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Review Style
I'll give a quick summary of your item. Afterwards, I'll talk about your characters, any Spelling or Grammar issues, and perhaps suggest some things, like adding the item to a Genre that it would fit into.
I'm good at...
Speed Reading/reviewing- 1000 word story won't even take me five minutes to read, and you'll get a review within 10 minutes of me reading it. As it is, my reviews are usually around 300 Characters- minus my Review Sig. However, sometimes they'll reach the 1,000 Character mark. Depends on the Story/item. *Bigsmile*
Favorite Genres
Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Animal
Least Favorite Genres
Can't think of any I don't like.
Favorite Item Types
I like them all.
Least Favorite Item Types
I've yet to not like any item types. Of course, images can be tricky- hard to correct Spelling and Grammar on those. *Bigsmile*
I will not review...
Interactives that don't have an actual story started - Give me some meat to eat there before you ask me to look at it, with at least one thread being at least 10 chapters long, and not just choices that aren't even developed, preferably written by your own hand. Books - well, not through a Review Request page anyways, as I'd would have to review the book itself and not the Chapter, in order to get paid, but I will review them if you ask me in an email. Anything that doesn't allow reviews. *Bigsmile*
Public Reviews
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Review of The Plug Page  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is a nice little item. It is the logo for the Shameless Plug, which is a place where people can show off new items, and get reviews on them, or just show off things that seem to fit the occasion, or need a second opinion. Always a load of fun to find.

Colors
Nicely done.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
I think you might want to post an updated link to the Shameless Plug. The one you have is a little dated. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well, this is a useful little item to have. It is the logo for the Contests In-and-Out page- always a fun little place to go to when you want to challenge yourself, and perhaps win a prize for your hard work. This is well done, and does the site proud.

Colors
Nicely done. I don't see any clashing.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
I think you should post an updated link to the Contest page. The one you have here is slightly outdated. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a poll asking about Semicolons; are they obsolete, or are they still useful? To be honest, there are times that I have trouble with the darn things. But, there are times, like when I'm writing something of a list, that putting one of them down just feels right. So, I think they are still useful- as it is, I used one in this review.

Originality
Haven't seen one about the Semicolon.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Awardicons Survey  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a survey that asks the question about Awardicons, as to whether or not there is a problem with them.

In some instances, I think there is a problem, like when friends just give each other one. In other instances, I don't really think there is an issue. Most items tend to have earned the awardicon they get, such as when a good item manages to win a contest- though if there is a small sample, it can be an issue. Sometimes it's part of in auction package- in that case, the donor can search the person's portfolio for the item they like the most, or feel is the best. It all depends on the situation.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Two Ordinary Men  
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is your Second of Five Reviews bought by TarynSloane ~ Writing from "Invalid Item"  for your participation in "A Dozen Delights Auction" . Enjoy.

Two men fight for the British during WW2 in very different positions. One is part of the Royal Air Force, as a glider pilot. The other is part of a top secret section of the SAS- the Special Boat Squadron. One is mentioned for bravery in the homefront newspapers. The other is never mentioned. Sometime after the war, they meet up when the one's child marries the other's grandchild. They become friends as a result, as they have similar experiences.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (5.0)
This looks like a fun little Auction that's sprung up for the 12th birthday for the Site. Let's see what we have- badges, Awardicons, review packages, and more- all in a series of twelve- each package having at least twelve items in it. Talk about a great deal of fun.

Originality
Lots of auctions. Always fun.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Best of luck with your auction. Hope you made plenty.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Naked Pony Anthro  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
This looks like the start of an interesting interactive. In a world where women severely outnumber men, there are often three wives to each man, and it seems that straight women are non-existent. Also, the women have special abilities, in that they can swallow others. Talk about trouble.

Characters
In the sections where there are stories, they look interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
You might want to work on the additions, especially those where others have added their own pages. They all need some work.

Suggestions
You might want to bump the rating up to GC- it reads a little above 18+ in my opinion. Better safe than sorry.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Well, this is a nice item for those who are reviewing for a group. It shows people how to make their own reviewing template, which will bring attention to them, and whatever group that they are part of- potentially bringing in more review requests, or even members for the group.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E
Well, this is a very useful item. It explains the process of making a review, and what all of the different parts of the review box means. If someone is new to creating reviews, they will find this to be highly useful in their search for advice on how to do them.

Originality
I've seen many things for reviewing, but not on how to make one.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Fighting Myself  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Review for participating in my Auction, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed"  by donating a package/Gift Points. Enjoy.

You have a girl on her way to see her friends, after she's heard some news. When she leaves, her friends wonder what's really going on in her life.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
Double Spacing your paragraphs isn't needed, in the way that you have it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of OUT AT SIXTY  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
This is your review for donating a package/Gift Points to "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

This is about your own personal life as a lesbian, and how you were sixty before you actually told anyone. However, you still had a rough life, as you had feelings towards other women, but you couldn't properly express your feelings. Also, you were afraid for your safety, in more ways than one. Things can be rough.

