for a prompt reply. As a reviewer the most important factor is acknowledgement. This is a wonderful story. The tone is formal. It suits the story and reader learns and appreciates your fascination with horses. The lines I liked- The sweet-pungent smell of horse manure and hay has encoded itself in my brain and my senses as the most relaxing, stress relieving, endorphin releasing aromatherapy. I fully recognize that the scent is not so pleasant to everyone I know.
As a reader I will go to the end to realize your passion. The story is about Valentine the horse and you with your friend Bev learn the nuances of perfecting the horse riding skills. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue and actions are well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into this experience.Great job..Sindbad


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Review of My Inner Mare  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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iluvhorses

This is a nice and elegant take on horses. The way you started this experience it becomes clear that you have deep attachment to horses. The smooth and creative take on the incident shows your apt knowledge about the subtle behavior of horses.You are an excellent writer, keep at it. Thanks for sharing and be of good cheer..Sindbad


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