First Impression: Characters are important in romance, comedy, crime and every genre. I wanted to read your views so I stopped by and started reading. I was hooked from the first sentence and read this all the way through. I am familiar with your work and style as well as your creativity. I smiled as I read this. We say what a character. It takes on a whole new meaning.
What needs your attention: I know this is about characters in Drama but I was hoping to see romance. Dramatic characters are in romance, too but I think this applies to all characters in a dramatic situation. This is a go.
What part I liked best: Dean Koontz talking about Elvis's ghost. Each dramatic scene should belong to a character. Good call. Daphne du Maurier's character Rebecca stuck a chord with me as it refreshed what I remember about her. Attitude is important in a dramatic scene. Good call.
Overall Impression: You did your research well, had experience writing this and held the reader's interest. Looks like you put your heart in this. A great presentation.
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First Impression: I like daffodils and with spring being at a slow pace, I thought I would read something that makes me happy and optimistic about spring. I like prose poetry about nature and so I chose this. Beneath a frozen blanket, lie daffodils in slumber. Good call. Nice opening lines. I was ready to read some more so I stay in tune and read this prose.
What needs your attention: Maybe you could mention a hint of sunshine. Maybe mention another type of flower and if it slumbers as well.
What part I liked best: Spring rays reaching under. Nodding it's frilled face. Soothing the psyche of a paused observer. Some good reflections and I could picture this in my mind.
Overall Impression: Creative and colorful. Easy to follow. I like the style and I like prose. A nice play on words. Well chosen words. I can picture Jack Frost as he painted the flowers to sleep. This is peaceful and spring seems to be in this poem. I enjoyed reading this.
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First Impression: I have been curious about air balloons so this caught my eye and I decided to read this. I enjoy romance and wanted to read a romance as well as pretending that I am in an air balloon. I am here going to read this.
What needs your attention: A Man who was mean falls out of the balloon and is now deceased. I hope they didn't leave him there. It was an accident. This is an interesting twist to the story.
What part I liked best: Leo seems like a bad guy and picks on Leeann. She dropped the camera. After Leo falls over the side, the story seems to have a happy ending. Every story needs some excitement. I like the description of the scenery. The dialogue is suitable.
Overall Impression: The woman and her husband seem happy and the balloon ride and trip seem to work for them. The characters are interesting and well structured. Some good drama and suspense. A good style and I like the scenery. Looks like you spent time with this.
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Nicely written details and I have been through a lot of hurt and pain from relatives and friends. These are some words if comfort and good advice. Easy to follow and looks like you spent time with this. Sounds like you had experience with this. A good presentation and well chosen words. Acceptance. We do need to practice that. Always: Megan
First Impression: I had a guy in high school who bullied me and others. I had to read this hoping this guy would get what was coming to him for being a jerk. I was drawn to this and wanted to read this. It didn't disappoint. He traveled on a tram a lot so I knew he was bound to get more then he bargained for. I read on.
What needs your attention: A light changed him. I was thinking maybe a Nun would swat him and I was hoping for that. Maybe this could be considered along with the light. Otherwise, everything in this poem was handled.
What part I liked best: Graham singing I'm bad. The Nun and priest keeping their eye on him. The light. Maybe the light was from God and it went through the bully. The point was played out and the bully learned a lesson.
Overall Impression: Looks like this was fun to write. The rhyme pattern worked out well. I wish the bully I knew would have learned a lesson. A good style and easy to follow. Entertaining. A good presentation.
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First Impression: A letter to a family member. My sister and I Met late in life and got to know each other through letters. I was drawn to this and wanted to read this. I was an only child and I am always curious about people and their siblings.
What needs your attention: You have to read this and you realize the brother die. I was thinking you could say it at the top of the letter before you start writing it but you read it and then you get it.
What part I liked best: The words were heartfelt. You ask God why and you told your brother how you feel. I like to think our deceased relatives know we care and if we write a letter, they can read it from where they are now. You told your brother you are grateful. This made me smile.
Overall Impression: The rhyme pattern rounds this out. Looks like you spent time with this. Creative and the words were chosen well. This drew the reader in. I lost my father a few months back, so I get this. I enjoyed reading this.
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First Impression: I like pumpkins, orange and white. I knew this was a poem about a pumpkin so I like Halloween items. I decided to read this. I know your writing doesn't disappoint. I smiled and read the first line. I met Jack. He drove all the pumpkins bats. I am in. I wan to read about Jack. He sounded cute.
