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I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is your February entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

A man keeps having strange dreams at night. One where he hears a train, and a woman calling for someone. One has to wonder who the woman is, some ghost perhaps, or something else all together.

Characters
Very interesting, but there could be some clarification as to what was going on with the three men with shovels.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Down at the Inn  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your February Entry to my Medieval contest, "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

This is an interesting item. It's basically a retelling of the movie Psycho. People enter a strange inn, and disappear, including a woman with 40,000 in gold of the King's money. Eventually, an official, and the woman's lover, and her sister, decide to check the place out.

Characters
Very interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of THE MARCH  
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Well, this is an interesting little item to find in a Random Review. It seems to be about the messengers of the Future and Hope. Of course, I wonder if there's actually hope here in this poem, as it talks about people being blind, and that there seems to be bloodshed of some sort. One has to wonder.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Well, this is an interesting item to find with the Random Review thing. At first glance, it seems like a rant about ones' thoughts and feelings about some Japanese anime. However, on second glance, it looks more like some issues with other things, like family and religion. I have to wonder what's the point of this- I mean, sometimes there's topics that confuse me, and I'll admit that I go off on tangents at times, but by and large, I try to stay on topic.

Topic
I think that you need to make the subject clear; Is this piece about a show, your wife, or church?

Spelling and Grammar
You have plenty of lowercase "i"s that need to be capitalized.

Suggestions
You might want to make this 13+, as you have some mild swearing.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is your First of Five reviews that you won for your participation in "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

This is a nice poem. It seems that when it comes to writing, things are much like a hunt- one has to track down the subject, research it, and finally, take care of it, but the question is how.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
First up, I'd like to congratulate you on being the first person to enter my contest, "Invalid Item" . Enjoy your review, and may you have some competition in a future round.

A knight is watching over a bunch of sheep, clay ones enchanted with Jewish magic, and wishes that he had flesh and blood ones- but real animals have been hard to come by since a sickness killed many. He then hear about some golems that managed to escape from the salt mines, and the reward on them is enough to buy some real sheep.

However, as he tracks them down, he starts to uncover some unsettling truths, including the fact that he himself might be a golem as well.

Character
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Comparisons with Original
A nice retelling of Blade Runner, as well as the story it was based off of.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Fifth and Final review for your participation in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

When a large snake is stolen, a woman tries to find out who did the deed, even when people believe that the snake had escaped or that the owner was trying to collect insurance money. Will she be able to track down this cold-blooded reptile, or will she wind up as snake food?

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
In the last line, you might want to make "Reader" "Readers".

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Second of Five reviews for your participation in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

Canned hunting is something that just angers me. I come from a long line of farmers, and hunters, who have to work for a living just to put food on the table. As it is, filling out deer tags and bagging a good sized deer to get a hundred pounds of venison tends to be cheaper than buying a hundred pounds of beef, and if you get a good sized buck, you've got a trophy to go with the hunt.

Now, I could understand if one was a farmer in Africa or Asia and the lion/tiger was threatening the livestock/village- one has a right to protect their family/livelihood- but to just get some old creature from the zoo and kill it, that's just like murder.

Spelling and Grammar
You have some areas that need capital letters and spacing between words.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your First of Five Reviews for your participation in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

Well, this sure is interesting. This is from when you was an animal control officer back in 1986, and you had to respond to a call involving a gator blocking up traffic. By the sounds of things, you were sure crazy in how you apprehended the 20-foot gator with little more than a long stick and a length of rope. *Laugh* *Bigsmile*

Characters
Sounds like those boys sure don't like critters.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some areas that need capital letters.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Third of Four reviews gifted to you for your friend's participation in "Invalid Item" . Enjoy.

This in a nice folder you have, which contains the images that you're using for your C-Note shop- it's always nice to be able to give things. Very nice to look at.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to post a link to your shop here- it would make things easier for potential buyers.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting review forum. One can come here and post requests for items, without the worry of limitations or restrictions, and the owner of the forum will come an give the item/items a review. Highly useful for many situations, like when you have multiple GC items.