Characters
As a young man with high-functioning Autism, I can relate to your life- people just see that you're different and they make your life hell.

Spelling and Grammar
There are some areas that could use some polishing, like the section about your daydreams as a youth.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Spring Sprang  
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Rated: ASR | (1.0)
This is your Second and Final review for participating in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed"  by donating a package or gift points. Enjoy.

Well, this is cute. This is actually a series of three haikus involving Spring and all of the other seasons, as Spring likes to spring its way around them, and cause a great deal of trouble. Very funny.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Since this was a contest entry to an old contest, you might want to have this listed as Contest Entry instead of Contest.

Other
Normally I'd give this 4.5 or 5.0 *Star*s, but given the rules of the contest it was in, it's getting 1.0 *Star*s. *Bigsmile*

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Bad Roses  
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Rated: ASR | (1.0)
This is your First of Two reviews for your participation in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed"  by donating a package or Gift Points. Enjoy.

Well, this is a funny little poem. A man tries to get a rose for his love, but ends up pricking his finger on a thorn. Now he wonders why he got it, as chocolate might have been better.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
Since this was an entry to an old contest, you might want to list this under Contest Entry, instead of Contest.

Other
Normally I would have given you a 4.5, or 5.0 *Star*, but given the rules of the contest it was in, I'll give you a 1 *Star*.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The challenge  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your Second of Five reviews for winning a package in "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" . Enjoy.

You have some teenagers at the movies on their first date. The young man is trying to hold the girl's hand, but he seems to be uneasy about actually doing it. I wonder how things will work out.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to put this under the categories of Young Adult, Love/Romance, and/or Friendship.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Protectorate  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is your First of Five reviews for winning a package from, "Save My Membership Auction - Closed" .

A couple of decades after a nuclear war has devastated the world, and one decade after a time travel contraption was made, a man has to go back in time to stop the man who will cause the trigger to be pulled. However, it seems that this person has a personal importance to the time-traveler.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Ambassador  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting little item. An ambassador reports to his king after he has completed a very risky mission. It seems that there is a very dangerous enemy threatening the kingdom, and the only way to placate him is to give him a large amount of money.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Suggestions
You might want to make it clear about what the enemy is, in case someone hasn't read the others in the series.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Teenage Mind  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is your entry to "Invalid Item" , where one has to write a story about an optimistic future- and is a contest that I'm one of the judges of.

Well, it seems that the more things change, the more things stay the same. You have some teenage boy having to deal with a rival at high school, one that likes to make fun of his old-fashioned name. I guess it happens in every century.

Characters
Interesting- typical teenagers.

Spelling and Grammar
When the boy gets the party note, one of the notes is actually a "not".

Suggestions
You might want to date this- I know that Global Warming caused massive flooding, and teachers have access to online social media, but is this 2050 or 2150?

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Snow Melt  
for entry "July’s Best Prompt" 
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This your response to what you think the best prompt for the July Blogging contest was.

You liked the Prompt that dealt with the best gift. Sometimes we don't realize that simple things are often the best. We need to open our eyes and take a look around, and smile during the good times.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Sound  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. After moving into a new apartment, a college graduate tries to live on his own. However, it seems that the place is haunted with something, as he keeps on hearing a strange noise, and he tries to find the origin of it.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of The Promise  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. A young girl from a fairly well-off family watches as her father's bank closes, and hardships come to her family, with meals going from fancy, to basic. Her father then hears that they've been selected for relocation, but finds something else awaiting them.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. While vacationing in China, a newly-wedded French couple find themselves trapped in a hotel during an earthquake, with the wife becoming severely injured. Now the husband has to find a way to protect them from something worse than the earthquake.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Review of Chipmunk Nuts  
In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a cute poem. A man goes to a group, where people have to try and keep check of their delusions, in his case, a "pet chipmunk". However, it isn't easy, as the "chipmunk" has been with him for a long time, and he seems to care about it. However, he wants help.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Oh this is a good and funny story. A man stuck at a quilt-making seminar tries to entertain himself by counting the number of dots on a piece of ceiling tile. Eventually, he falls asleep, with some drool coming out his mouth, and begins to tip over. Soon husbands start betting on which will hit the ground first- him or the drool.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is an interesting story. A man falls for a woman with no memory. A year later, she is abducted in a mysterious manner. He finds out that she is to be a sacrifice to a demon, and resolves to go find and free her from its clutches. However, the journey is treacherous, and far from easy.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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In affiliation with Non-Humans R Us  
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Well, this is an interesting story. A man enters a contest, and ends up winning the prize. However, it seems that the prize is as far from a million dollars as one could get. This person seems to have become a captive on an island, and soldiers are watching out for certain things.

Characters
Interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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