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Review of SEASON ONE  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hi
Ben W. Gardner

This is nice and interesting take you have did a perfect job on main characters being introduced, also hard science, political and religious intrigue.This has good potential to be a good story. Nicely written in depth details and a pleasure to read. Excellent writing. Always: Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Ben W. Gardner

This is a nice and elegant get up you have that has great potential. I have gone through the screen plays of Chronicles of Vesna, and am convinced of its inherent popularity. It's an awesome piece. Powerful words, well versed. I would not change it. It reminds me of my venture in sci fi genre. Wish you all the best..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dan Sturn

This is a poem about terrorism and our culture of fear within the parameters of theory of Multivalence. I like the last line about the spider starving and astound. I really have no other suggestions for improvement. The poem is easy to read and understand. It taps into sensory imagery well..Sindbad


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Review of The Wages of Sin  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
First Impression: Short, spiritual, and well written.

what needs your attention: Nothing but as always there are always possibilities.
What part I liked best: . Jack Caudill emotions seemed raw and real. In a few words you were able to communicate the feelings and emotions he has to go through while undergoing the spiritual transformation.
Overall I will probably need to read some comedy to dispel the emotions your story brought out in me. Your character was strong and real. I can’t help but wonder more about him. Overall a nice and interesting story. Sindbad


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Review of Mary  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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VMac

This is a nice and interesting story you have and as a reader going through the part 2, can understand the undercurrent and desperation for Mary and get effected by her loneliness and addicted to drugs. You've definitely got down the elements and mechanics of writing in this type category. Honestly, I think this is very well done. I figured out the ending too quickly. Don't let that bother you though. I had the same problem with my story when I first wrote it. I just re-edited it and fixed that problem. Good job! Thank you for sharing your work..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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neilbco

This is a nice and interesting novel you have written on Serbian gangster and the way the captain dealt with all of them.
A different concept and aspect of life. A good style, nice tone, easy to follow and a creative mind at work. The words flow well with nicely written in depth details. The pictures and their attractive stance leaves deep impression as well. I wish you all the best..Sindbad


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Review of Orthodoxy  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dan Sturn

This poem gives a unique perspective to theory of Multivalence. This poem represents the nuts and its protective property so well captured by you.. Good devotions, creative, inspirational and easy to follow. Looks like you did great research with this. No errors in expressing the hidden nuances of orthodoxy. Words to live by..Sindbad


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Review of Hope Burning  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Kitt

I completely agree with story about finding ones self, hope and true love in the least likely of places. This title specially Hope burning signifies lot of expectation and effort so very creatively expressed in different chapters. I have been through some of them and did find the unique and unexpected developments that draws a readers attention to the end. Overall a nice and wholesome story with each episodes giving extra punch..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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iluvhorses

This is a nice and interesting take on struggle with and victory over breast cancer. I always look out for story that depicts and celebrates human spirit. I did feel awe with the foothold and control you were able to grab from such a serious physical calamity. You express your thoughts well. I enjoyed reading this ending. Excellent impression..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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rl

This is a nice and elegant poem on cherishing love.A good style with a nice tone and the words flow well. Nice romantic sentiments. Easy to follow with lovely reflections. I like the line about- Where notice begs the barest hint.A carousel around the sun. Beautifully done. Always: Sindbad


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Review of The Tire Change.  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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ironworker156

Appearance of woman and child with so well thought about plot and setting in so few a words did leave a deep impression. A good style,specially with words like- Her daddy was a gun enthusiast and guns were around her, most of her life, so she recognized the Browning bolt action rifle the boy was carrying, and in a ready position finger covering the trigger.

Nice tone with well written details and lovely reflections. Easy to follow as the words flow well. Creative and excellent impression. Exciting and impressive ending and always a pleasure to read your work. Always: Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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mikema63

This is a nice and interesting story you have here. The sense of humor and uniqueness of the position of Errik makes this story an interesting read. A good style with nicely written details and good descriptions. Creative and a lot of thought went into this. Sounds like you are a fantasy lover with a knack to spin off interesting twist in a plot. The words flow well. A good style, nicely written details and this is creative and entertaining with well defined details. Always: Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Guru Valmiki Aristotle Scriber

This is a short and influential take you have on arrival of living God. I was influence by the subtle nuances like- All His Infinite Creations know, See the planet Earth is on the glow.. The words flow well and a good message on Desto moment with good adherence to the given prompt. Creative and good job. Always..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

This is a poem I feel that defines and expands your boundary of imagination. I find multifarious activity and subtle actions expressed so creatively like- While I trigger much buffoon… or But a lot of cars cause indigestion or It’s for those who sing with pride,
While showing their unselfish side..
I as a reader have this overwhelming desire to meet and congratulate you for penning such a unselfish side with utmost perfection.
I thought the poem had an unhindered steady movement expressing and defining various nuances confidence. I found the poem to be well balanced as to which poetic devices you used.
Thank you for sharing this creative poem with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading. Wishing you all the best..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

This poem shows your past passion, involvement and understanding of sports and its nuances. I was really influenced by your reference to the heart of Gold. I have been your avid admirer and each of your poem highlights a new facet of your personality. I liked the title for this item I felt it was appropriate for it specially the cure. The item description how frustrating sports can be and a way out was beautifully and creatively represented here.Thank you for sharing this item with me I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You...Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

This is a nice and short poem on sports, you have given a new and refreshing incite on relevance of practice and its multifarious outlook. As a reader I was swinging with words like - To aim with strength's a knowing game or Without those goals, you ain't worth s***..Thank you for sharing this creative poem I appreciate your talent, you keep writing and I'll keep reading God Bless You..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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DeNine