What needs your attention: Looks like you got this. Dracula could have adopted this pumpkin and let it guard his casket. Just a thought. Seems like Jack had it handled.
What part I liked best: The ghost became the whiner and Jack was the hero. The ghost got the witch's hat and her cat. The rhyme pattern made this entertaining and I was happy as I read this.
Overall Impression: I enjoyed the rhyme pattern. I like the cat and the ghost. A fun read and looks like you had fun with this. I am ready for Halloween after reading this. I wondered if the black cat dances. This poem has something for everyone who likes Halloween. Creative, a good style and entertaining.
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Nicely written details and memories can be stored in a lot of things. Easy to follow and creative. A good style. Turning bikes into trains and rocket ships. Oh to be a kid again. I smiled. Looks like the 1969s motir car holds a special place in your heart. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Walking a dog can be rough. Crocs. No thank you. Swine fever. Okay. Being chased by a pig. I get thst. I had one run at me and he almost knocked me down. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and I am not a baseball fan but I loved NASCAR and was a faithful fan. I get while people follow certain things. A good style and baseball seems to work for you. Easy to follow and this holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and bad friends make us do bad things. We shouldn't hang out with bad people. I learned the police are our friends. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. Glad the kid changed his mind and became good. This holds the reader's interest. A good presentation. Always: Megan
This holds the reader's interest but specific details if what the actress and teenagers witnessed would be helpful. The actress ghost seems like a well rounded character. A good style and this story has potential. I enjoyed reading this but I was hoping for more action. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and a good word flow. Why would aliens want cows unless they like beef? A good mystery unfolds and this is easy to follow. Looks like you spent time with this and put some thought into this. Some humor here. Good descriptions and this holds the reader's interest. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this is uplifting and inspiring. This is enlightening. We need to keep God and Jesus close. Food for thought and words to live by. A neat rhyme pattern puts the words in speculation and rounds this out with a good flair. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and Wonder Woman trying to reduce Superman to being her slave. They are friends. Good characters we already know. Easy to follow and looks like a potential romance for these two. Interesting dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and this story is told in dialogue Metal chopsticks. Interesting gift, I never heard of metal chopsticks. Well rounded characters and I like the dialogue. Easy to follow and I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Thanks for sharing. Always: Megan
Nicely written details and sad when a fan murders a celebrity. I never heard of Selena Quintanilla. You would think a celebrity could trust their fans. A good style and this holds the reader's interest. This is informative and looks like you researched this. I enjoyed reading this. Always: Megan
First Impression: A girl named Cassandra is undergoing a sleep study to try to cure her sleep problems. I underwent an operation and I was on a breathing tube for 6 days and was in a coma state so I was curious and decided to read this. I was curious and chose to read this. I got introduced to Cassandra and decided to read this interesting piece.
What needs your attention: Why is this Doctor putting this woman in a coma when he was supposed to be helping her? He hurt her mother and is evil. I ask what is in it for him to do this to this woman? Some information needed for this part.
What part I liked best: The young girl's anticipation and hopes about trying to develop a good sleeping procedure and her high hopes. Her unsuspecting nature. She is a well rounded character that is trusting her Doctor.
Overall Impression: Well defined with good characters. A twilight zone effect. A good story that holds the reader's interest. Creative and easy to follow. I could relate to but my Doctor wasn't evil. He took care of me. This story holds the reader's interest.
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First Impression: A woman meeting a man who now own her family estate. You feel her disappointment and I had to read more. I was curious of how old he was, is he married, a possible romance so the woman can get the estate back. Looked like an interesting story. Some good characters possibly and I had to read more so I zeroed in to read this.
What needs your attention: What year is this? What country or state does this take place in? The paragraphs and dialogue should be double spaced because the sentences and words all run together and it is hard to read and follow. I could tell this story has good potential.
What part I liked best: I like the name Tabitha. I like the idea of this being a rich family and I am fascinated by the ton and upper class people. Talking about the seaside sounds nice. I can deal with that.
Overall Impression: I know this a sample that you shared. We didn't meet the gentleman caller yet. I do hope the young woman gets the estate back. This story had good potential and the characters seem to fit. I hope for a happy ending.
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First Impression: A little girl feeding ducks. Robots. Nanny Bot. A story with robots draws the reader in. This peeked my interest. I had to check this out and I was curious. Strawberry. I wondered how a strawberry would play into this story. I stepped in and started reading. I figured this would be a good story. I am here.
