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Review of Victim no more  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


She is abused and confused and refuses to take it any more. She has to be careful though. She must pick her escape when it's unsuspected. She needs to be able to hide or get far enough away so she isn't found. This pain is going to end one way or the other. If she stays too long it could mean tragic injury for her. Thank you for sharing

Cap your is

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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


Children, they grow so fast. They are eager to grow up and we watch with tears in our eyes. Letting them go on their own is the hardest part. All the changes and all the memories. Here we have a mother sharing her feelings as those years go by.

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It hurts to do it but i know it's time.

Thank you for sharing the love and deep felt emotion.

Yellow
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Review of Who Invited YOU?  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


It was the moment when the bride and groom went back down the isle. It's official they are married. She hoped her past would remain there and she could move on. As she walked, she briefly said goodbye to those things from before. Unfortunately, there was a very vivid reminder staring her in the face. Sometimes things don't work out like we planned. Even on a wedding day, things can suddenly fall apart.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Ode to a Candle  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


Sometimes we all need some peace. Our character starts watching a small candle and is carried away to a peaceful place inside her. She knows it is God who controls everything and the candle brings her a bit of reassurance. She looks on and begins to notice the candle beginning to dance to it's own melody. A peaceful melody that warms her weary heart. Do as our character suggests. Find your place of peace and lite that candle to show you His light of love.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Deep Ellum  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


There is a place outside of Dallas where various people go. It might be a bit unusual but it fits our character just fine. Apparently the character has been hurting people and finds it easy to hide here. All the graffiti and music and tourist gives a good cover for those activities. The piece explains that the people that live there haven't found there way yet and neither has our character. Lost and hidden in a myriad of confusion.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of The Bathhouse  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (3.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


A young woman runs away from her home town. She apparently did something. Trying to start new in a new place, she finds a part time job. The story leaves the reader to feel there is something unusual about where she works. Her apartment leaves a lot to be desired. The apartment below might be haunted. So she goes to a bathhouse to clean herself. There she finds ladies of the night, who were different than her. She is a bit frightened but stays. Then one acts strange toward her. Now, she is filled with fear and is simply waiting for the trouble to fall upon her again. She can't seem to find a way to leave trouble behind. It always seems to find her.


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Finally she the sound of a body leaning against the wall

'so, where are you from then?'

The fluresent

winter undergarments she’d wrapped in herself to get to there


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


I like this. It is full of imagination. A free spirit of enchantment. Clever story and plot. Excellent character exchange. Keeping the reader wondering what would happen next. Love pieces about rainbows anyway but this is really cute. Might just make a few more people believe in the impossible.
Thank you for sharing and reminding us all of the wonder of a childs mind.


Yellow
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Review of Danse de Vie  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


The dance of life this couple shared. There came another heart to join. A child to bless them as they danced. Soon the woman and child were gone and there was just one in the dance. They are still there is spirit and encourage our character to keep on dancing to life's tune. As long as the dance continues they will live on. This is tragic but beautifully done.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Spring Rain  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


Finding love and then loosing it is hard to deal with. For a while there is magic and your heart feels like it so full of love it will burst. Then something changes. Perhaps feelings change or death separates the couple. The world isn't the same any longer. The colors aren't vibrant any longer and the feelings seem empty.
The spring rain, that most wait eagerly for, only brings on tears.
Thank you for sharing.

Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


Our author brings us a piece about love. Look deeply in their eyes and see their soul. If you had any doubt before it will surely go. How there must be trust and faith in the other person or it won't survive. Move with love and faith. Take things as they come. Be strong together cause that is from the heavenly bond you have created.
Thank you for sharing and the wisdom in the piece.

Yellow
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Review of Margaret  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


A girl is fighting the idea 'til the end. Refusing to take part in this most disagreeable chore. She yells and pretends it makes her ill. Her mother isn't a bit impressed. The mom wins in the end. The girl grumbles but oh well. If her siblings survived then she will too.
Thanks for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


A young couple wins the lottery. The piece revolves around their parents. First they seemed shocked. Then they were mad and feeling left out because no one called them. Then they go on to say how ungrateful the couple was for all the parents have done for the. Then the admit they are a bit envious of all the money.
Finally they get a call.
This has a real feel to it. How people would actually act when presented with this type of situation.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Gift for Natalie  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


A man at work explains how it is his anniversary and how he has bought his wife of ten years some special flowers. His female co-worker are full of envy. Things seem to move smoothly as he begins to ready himself for this big night. Then things start getting weird. Then weirder. Then frightening for the lady. Apparently he has been observing her for a long time and is terrifyingly confused.
Thank you for sharing
The story came together well.
Totally unexpected ending.


