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Review of Love of the Gods  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

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This is an amazing piece. The title is to the point and direct. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting from the poem on significant other.The reader is delighted with the insight they get into your style and your imagination. The length is perfect. You completely develop your poem without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You give the reader just enough information to make them want more like -A mischief stunning and rare. You use a formal, organized and mysterious style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

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This is a nice and rather unique poem with your characteristic hold on sports and related activity.The tone is formal yet beseeching. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. I have been a great admirer of poems dealing with sporting events as you have a great knack of capturing the gist so well, as a reader I just admire the same. The words like - Is each celebrated blip On our posthumous brain, or
'Cause each athlete, each team
Is truly accountable - Without it, a scheme
Is awfully surmountable.

They have a rare and revealing meanings highlighting teamwork and individuality..Great job..Sindbad



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Review of Love Becomes Real  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

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This is a nice and short poem on romance and desire. You have captured a creative and unique angle on love romance and history.I love this poem. The tone is romantic and dynamic. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to imbibe the passion as expressed so romantically. Great job..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

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This is a nice and creative take on love and deep feelings so romantically and subtly captured with words like - And company until the day we return Home, To His infinite and loving paradise.

The free verse works well in such an emotionally charged poem, and you have handled it very well.The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. Great job..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

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This is a nice and enlightening poem on performance review and its subtle nuances. I got a well balanced and robust poem on employees angle and managements sagacious attitude. Overall a nice and creative take career and performance year review with room for all the politics expressed in a rhyming manner..Sindbad


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Review of Knock Knock  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Angus

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This is a nice and smooth flowing scenario you have written. As a reader it did bring some strong and rather catchy sentiments of living alone with pet and rather smooth flow of words. Like flow of water. Overall an erratic and interesting take with mysterious ending..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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J. Robert Kane

This is a nice and interesting style and pattern you have created and as a reader I did feel refreshing and learning experience in going through this interesting and scary piece. You introduce the topic with a pointed quote. This grabs all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the sentences. They will read to the last word. You have done your research. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible to the reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the story tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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J. Robert Kane

This is a nice and interesting paranormal thriller you have written here. Wis you a happy and prosperous new year and wish all stories you write or planning achieves the best of reciprocation and success. This is a fantastic story. The tone is full of fear and confusion. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is pulled along by suspense. They will read to the last word to find out what is going on what will happen to David Sullivan. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a poltergeist events happening at grandpas place and unfolding of chain of event keeping readers glued to the plot. The conflict is well defined with tinge of paranormal melodrama. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. Great job...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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drifter
This is a nice and spiritual story you have written and as a reader I did contemplate and express my complete surrender to the higher forces or Lord. You have expressed the power of prayer and consistency of the same a very powerful tool to seek our inner peace and a pathway from all present and future turbulence or danger.This continues with the momentum that you created with the title. The reader will read to the last word. The story is written from personal experience. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a spiritual person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job..Sindbad


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Review of The Seventh Day  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Iva Lilly Durham

This is a nice and absorbing piece with lot of things as a reader I have learned and to abhor from. The consequence of such casual encounter and its habit forming tendencies have been beautifully captured here. Overall a nice and informative story with lot of incidents mentioned that gives important teachings..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Sean M. Howland

This is a nice and sensual poetry you have here. In short this is a fantastic poem. The tone is excitement and anticipation. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about a persons dream and the process of actualization. The reader is completely absorbed in the poem. They will read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a lovely rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job..Sindbad


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Review of Angel  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Chereda
This is a nice and cosy story you have written in the life of Teddy the toy. As a reader I can appreciate the finer nuances you have expressed with so few a words. The story in life of a toy flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this story. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Craig Hosie

This is a nice and short piece on personal experience so perfectly captured. I felt the past pace conversation and short action that did leave bad taste and perfectly valid justification on dont buy any car dot come. Overall a short and informative piece..Sindbad


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Review of Full Circle  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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iluvhorses ~ God Bless Phoebe!

This is a nice and nostalgic poem you have written with perfect balance and aura of creating best part of youth and cherish able moments back. I have as well all the sympathy and prayer and blessings for Phoebe as mentioned in your handle.This is a fantastic poem. The tone is melancholy. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about old and fond memories expressed in so few a word. The reader is completely immersed in the poem. They will read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. I love the way you worked in the line like-
She has many snapshots and memories.
But just last spring, their plans cut short.
The summer spent on surgeries, chemo and radiation.
And in January, cancer took his life.
These are nostalgic and sad memories hitting hard to readers. The poem flows extremely well. It is a spiritual experience to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their unique experience. Great job..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Chris Murray