Originality
This is the first forum I've seen like this.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

I hope you do plenty of reviews.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of My First Deer  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Some of those first experiences can be the most entertaining. You're talking about your first successful deer hunt- sounds like it was a difficult one. You actually had to chase a deer, but more importantly, you finally got it when you used an old stand that your brother had made some years previously. Sounds like you had a good time.

Characters
Those deer are always tricky.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Round Room  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" . Enjoy your review.

This is an interesting story. You have a woman who was captured by a group of vampires for some reason. One tells her to fight, when his master comes for her. Very interesting take on the whole vampire thing.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
One of your "Warren"s needs to be capitalized. Also, you might want some space between paragraphs.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Paralysis  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is your entry to my contest, "Invalid Item" . Enjoy your review.

This is an interesting story. You have a young man who is afraid of spiders. When he kills one, they want revenge, and they come after him, and do things that spiders normally don't do. Spooky.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is an interesting contest. Write a letter to some serviceman/woman, who is still serving overseas, so that they know that someone cares about them. Sometimes those people need presents more than anyone else- they risk their lives for us, and may not come home.

Originality
I haven't seeing any other contests like this, but it's good to help out.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your contest

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of November 7, 2012  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your thoughts on the Election. Sometimes there are topics that we prefer to avoid- politics being one of them. Sometimes there is a person that we want to win. Other times, we don't know who we want to win. Making a choice isn't easy at times, as there tends to be plenty of mud in the waters.

Originality
It's interesting to learn about peoples' thoughts on politics. Haven't seen anything else about the election.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Bible  
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is an interesting poem about your feelings on the Bible. Sometimes we read something, but we still don't get the meaning, even after we've read it a dozen or more times. Sometimes we don't read something, but we know the meaning. There are lots of things that we don't know about.

Thoughts
It's interesting to learn a person's take on one of the most important books in History.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to center the poem- might make it look better.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of RickysGranny  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting signature you have. It seems to have been made for someone that you cared about- be it a friend through the site, or a friend in real life. You made this to try and describe them. From what I can see, this person must have had a fiery attitude, one way or another.

Colors
Nicely Done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar, providing that the person's user name is correct.

Suggestions
You might want to list if the person has a new account/changed their username, or when the person left the site.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of catwoman  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a nice signature for your mother, catwoman . Sometimes it's the little things that are worth the most- a simple image can convey a great deal of love, far beyond even expensive jewels, especially when it is made by ones own self. Nicely done.

Color
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Mystic Meadows  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a nice poem. It reminded me a bit of a poem I wrote regarding imagination. Sometimes the mind takes us to places we want to go, where dragons fly, and mermaids swim. Sometimes though, one has to enjoy the pleasures that we do have, such as being in the presence of family.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Milkman  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a nice signature that you have for your friend, The Milkman . You have some very nice coloration here, along with images that would be perfect for a farmer, such as barns, cattle, chickens, and grain fields. very nice to look at.

Colors
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another signiture image
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a very nice signature for your husband during the month of Halloween. It's a slight play on a few things- He's the Story Master, but this claims him to be the Scary Master, and has his initials, SM. *Bigsmile*. One always has to find a special item for that special someone.

Color
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is a cute little image, of a cat sitting on a few books, and your handle right next to it. Very nice, as it tells who you are, and some of the things that might be important to you, such as the books and the cat. Always good to show what you like.

Colors
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another signiture image
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a cute little image- sort of. *Bigsmile* It is for the month of October and shows the lovely SMs as a witch. We all have those disguises for that month- some fit, others don't. Of course, they are always interesting to find out about.

Color
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with either spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another signiture image
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a nice looking image. It is for RAOK, a group that specializes in helping people out, especially by giving them Upgraded Memberships to those who ask for some help. A very helpful group, and this is an image that clearly identifies who they are.

Colors
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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