Yellow
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Review of A Confession  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


When friendships or relationships end; there is usually one that can't let go. The piece suggest it is an obsession. In this piece we find that happening. Frequent calling and then hanging up is a bit annoying and disturbing to both the receiver and the caller. It is time to let go. Perhaps the receiver will change the number if it goes on much longer. Hopefully it won't take a more destructive or even dangerous path.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


Our author brings us the importance of moderators on this site. How they show us how to make improvements and encourage us. We need to feel that someone takes the time to read our work. We put our work out there and really feel good when the positives are pointed out. Especially when the meaning comes through. They tirelessly take each piece and help us make it better.
They all deserve a bit of praise but they would tell you 'just doing my job.'


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Review of The Haunted House  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


The old house was feared by those around. No one would enter because they knew the spirits dwelled there. Sure there were stories to tell but with everyone hesitant to enter; they would remain a mystery forever. The wind would blow and spirits would creep but none would reveal the secrets it keeps. Staying away is the best thing to do otherwise there might be a missing you.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of Agreed  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


A young woman visits her mother in the hospital. The mother is getting sicker and sicker. She is in more pain and on morphine. The mother asks her daughter to do something for her. The daughter is frightened and yet knows it will end her mothers suffering. The daughter cries as she holds her mother fragile hand.
This is sad and easily understandable. When a loved one is sick and in so much pain it is so hard to watch.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


He was getting ready to see his love again. They had been together for so long and he knew he must be early. He arrived to find her there waiting for him. He kissed her and said she was still as beautiful as when they married. He didn't see anything but his lovely lady. He knew he couldn't go on without her or let her go.

This is sad but reflects how some love doesn't whither away as time goes by.
Thank you for sharing.


Yellow
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Review of Author's Choice  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
I am not educated enough to do what the other reviewers do.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful in that a person read your work and expressed an opinion.


Our author explains how writers are different as well as their work. Some will find inspiration in various ways. Some will write about experiences or nature. Whatever they choose it is because something strikes a chord inside. We all start with a blank piece or paper and soon the words begin to flow. Just like a painter beginning with a blank canvas. Just as the piece suggest, we all give it our best. Some creations are rough and others are perfect but still filled with emotions and substantial time invested.


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Review of My Dreams  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


Dealing with the loneliness is becoming harder and harder. She is gone and has been for a while. The years are passing but his love for her is still there. She left and hasn't come back but there is a longing that can't be ignored. As a blessing of sorts; in his dreams he can still share time with her. When he wakes the tears return. Who knows, maybe this piece will reach her and soften her heart. Second chances do happen sometimes. This is sad and heartfelt.
Thank you for sharing.
Like the font color as well.


Yellow
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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


There is a good message inside this piece. The treasure is inside of us. Also there is a great big world out there waiting. Don't set your sights on one thing but look for different things to make your life complete. Staying inside a box might seem safe but living outside that box broadens your horizons and strengthens your soul. I like this piece very much.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


Our author tells us to beware of the moors at night and the blarney there. The little green guys like to play tricks on those that venture out. They dance and play music but are ever vigilant about their gold. They are up to no good and crafty too. Don't even think you can outwit one or capture one. So as we see from this piece, don't underestimate these little guys. Font is perfect.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of AND GOD SAID -  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


Our author doesn't feel she is ready yet to move on to her heavenly home. She says no several time. She thinks she hasn't done all she could do for her family. God knows what is best. He needs her now. She looks back as she begins to ascend but then realizes this is her time. She took his hand and walked on. She tells God she doesn't miss her earthly home but welcomes His light. The piece is a good reminder that He is in charge or our life from our very first breath and knows what is best for us.
Thank you for sharing this piece with others.

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Review of If I Could  
Review by Yellow Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


Sometime in life we find ourselves at a loss for words. We have things we want to say to the one we love but we feel it just isn't good enough. Those same words might have been going around inside you head for days or weeks. The right time comes and yet they are held at bay. We might write them down and still they don't seem to capture what we feel. Love is hard to explain and sometimes words aren't needed. Just the look in the eyes tells so much. This is a pretty piece. Very emotional and totally full of loving feeling for another.
Good job with this.
Thank you for sharing.


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Review of "Stuck"  
Review by Yellow Rose
In affiliation with Sisco's Good Deed Group  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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I am merely a reader.
I will not dissect your work.
I will tell if emotions surfaced.
Hopefully you will find my review helpful.


We have a writer frustrated and the cursor is just adding to the situation. Blinking and blinking just waiting to be of some use. After a while, the writer understands why the cursor is such a pain in the fanny. It wants to write as much as the writer. After all, the cursor feels as if it is an extension of the writing process. Finally the author sees that.
So blink away and make his day.


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