This is a nice and inspirational poetry, and I agree some of the best work happens when we get inspired through unrelated events and jot down our thoughts with mind free from all preconceived ideas and notions. This is a fantastic poem. The tone is formal. It suits the subject matter very well. The poem is about heartfelt letter of thanks to those who taught you to love learning. I love learning new things and you have exemplified the same. This poem reminded me of these wonderful memories. I read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a fantastic rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job..Sindbad


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Review of The Secret Garden  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Josh T. Alto

Hi this is a nice and interesting short story about a boy creating a fantasy world and falls in love with a girl. This is an eerie, wonderful story. The tone is formal. It suits the plot very well. The reader is wondering weather his fantasy can become a reality. They will read to the end to see what happens to his fantasy. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrates on the fantasy, and he comes across as a real person. There is no dialogue, but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story.The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Good job..Sindbad


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Review of The Micro Spies  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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safire_diaz

This like your other interactive story is equally well formatted and complete.The reader is already completely involved as they wonder what will happen next and freedom or say in what will happen next based on interesting contribution already made. This continues with the momentum.The characters are well developed and believable with ample scope for future inputs. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job..Sindbad
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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Chasing Worms

This is a nice and elegant sort of poem you have written here and as a reader I did get sort of tears on feelings you expressed on loss of a person who mattered and loved you and true meaning of love as well. The tone is formal. It suits the subject matter very well. The reader is taken with the story the poem tells. They will read to the last word. The free verse style works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a fabulous rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure with nice and pertinent sort of way. Great job...Sindbad


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Review of Sometimes  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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dogwood212
This is a wonderful poem. The tone is formal. It suits the subject matter very well. The poem tells the story of disappointments in friends. The free verse style works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a fabulous rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job..Sindbad


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Review of Black Eagle  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Milo

This is a nice and long story on galaxies and advanced civilization with nice and coherent plot and execution.This is a fantastic story with rather unique set of action and unfolding of event that mirrors the introduction on scavengers. The tone is full of involved anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is pulled along by suspense. They will read to the last word to find out how scavenger face unfathomable circumstances in their effort to get some expensive finds. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a Valerius and how boldly he faces unexpected challenges with his crew. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic supported with very written action sequences. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job...Sindbad


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Review of Obedience  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Capt.Wolf

This a very engaging story. The tone is full of fear and anxiety with a goal towards obedience. It captures all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is pulled along by suspense and sentences marked in orange. They will read to the last word to see what happens Carrie. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about a woman obedience and strict adherence to rules and protocol. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is fully developed and believable. The story concentrated on Carrie, and she comes across as a real person. The orders and structure are well done and realistic. Carrie speaks like a real person. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Nemesis

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. This is a fantastic chapter. You open up the chapter by outlining the setting and the overall plot. This focuses all the reader's attention on the chapter. They will read on with introduction to "charisma is an exciting adventure and challenges what you thought you knew about the world" Wonderful opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. The reader is pulled along by smooth flow and nuances of the events and gets completely involved in the action in the chapter. They will read to the last word. This is a novel meant for readers with inclination to business deals and ambition. You have made the dialogue simple. I think this is perfect for balanced conversation between father and son on a business or conventional meeting. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people with seasoned aura of confidence. Great job...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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RadioShea

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. This is a very interesting chapter and continuation from the previous review I posted. The reader gets completely focused on the chapter as they get into the gaiety action and rigmarole of events here. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter specially the way Joshua and reverent settings. The reader can focus on the completely your fascination at the first scene and introduction in each chapters give readers grasp and continuation to the plot. You capture the feeling and actions corresponding to the plots and activities of the chapters impeccably. There is meaningful dialogue, but it is very well balanced and perfect as per the scenes depicted. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter.You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job with memorable ending...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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RadioShea

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. This is a very interesting chapter. The very first sentence sets the scene and tone very well. The reader gets completely focused on the chapter as they get into the gaiety of the occasion. This is a fantastic opening hook. The detail puts the reader all the way into the chapter. The reader can focus on the completely your fascination at cat and its mysterious ways. You capture the feeling of readers with sing song tale and showing intricate and natural way the cat deals with this upcoming situation. There is no dialogue, but it is not needed here. The chapter is well paced. It moves fast enough to keep all the reader's attention, yet it moves slowly enough to allow the reader to easily follow what is going on in the chapter.
The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as a definitive and interesting player in this well balanced and enjoyable play. Great job.

Sindbad


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Review of Margaret  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Sailor661

I am reviewing this for: Anniversary Reviews. This is a fabulous story. The tone is formal. It suits the plot very well. The reader is pulled along by suspense. The reader will read to the last word to find out the interesting life of Margaret and her eventful interaction with husband. The plot is straight forward and moves along logically. The story is about strange relation between Margaret and her husband. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characterization is well developed and believable. The story focuses on the speaker, and they come across as a real person. There is meaningful dialogue, but it is needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job..Sindbad


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