What needs your attention: Double space when you start a new line of dialogue so you don't run words and sentences into each other. The cone is $1,20. Shouldn't this be $1.20? Harpie Doll Nannie Bot. Is this another Nanny of the little girl Susie or the same Nannie? Why did the nanny turn into strawberry ice cream?
What part I liked best: Nanny Bot turned into strawberry ice cream. The little girl was eating chocolate ice cream and got all messy. The little girl feeding the ducks is cute.
Overall Impression: Was this outer space? Is this story on earth? Was it a crime to eat chocolate instead of strawberry? Well rounded characters and good dialogue. This holds the reader's interest. I was happy to read this.
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First Impression: I am reading about a bear and a Boy Scout Troop. I was a Girl Scout so I am interested in stories about Boy Scouts. I like bears so I was drawn to this. I figured it would hold my interest. It didn't disappoint. The woods make for a good setting. I like Smokey, the Bear. I saw the real Smokey, the Bear when I was a kid at the zoo. I was ready to read this.
What needs your attention: I thought Smokey the bear was really there. It was a head of a bear and this was confusing for me. It was a joke on the one Scout Master. I was hoping for a real bear and I didn't want anyone to get hurt. I just wanted a nice black bear to visit. Maybe a real bear could appear but just run off but keep the joke bear head in the story.
What part I liked best: The man laughing and saying they could teach the bear to use a rake. Well rounded characters and suitable dialogue. A god style and this holds the reader's interest. The guy thinking it was a decapitated bear. There is some humor here. I like that.
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First Impression: Getting an Easter Basket is so nice for kids to wake up to. They wonder what they will get. This kid didn't get what he had hoped for and is afraid his parents will blame him. I was drawn to this because of it being Easter. I had to read more. So, I went forward and started reading.
What needs your attention: The mice stayed in the attic for another year. Looks like the mice stayed another year. Did they steal Christmas gifts as well? What did the parents think happen to the goodies in the easter Basket? This is one paragraph. It should have been written into two paragraphs. It would have been easier to see.
What part I liked best: The mice living in the attic. The boy thinking the Easter Bunny is like Santa Claus. He knows everything. The concept of getting an Easter basket is always nice.
Overall Impression: This holds the reader's interest. When animals are added to a story, it makes for a good story. Mice have taken Easter goodies more then once, I am sure. Randy is a well rounded character. You understand his fears and disappointment. A well written story.
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My name i Megan, one of the sly foxes.
Title: Cnotes for Strength
First Impression: A person feels down and goes through problems of losing loved ones and need strength and courage so I saw these and decided to review this. The words used are cheery and uplifting as well as enlightening. Big snow drifts and considering calling it a challenge instead of a crisis. A good way to think of a crisis. I liked what I seen and decided to look at these.
What needs your attention: The lines: Anyone can give up, it's the easiest thing to do but to hold it together when everyone would understand if you fall apart, that's true strength. A great verse but I thought this should have a picture like a person on top of a mountain looking down. There wasn't a picture for this one. It was outlined in blue.
Overall Impression: The pictures are pretty. The flowers, raindrops, water, fireworks and icebergs are neat with words of encouragement. These are neat. Putting the pictures and verses together took some thought. These are real neat and anyone would be happy to receive one. Great selection.
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First Impression: I like cnotes. So, I decided to stop by and look at these. The art work is cute. The colors are well chosen and blend in well. It like when you go to a Hallmark Store or any store and look at the cards you want to buy and send. The pictures make you smile and the verses are heart warming. They say pick me, pick me. So here I am.
What needs your attention: I would like to see a Christmas one with Santa and his reindeer. A Christmas one with Baby Jesus on it. Another one with a lighthouse that says I am here for you. A leprechaun that says Happy St. Patrick's Day.
What part I liked best: I like the computer that says Congrats on another year around the WDC interwebs. The Easter bunny is cute. These are hand painted.
Overall impression: Cute designs. Anyone who gets one of these will smile and feel good. Good details in each one. Most of the holidays are covered. A good selection. I enjoyed looking at these. I May want to send one someday. Thanks for sharing.
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Nicely written details and a good word flow. Stones of love, bright stones, stones of peace and mercy. My husband bought me home a prayer stone. Lovely reflections and some good words of wisdom. Your devotion to God and Jesus shows. This is uplifting and inspiring. Beautifully crafted. Always; Megan
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