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Review of Nekky's Story  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Phew! I could feel the prison in which this character is locked The despair, fear, and other appropriate emotions also went through me as I read these words. The crush of demands day and night loomed over me as the facts of the situation were revealed. No hope, no friends, and being completely alone must be like a living death.

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602
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I trust God. Your poem is easy to read and understand. I could visualize the ups and downs in life you wrote about. Whoever is your strengthening person or whatever works together with you, nature, other people/friends, and of course family. This is I think what your poem embodies. True we humans enjoy success

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603
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! Your poem tells a story of being united and then ripped apart because of ideals and principles. It made me feel like betrayal was on the loose without any conscience involved. The feelings that must have ripped through the person who originally believed the two of them were working for the same cause but reality showed a different situation.

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604
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed reading your vividly worded poem. The characters, actions of the scene, scene, and nature's creation of winter are easy to see and even feel. It felt as if I were there watching everything. The cold is a stark difference from the weather now. I am glad to have read your poem in July and for the cool story.

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605
Review of Made me Whole  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your words gave me a relaxed and peaceful state of being as I read your poem. I was given insight into what I hope is a marvelous and wonderful relationship. The respect and kindness you showed toward the other person is evident.

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606
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I like that you are concerned about the small business owners and appreciate the services you receive from them. Your comparison of big business vs small business is easy to understand. I'm glad you wrote about this topic because this information is important for customers and potential customers to know so that they can make an informed decision about how and where they will shop for items.

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607
Review of O Mohonk  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Visualizing the colorful beauty, tasting the scent of the flowers as I inhaled their bountiful bouquet, and listening as nature spoke to me brought this poem to life. I felt the peacefulness of this day that you showed me. Your words had a calmness to them. They were inviting and I continued to read them. Your description made this experience and place real.

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608
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (1.0)
Unfortunately, I was not able to read your story. I think it is written in a language other than English. Hopefully, you will be able to correct this issue so that people can read what you wrote.

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609
Review of Happy Haloween  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
A spooky poem with vividly shown actions through haunted and wonderful words. As the words danced the Halloween dance and worked together to show all the spooky Halloween things done, I enjoyed the song they created and sung along in my mind's eye watching the colorful events and characters.

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610
Review of Abandoned  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I could feel the despair and hurt as I read your poem. Your words gave the feeling of emptiness until the turning point of resolve and need to repair. Sad because of the surprise dumped unceremoniously. But, in the end, peace and joy because of the healing.

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Review of Wings  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Do you know who Temple Grandin is and about her accomplishments? I have a few friends who are autistic. I enjoyed your story about the wings. It is a nice way to explain a little about your situation. Hopefully, we will be able to stay in touch.

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612
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
At firat the serene setting is comforting, then the change to chilling death with some softness rocks me as I continue to reluctantly read more words telling this story. The characters, plot, and scenes are believable, but I wonder how she feels facing death, how does death feel seeing her, and what about the third character witnessing the two of them?

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Review of Overconfidence  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Overconfidence can be detrimental to any plan. I could feel the heat, see the flames, and imagine the BBQ. The characters are believable and so too is the story. I kinda doubted Hindemith would be able to escape but didn't know why or the steps before the demise of the escapee. The terrier idea was great. You set it up well. I suppose this little dog was able to morph into a huge terrier and enjoy a hot meal.

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614
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem speaks to my heart and the fibers of my being because I most of the time see delays, defeats, or other unwanted events as challenges. I can relate to trying to accomplish something and eventually needing to take a break for a short while, then starting to work on it again with vigor and determination. It seems we occasionally need to step back and take a new look at the challenge, rest, and then meet it head-on again.

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Review of The Ride  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That certainly was a creepy ride if there ever was one. I could feel the creepiness and unsure and insecure emotions as the voice said they should turn left. The characters and events are believable as far as fictional stories go and might even be something that happened in real life or some similar type of event.

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616
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
When I reached the end of your poem I felt sadness grab me and hang on tight. I was able to imagine each step of life events as I read this story. I know tragically many veterans are faced with horrible events in war and after they complete their service. It is sad that they are not helped in the way they should be or honored in the way they should be, but even with all of this still, there is a chance one or several may leave this earth prematurely.

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617
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This story is full of mystery, suspense, thrills, and fantasy. I enjoyed reading your story ideas in poetry form. It is easy to follow and I could visualize the events. I wonder how each character will feel and react to the events and also what will happen in the end.

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Review of A Game of Chess  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Chess caught my attention because I would like to learn how to play this game. I was confused at first by the beginning paragraph but then reread it and added the second paragraph to my knowledge base. I realized this is letting people know from the point of view of chess moves, how to enter contests. Having a short list of possible contests to enter is a good idea. I hope to find someone on WdC who is interested in teaching me how to play chess.

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In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
My guess is you wrote a screenplay, or is it something else? Did I follow the ending right? Did get it that Black was saved by the meat coat of armor, or am I missing something?

Your story about a fight between Blake and the lion is interesting but a bit confusing. I don't usually read screenplays and if this is such, part of the issue might be me getting used to this format.

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620
In affiliation with disABILITY WRITERS GROUP  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Me' thinks' tele anything might be a double-edged sword. But, who knows the outcome of teleportation, yet; even with this on the horizon, would probably forego entertaining such an adventure. I felt the excitement of the adventure and then the foreboding of such a thing. I trust God more than manmade things. As I read your poem I put my trust in God.

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Review of My Surprise  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The tension was thicker than the thickest rubber band waiting to snap. There certainly was enough conflict between telling or not telling and also trying to please the friend. I could visualize the characters and events that are believable. The surprise of being found out by Mom unexpectedly worked well to end the story. I wonder how the parents reacted after everyone returned to the table.

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Review of The Snake  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I imagine you are writing about a very large snake such as the anaconda for example. I happen to like snakes but respect them and am cautious. If the snake is non-venomous I let it be. If it is venomous but not going to harm me or any of my animals I let it be, but if someone or something is in danger I hope I would be able to safely relocate it to a remote place rather than kill it.

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Review of Breakups, makeups  
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
The lack of communication, the truth in the situation unspoken between them, and witnesses who do not get involved for the sake of helping create a crevasse between two people who possibly deeply care for and about each other which is sad. I could see and feel the longing and gestures of hope not yet brought to reality.

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Review of Pre-writing  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
... your brainstorming take... Did you mean take?

I appreciate your suggestions for improving writing skills and finding ways to write differently and much better. Your ideas gave me pause to reflect on what I needed to be reminded to do to improve my writing skills, to write regularly, and to have fun experimenting with different aspects of creating a story.

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members. Again, thanks for your reminders.


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Review of Time After Time  
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Sometimes waiting for the right time hinders whatever is longed for. This poem feels like the longing for the right time is never ending and therefore defeating the opportunities wished for by the person. It felt to me like more wishful thinking than acting upon what is desired although hope gives opportunity for a bright future.

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