Thank you for choosing me to write a comment or give my review on this excellent piece you have written. I have done a lot of review and I write the balance and ambiance I gather from a story or a poem. Here I did get a lot of creative burst of events. The primary impression I got here was your inclination to write a story a reader can pictualize, with lot of physical and mental emotions so expressed effortlessly. The raw energy you have expressed with dynamic unfolding of events did leave a deep impression in the minds of reader, however I will advice you to slow the pace a little bit for readers to ruminate and absorb the nuances of the plot. I felt the raw energy of adolescent that can be mellowed with some reminiscent or some flashback of imaginary events that has emotional bonding with the present situation. In gist I can advice you create some emotional quotient. Overall this is a nice and dynamic beginning with lot of energy and action, a little bit effort on the pace will make a long lasting impression..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Naveed~HAIL FLORENT!

This is a nice and interesting take you have on living standard of people and abject poverty. The final analysis on education is hour of the day. The education and awareness with open encouragement to creativity will go a long way. I was indeed fascinated with your take and want to add my observation as well. I think awareness and empowerment of the common man will go a long way. However the advent of technology is a double edged weapon and need to be monitored. Overall an excellent take, this article reflects your grasp and seriousness to the cause of common people of Pakistan. I wish you all the best..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

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This is a different and yet elegant take you have penned on rhinoceroses. The biggest thing is the poem and general visual it does give to be honest it leaves overwhelming taste. The form is excellent! It is in my opinion one of the few forms that work the best in humorous poetry with words like - Make or break, they're not dismissing or Shan't avoid these creatures' spurn.
So just in case, we'll not be lax. Maybe there are some serious message hidden, you have deftly highlighted safety here.The body of the poem was well constructed. All in all a very good and rhyming piece. Thank you for sharing your work! Keep writing!

Sindbad


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Review of The Tree Sap  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

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This is a nice and refreshing poetry you have penned on hunting for sap. This is a positive and methodical approach with subtle nuances on relationship and perfect synchronization between the couples. The lines conveying deep meaning to me are- The heavenly couple has managed to satiate their appetites:
By capturing this gooey, dripping sap in their now.

I did like you direct approach on choice of words here to convey a positive and yet electrifying environment like gooey, or mellifluous sounds, joyous partner, deftly, elegant breeze,Pristine. Overall, a well written poem that was fun to read. Thank you for sharing!

Sindbad

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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Bubblegum Jones

My take here is as under-

Once upon a time there was a leaf floating endlessly in a tunnel
A tunnel leading to a bank of light
Light leading to other doors
Doors opening to patches of sky and a beach in uproar.. Everyday, I traveled to many places. I made friends. I tried jobs. I carved pieces of happiness. Some turned out to listen to what i said. Some didn't care and wanted to go suck on rainbows.
Some loved me and i didn't want to understand what they felt.
Some left before i even knew who they were to me...and i remember them as lightening in dark summer nights.. One day, i found a strange truth lurking behind this patina. That life was a sun soaked cobweb. That people were scrapes on a tree standing in the middle of time. That there was no time but a ceaseless continuum - a glass without water but always full. That i was both outside and part of the illusion. That love was as formless as water. And as endless.. Because of that, I kept running. I didn't stop. I was 17 then. I could be older or it could still be that night charged with electric ghosts and smiling voices at the bus station. I miss home. I miss what was a family. But i cannot turn the blue ribbon wound on the dust trail. It is 12 now. And the city is a hive of frayed lights and dying sounds. I think i see faces in the bed and on the walls where the lamp scratches forms.
It could be you. It could be some other from another life come home to bless me. Until finally, leaving all these apprehensions I smile into the dark.

This is a nice exercise with all creativity and deep thoughts expressed with my review. I am reviewing this assignment as I find it unique and interactive as well. I am looking forward for such assignments in future as well. They are perfect in addressing certain creative urges. Great job..Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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J. B. Anthony

This is a nice and creative take on American Flag and imbibes the patriotic feelings in so few a words. Your voice is inviting and relaxed and your appreciation for the American Flag is evident. It is an enchanting place! Thanks for creating yet another satirical and to great extent patriotic contribution. This poem is an enjoyable piece to read with lot of inherent information's, yet it makes you think about what is being said from different points of view and ages, and makes you consider the actual or metaphorical take on what is happening vis a vis the American Flag.
Sindbad
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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

This is a nice and creative take on changing workforce and our sensitivity to technical matter with finesse and adaptability.I enjoyed reading your poem and the statement you made on working. Your poem has vivid description, eg clamor over duties of remorse or punchlines give credence or warning like every attempt can lead to ruination. The rhyme pattern in your short poem is consistent with creative ending. Nice job. I have been a great fan of your poetic technique and professional touch. Thank you for sharing.

Regards,

Sindbad


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Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

This is a nice and delightful love story with twist of generations. I did like the overall structure and expression of intent on different personality trait unique to genders. I have been big fan of the nuances you slip in each of your poems like -
This sweet guy, no turkey, There’s no such mishap.
I was expecting some lighter dig on most treasured woman as well. This is a nice and wholesome take on lifestyle, gender and privileges we so take it for granted..Sindbad


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Review of Love of the Gods  
Review by sindbad
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Tim Chiu

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This is an amazing piece. The title is to the point and direct. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting from the poem on significant other.The reader is delighted with the insight they get into your style and your imagination. The length is perfect. You completely develop your poem without belaboring the issue and making the piece tedious. You give the reader just enough information to make them want more like -A mischief stunning and rare. You use a formal, organized and mysterious style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job...Sindbad


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