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Review of Blue Skies  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
We have had blue skies for several weeks. Some rain would be helpful. This is my first thought while reading your poem.

I was challenged because I had to reread the first stanza of your poem so it flowed smoothly. The second reading I did was much better.

I was able to see through your words the scene, but I would have liked to know more about the color "blue" For example was it a light blue or tinted with gray? Was it the kind of blue that seemed to wrap itself around emotions because it brought out the details of a spectacular day?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Where was Moses?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
When I read the first line about the sauerkrautI had a good chuckle, thank you. I happen to enjoy eating sauerkraut especially if it is freshly made. Canned sauerkraut will do if necessary. I could smell, taste, and imagine Moses in the cellar eating and enjoying his sauerkraut. The rhyming bounce nicely carried along word for word. This is a great story poem that has wonderful word choices, a good plot, plenty of action, and makes eating sauerkraut interesting in a unique way.

Thank you for writing and sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of He Gets an A+  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
As I read your story poem, I could see the class eagerly soaking up the information as Mr. Macmurren shared his knowledge. I could feel His searching quest to find the treasures that would enlighten, strengthen, and encourage learning. Your words showed this precious scene vividly. I felt the closeness between teacher and students as learning became the focus and brought excitement and courage to everyone.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Stark  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The photo and your words show A stormy situation at the beach. I can imagine the brisk breeze sounding as it leans the tree toward the sand bringing the Hanging chair to rest. I believe your words about the storm's actions.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of The Moment I Knew  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could see the two characters sitting under the tree conversing and I could hear their quiet talk. The scene, characters, and plot are believable. I wonder though if there was a sinister event waiting to happen or if this was a straightforward story about two people who cared for each other.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem made me think of God who whispered. I could see in my mind's eye the universe coming to life in an instant after the whisper. A thought occurred to me, the press release in a way could be scripture written about Genesis.

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Review of Out Of Nowhere  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Terror by no cell phone signal, a crazed husband who had enough, and the tree that ended life as they knew it. He might have survived but she would live on elsewhere. I wonder if this story were grown, what happened to him? What if she did survive by some miracle? What if in a twist of fate, she survived and he did not? What was their history?

I could visualize the characters, and events, and believe the plot.

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Review of Family Gathering  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I can smell the wafting aroma of food cooking, the grass and tree flavors, and imagine family members together enjoying a cookout. Divine love brings me to humans as the flowers in the garden enjoying a cookout.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
You certainly conveyed well the mental challenges you experienced through Bla, Bla, Bla, and some other descriptive words. Bla stands out the most. I'm glad your story ended on a happier note. I guess according to your last line you also had jangled nerves? I hope things work out well for you in the future.

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Review of Comfort  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I do understand the relief of a quiet brain because it takes me a long time to go to sleep because my brain does not know when to shut up. I can see this writing from two points of view. From the view of the dead person whose brain is now quiet in death, and from the living person whose brain is stunned or saddened because of the loss of someone and is now quietly working through the grief of this loss.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I had to think about the words you used to convey your ideas in this poem. I like the ending which is as I understand it, about being honorable, not causing wars or other destructive issues, and keeping the faith. Yup, it takes all kinds of minds sets in this world to learn to work, play, and exist on Earth together.

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Review of who am I?  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
ESL English As A Second Language kind of reminds me of ASL. I was born premature by six weeks and placed in an incubator. Back then it was a very big deal. I can relate to medical challenges because I am living with medical challenges. It was nice to read about your life experiences.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree that humans often battle against nature rather than working with nature. Your story is believable based on what I think would happen if animals were to stand up for nature and fight for survival. Your words show well how animals would react and the outcome of a vote for or against humans.

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Review of The Changed Man  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
What underhanded sales tactics, but great for a very interesting story. I could believe this story because the dialog is real-life character statements, the characters act normal for the situation, and the scene really could be authentic. My imagination produced each scene, and character, and filled in the details to bring your words into sharp focus.

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Review of The Messenger  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It didn't want to be written entirely, God wanted you to write this story, therefore because God wanted you to write this story, it wanted to be written. I completely agree with you that God loves and is interested in everyone unconditionally. There are, however, Requirements, but here is not the place to delve into them. WE HAD FREE CHOICE BECAUSE GOD DOES NOT WANT PUPPETS ON STRINGS. Oops accidentally hit the caps lock, but then this might be God's emphasis. I could believe this story, see the characters and scenes, hear the conversation, and feel the special spiritual influence upon your story.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
This seems to be an extraordinary and strong love for a very special person that can not be repaid in kind. Yje honor and respect for the loved one and the risks for this person show the determination and life long comitment to the loved one. I could feel the magnetic pull toward this loved one.

I noticed there are several typos.

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Review of The Beauty of Use  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I smiled as I read your poem story because thinking about a writer and the craft came to me first. Then, the idea of memories of things I have enjoyed and used. I could picture old things compared to new things and the character of the old things was shown brightly because I understood the love for them in your words. God came to my mind and my heart leaped for joy as I read more of your carefully chosen and placed words. God's love for us is always and forever not matter where we wind up.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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Review of Little Big Horn  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The other side of seeing the future is the possibility of changes because of fear. Hopefully, history will be decided because of other influences besides fear. I could visualize the scenes and imagine someone possibly changing history because the future was revealed to this person. This could be a double-edged sword as are many things in life.

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Review of Faith's Path  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your poem is so peaceful after the relationship with God is forged. I could imagine the cuts and bruises of life and being distanced from God. I also could feel His gentle hug and careful bringing of his child into His sheltering and safe domain. The path forward is easy and His yoke is light.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
The word count of 700 is interesting because 7 is important to God. You wrote a wonderful story that is believable. The scene and character are believable. I could feel the hope and regaining of the relationship between Megan and God. The note card made a good example of God at work through people or sometimes other means.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Nothin' like having financial troubles and fixing them with a stiff drink only to find more trouble waiting for you on the other end of the conversation with the barkeeper, nice story. I could envision the characters and hear the conversation as if I were there close enough to hear and see everything but far enough away to be a spectator.

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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Warm hearts are a good thing and I can imagine these hearts wrapped in a loving blanket. As I read your poem, I was able to see the characters in silhouette dancing and the events as the characters proceeded through their encounter together.

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Review of The truth  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem has much fodder to consider. In a way, it is a sad poem, but in another way, it is a happy poem. Sad because of the awfulness written about and happy because of overcoming the bad and finding life and happiness working together.

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I'm glad you found love in your heart today and every day. I enjoyed reading your poem because the words gently guided me along the way to know the story of your found love. It felt as if you were telling me about this wonderful event in your life.

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Review of Trade Winds Sing  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could definitely imagine the trade winds blowing and bringing the sounds and scents of the area to me. Your words showed a peaceful situation. I felt calm and relaxed as I read your poem.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.


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