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Review of Misled  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Maybe you should have known, but usually, people are good at hiding things, so I would probably think that you were deceived and the truth was hidden from you with other things to distract you from seeing the reality of the situation. I hope you have been able to heal and continue with a happy life.

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Review of Fall  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I agree that fall is a nice time of year, but dread the coming winter because it means scrounging for firewood. It also means I need to fix and prepare the chimney and woodstove asap. Otherwise, I'm with you. I could see the brilliantly colored leaves cascading through the air and feel the coolness of fall as I read your poem.

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Review of Cosmic Serenade  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Love never ending seems to weave through your poem and show a union of never-ending appreciation for all the best anyone could imagine for each other. I could feel the love and see how each of you felt through the vivid words you used.

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Review of LGBTQ+  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I respectfully write that according to the scriptures, man should not be with man nor woman with woman. I do get that we should love one another which is also in scripture, but it is meant as brother and sister as in loving a family member. Some of my friends have different lifestyles than I do, so I'm not against you. I am sharing what I understand about the situation.

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Review of LOVE’S TEAR  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It seems that you are in the middle of a situation that is in need of answers, yet I suspect that you also do not want to know what the answers are because of the possibility of disappointment.

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Review of Moving Forward  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
They were fortunate to be able to discuss the movie and game situation without it becoming an argument. I'm glad their marriage moved forward and hope it continued to be a positive experience for both of them. Through your words, I could see them interacting as they watched the movie which was eventually paused. They seem to get along well and to be able to agree to disagree, a good marriage is a a pleasure.

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Review of Rob's Rescue  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You wrote a very nice story showing how caring for Robin is like God caring for us. I could visualize the characters taking care of the bird as well as think about God and visualize Him taking care of us. God is good all the time.

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Review of Morning Glory  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem shows adversity being thwarted with safety. It made me think about the many ways I have been protected by God's hedge of protection from harm. You showed me a different but interesting point of view that is similar to what I believe and yet it is different also. This difference sheds light onto other facets of belief I did not know about.

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Review of Furbaby  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I am thankful for the pets I have. I can attest from my lifelong adventure with having animal friends that you are absolutely correct. I like the way you compared having pets with not having pets because for me I believe this is true, but sadly some people do not have a clue of the joy an animal friend and family member can give to someone. Your words spoke volumes to the reasons for bringing a pet into the family and cherishing that animal as a beloved family member.

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Review of A Moment In Life  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, washing dishes has never been my favorite activity, but you have shown me a new way of seeing this activity and many other activities. For this, I thank you very much. I've seen doing dishes as thank you, God, for the dishes and my ability to wash them. Now that I can experience washing dishes differently, I expect to become more eager to do this task with gratitude and thankfulness as I relax and enjoy the experience. Do you have any other ideas or different POVs to share with WdC members?

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Review of The Pro!  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It is amazing how people can think they know someone and their story. It seemed to be a huge surprise for Danny and Pete to discover the ability Bobby had for riding a bicycle. I liked the idea that Bobby was not a showoff and that he understood how other people would feel if he were to compete with the rest of the bikers.

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Review of Sleep My Dear  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
In your words, I could feel the loss and the hope together intertwined in a moment of grief and relief. Because I've been there and done this for family members, I can relate to your poem. I also could feel the hope for your loved one to have peace and to be happy while sleeping/being away from earth and waiting for you to join her or him.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like the condensed history lesson because the words kept me moving forward and wanting to read to the end of your poetry story. I could follow the events and understand what was happening.

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Review of Crown of Glory  
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
[The crown of glory] makes me think of God. Nature as God has made it can be breathtakingly beautiful. Your words brought this experience to life for me. It was as if I was with you and we were sharing the same wonderful display of nature.

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Review of That Night  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Your story is believable, the characters, and the scene because things like this have happened in real life.

[Before Jeff and Jennifer had gotten to the sofa, they were three miles up...] I know you mean the spaceship and its occupants were three miles up, but, I had to pause a moment because I could have interpreted it either way. This temporarily took me out of your story.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
When you switched the ending rhyme it made me feel like I was in front of a stop light. It worked well for me. My reading pace slowed as I was guided to a gentle end. The rhythm seemed to be a bit bouncy throughout except for the ending four lines which kept me reading at a faster pace.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I chuckled when I read the ending of your poem. I could see, smell, and hear the furnace as it kept working hard during the night keeping you awake. Although it seemed dangerous, it was probably better than no heat at all, glad everyone is safe. Also, I could imagine the relief when at long-last the old furnace was finally in the junkyard.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem is definitely vivid and shows the conflict between being with and being without. I could see two people being together and yet at the same time pulled apart. The hurt although worse at times seems to be always nagging and tearing away at you and maybe the other person. I know there is something special about soulmates.

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Review of Aground  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could certainly feel the loneliness, dread of same stuff different day, and the isolation. Seeing in my imagination on old person reviewing years of the past in their minds as the only activity brought sadness to me. I have experienced being in a place like this because of visiting friends.

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Review of Dancing Sticks  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You showed a nice video. I was able to see the brand name and it is exactly the same brand of drumset I used to have many years ago. Your poem brought back vivid memories of setting up and breaking down as the band played different gigs. I completely understood your poem because of having this experience, but other people might not completely know about the many techniques and aspects of playing drums. It is great that you added the video.

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Review of No Reservations  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow, you wrote a nice poem with vivid words showing emotions. I could see the ribbon of road(s), the vehicle covering many miles, and the fatigue of driving eventually requiring rest. The feelings of anticipation were evident on both sides. The relief of being reunited is unmistakable.

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Review of Pears  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
It seems there are bullies among the fighters. I can believe the story, characters, and scenes. It is a strange world though. Showing emotions for example: Robin had muscles of rubber, heavy eyelids, and stumbled his way to his bed. Or The chattering group silenced suddenly looked straight toward the clanging glass. This shows action rather than telling about the action. She was angry--telling. She stomped to the door, flung it open, and then slammed it shut--showing.

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Review of i miss you  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Fear can twist thinking, but sometimes it is helpful. I understand that missing someone you love can be very difficult. Grief takes time and there is a healing process made step by step. The emptiness and regret must be strong because it shows in the words of your poem.

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Review of THE COOKIE LAMENT  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I thought it might be a sweet situation to be overwhelmed by so many cookies. But too many could become a very sugary avalanche. I saw through your words a huge 18-wheeler in a driveway with workers piling mountains of boxed cookies everywhere possible. My mouth watered as I thought about peanut butter cookies.

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Review of Nekky's Story  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Phew! I could feel the prison in which this character is locked The despair, fear, and other appropriate emotions also went through me as I read these words. The crush of demands day and night loomed over me as the facts of the situation were revealed. No hope, no friends, and being completely alone must be like a living death.

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